I'm glad for the sex scene between Heather and Jessica in the shower. I mentioned two updates before that I wanted a scene in the shower between them after doing exercise, I don't know if
stoper listened my petition or it was just coincidence, but I enjoyed it a lot.
Jessica's look was stunning in this update, you get excited just looking at her. The scene with the boy in the bathroom was exciting, very good executed. Regarding the Connor scenes, the animation in the car was very good, fluent and without imperfections, but I felt that the scene was too short. Maybe the old woman interruping broke the momentum a bit for me.
I really like this VN, is one of my favorites, I appreciate the effort in writing an interesting story with well written dialogs. In many other VNs I skip the dialogs, I go directly to the lewd scenes and I don't give feedback there, I usually only write critics in VNs well written. Still, I'm going to say somenthing that maybe the most of the fans don't dare to say: the characters in this VN tend to be superficial and unidimensional. We don't know too much about their personalities, backgrounds, stories, conflicts, dreams, doubts, insecurities, etc. The conversations between characters aren't memorable, nor profund, they are very trivial. There are almost no subplots neither. So, we don't get attached to them. If you read the comments here nobody says something about the characteres, besides Jessica, relative to their personalities or the way they think. Sometimes you read here that Blake, Eve or Rosa are hot and that's all about them. Even Heather is very unidimensional, we know that she is very liberal regarding sex and relationships and nothing more, it seems a character without conflict, she does what she wants and there are no obstacles, nothing that she needs to achieve or surpass in her life.
Certain situations and stories of them could generate a feeling of empathy or a connection with the player, knowing more about their virtues and flaws, the things that make them singular, different than the others, which one is the analytic, which one is audacious, insecure, intrepid, thoughtful, solitary, etc. And it's not only tell us about that but the way you tell it, through particular moments, places and situations where they express themselves as they really are.