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..and after two hundred hours of grinding whatnot, some dude moves into the house and screws your LIs in five minutes.
The end.
The end.
You made me choke on my food dude. Not cool. That perfectly describes the last game though...and after two hundred hours of grinding whatnot, some dude moves into the house and screws your LIs in five minutes.
The end.
tag was female and that is why is write no thanx !
I think the model used for the MC screams beta male loser enough that the tag is not needed. I don't know about other people but whenever I saw the MC from FOTM I got the irresistible urge to give him a wedgie, steal his lunch money and throw him in a locker, that might just be me though.Beta male should be a tag to add to this dev games.
Sorry but there are some errors thereIt's new, here is my first impression:
Things I like:
-The Blond haired girl with glasses is cute.
-It's got a phone thingy you can click on to see relationship stats and such and that is convenient
Things I dislike:
-The game has the name "Jen's Dilemma", and is labeled as a "Female Protagonist" game... Why on earth am I controlling a MALE CHARACTER!? I got nothing wrong with a male protagonist, but was expecting and hoping for a female protagonist namely the blonde, but whatever.
-It did the old "Stealth Sandbox" & is an "Empty Sandbox". Stealth sandbox is a technique where the game starts out like it's a visual novel. You play it for a few minutes and get into the visual novel, then all of the sudden nope, it's a sandbox. When a game is not tagged as sandbox this is off-putting. An Empty Sandbox is a sandbox lacking in content. go study or relax or watch tv to waste time but no real content there. With how much grind annoyed players of his last game I was hoping this dev would make a VN instead.
-Bad writing. Incorrect grammar, some spelling errors, and bad punctuation aside the story is not very compelling and doesn't really make much sense. I'll give two examples of what I mean by this.
example 1: Jenn takes her kids, and flees the home from her husband for a month because he ordered take-out food again. That's all he did. It's also mentioned he is the sole breadwinner. So shouldn't she be cooking? This makes her a very unlikeable character. It would be very easy to write it in a better way than that. To run away with the kids for a month you need a better reason than he ordered fucking take-out! The first thing that comes to my mind is "He banged his secretary!" A much better reason to run away for a month. God forbid someone gets laid in an adult game. Okay, if that is not a good reason let's find another. He is abusive in some way? Don't want to make him a cheater or abusive... Alright, let's try another. He has a drug or alcohol problem... Oh... Don't want him a cheater, a drunk, or an abuser... What other reason could she be gone a month. He forgot their anniversary or her birthday, anything really.
example 2: She asks her friend a question a toddler may ask. "Is the company you work for big?" A more reasonable question would be "Is your company hiring?" It doesn't come off as realistic dialogue at all.
TL;DR I was expecting it to be a pleasant change from the devs last game, but same problems in this one as last one.
The game will feature Melinda, in a "madam" or " brothel keeper" role (Open for suggestions from you guys. I may post a poll about it later, we have time as she won't appear in demo and first version)
It's not a walkthrough, but I hope these be of some help.like on foot of the mountain this game needs a walkthrough so it wont be so grindy can someone help? thanks
I think you hit the nail on the head when talking about this game. I don't get how someone that already has two complete games under his belt and has been making them for years now, has not improved any of his skills and his games still have most of the same issues they did four years ago.I kind of can't believe SNC put this little effort into this. It's been three years since Foot of the Mountains, and this looks like a step backwards in every way. The story is inane, the characters are blank slates with no motivation, and the models aren't worth the grind the developer clearly has planned. From a technical standpoint the renders are grainy and poorly lit, the models are hastily posed, and the environment is a small lifeless apartment.
It's semantics as to who actually dials the phone and places the order because ultimately he is paying for it either way. You are right that a 3rd party did say something along the lines of she is a gold digger before that.Sorry but there are some errors there
" he ordered take-out food again. " in fact He was complaining that *she* had ordered take out Again !.
In the dialogue that has been stress between them for over a week.
Also there are indications that he has been played by someone at work,
Someone who is trying or who has poisoned the relationship between Jen and Him.
Quote "She's a Gold digger", " Look where she comes from".
The reason that she has gone away for a month could be a simply as that they are BOTH victims of that toxic third person.