In my comment I definitely don't meant renders like from Elena's Life which are way below a certain standard. Also story wise it's bad. So you took another extreme to argument against my posting which didn't meant low quality render/story. There are examples where the output of renders and story telling is an argument, look at my signature with Project Sage Act1. Or take DmD, Melody. Every month a high quality output in both story and renders.
I liked the original Project Sage more. What can I say? I like lots of fun!
Sure, there was a lot of fun very fast, but I imagine most of the readers around these parts aren't looking for poetry. Yeah, it's nice to have a good story, but stringing things along rarely works.
This story (JOHN) is well written, yet dialog is a bit extensive. Like this installment had a bunch a dialog and not only with Jessica and her gorgeous sister Laura, but yet we add another beautiful mother, Sara. The story keeps adding gorgeous gals that you seem only able to dream about. This is what makes things difficult I believe.
The quality of the models, poses and animations is very good. Sadly, the reading/action ratio might be a bit unbalanced. Just my own opinion, no offense whatsoever.
I think I like most of the characters here, I might have posted this before, except for Connor. Nice guy, just boring. The boss, the news stand friend, the boy that worked at the workplace, all so much more interesting than poor Connor.
I think even from where things are going so far, even if not intentional by the author, Jessica's interests start to go elsewhere. She's losing interest in him even if a bite at a time.
Good story and nice work overall. I think the only reason anyone might complain is because they "do" like the story and characters and content, they just want more of it.
The author probably knows what they are doing and maybe has a very specific outline planned. Good luck to ya. Just tossing my two cents worth.