Mayor's scene and dialogues were good. Curious and excited for the next update. Also, the biggest shortcoming I saw in the update was that it was not Mr. Parker. Even if there was at least a teasing scene it would be better than nothing. The dialogues between Mr. Parker and Jessica are exciting.
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great update,loved every minute of it,too bad there weren't any Blake content but still hot as hell and loving Jess not turning into a bimbo and just fucks anything that moves on two legs,great work as always stoper
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I loved the update and the animations blew me away. The attention to detail and subtle movements were fantastic. The subtle hair, body and earring movements in all animations. Just that the water was moving slightly in the Conner scene. The mayor scene was amazing with the little squeeze of the breast and the fabric. You really got yourself some great animations here, these would really compare to mid-tier and slightly higher NSFW animators. Of course the best in that business are on a whole other level but these are amazing all on their own, not just in the sense of what usually pops up in other VNs.
I feel these changes would be adequate in conveying the message. Although something which would be even hotter, but would require more renders, would be to explain Jessica's opportunity for escape by having the Mayor struggling to get his dick out. This would make the, currently, final render of Jessica walking away even hotter if he holds his dick in his hand to truly convey how close it actually was. Jessica doesn't need to see the dick, if the worry is that it would tempt her, she just has to use the time he spends on getting it out to escape. This would also further explain why the Mayor definitely wouldn't just run after her, since his dick is out.
Just my thoughts, thanks for reading and have a great day!
This is definitely needed, I understood the principle but you need to clarify it. I would say optimally you'd need an additional render showing her slip away. At the moment we go from a completely knackered, almost sleeping, Jessica to suddenly finding her halfway across the room. I also feel like we need some more insight into her thoughts to let us know she is backing away. Currently I feel like the "Uh-oh. This might not be over just yet." tells a completely different story if it's all on its own like it is now. There is nothing there that tells me she is getting her mind back on track. In fact in conjunction with the previous lines, even post climax, I feel it could be interpreted as being more positive towards further depravity.
I feel these changes would be adequate in conveying the message. Although something which would be even hotter, but would require more renders, would be to explain Jessica's opportunity for escape by having the Mayor struggling to get his dick out. This would make the, currently, final render of Jessica walking away even hotter if he holds his dick in his hand to truly convey how close it actually was. Jessica doesn't need to see the dick, if the worry is that it would tempt her, she just has to use the time he spends on getting it out to escape. This would also further explain why the Mayor definitely wouldn't just run after her, since his dick is out.
Just my thoughts, thanks for reading and have a great day!
No one can doubt that stoper work quality is one of the best , but I want to highlight some of the important things that are been mentioned in the last hours .
-You talked about the best strategy , I think the best one is to focus more on the most demanding aspects in the game , where 99% of the supporters want more action with other men , but we have for two years 90% of the scenes are with connor , I'm not demanding to forget about the minority but at least some balance .
-I'm with slow pace , it makes the story more realistic , but slow pace with slow updates it's like a nightmare for me , devs with slow pace only, are not the best on the list(profit , number of supporters..) , the best ones are who balance between updates , content and time , I'm not going to mention them , but everyone knows them in the last 5 years you can find one or two slow pace games but they are not top five in profit etc ( of course if you want to be on the top) .
-This update can be one the best if it was done in 3 months and I'm very confident that you can do that if you manage your time more efficiently , I don't evaluate every update on it's own , I see the game as a whole project (progression of the story , updates.. )
-I think there is uncertainty with the development of the project as a whole , we don't know now if we're going to get something in the next year and everything is not scheduled ,You're working on many projects and this is making time development time shorter , you lose your focus and time when you change between them every period , why not complete one at first ( and maybe work on the story of the other one in the meantime ) , I suggest also that you add at least a chart of your development progression with the two projects (like most of the devs) , it will decrease the hate of some people, the uncertainty and you will manage time better .
I really want to support you again , even for 10 years , but with this uncertainty and shallowness , I'm watching and waiting for some changes and improvement , I'm not like forcing you to do that but I think it's better for you , the project and the supporters , and remember that a critical supporter is better than a praiser , keep up the good work .
-You talked about the best strategy , I think the best one is to focus more on the most demanding aspects in the game , where 99% of the supporters want more action with other men , but we have for two years 90% of the scenes are with connor , I'm not demanding to forget about the minority but at least some balance .
-I'm with slow pace , it makes the story more realistic , but slow pace with slow updates it's like a nightmare for me , devs with slow pace only, are not the best on the list(profit , number of supporters..) , the best ones are who balance between updates , content and time , I'm not going to mention them , but everyone knows them in the last 5 years you can find one or two slow pace games but they are not top five in profit etc ( of course if you want to be on the top) .
-This update can be one the best if it was done in 3 months and I'm very confident that you can do that if you manage your time more efficiently , I don't evaluate every update on it's own , I see the game as a whole project (progression of the story , updates.. )
-I think there is uncertainty with the development of the project as a whole , we don't know now if we're going to get something in the next year and everything is not scheduled ,You're working on many projects and this is making time development time shorter , you lose your focus and time when you change between them every period , why not complete one at first ( and maybe work on the story of the other one in the meantime ) , I suggest also that you add at least a chart of your development progression with the two projects (like most of the devs) , it will decrease the hate of some people, the uncertainty and you will manage time better .
I really want to support you again , even for 10 years , but with this uncertainty and shallowness , I'm watching and waiting for some changes and improvement , I'm not like forcing you to do that but I think it's better for you , the project and the supporters , and remember that a critical supporter is better than a praiser , keep up the good work .
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Android doesn't work it's not even installing the game...
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I was thinking of doing something similar, but ended up scrapping it. If I decide to add something bigger at the end of the event, I may change it a bit. But I just close it with the ending of the day that initially planed, I'll just try to clarify her state of mind with the text.
Pray tell, what exactly did I do to look so high and mighty to you?
And what possible proof could I show you, and that you world accept, of how much I've worked on the update?
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stoper, congrats on finally having the update released. 
I can imagine how stressful the entire situation must have been for you delays after delays and reading all the crappy post from entitled freeleechers on a pirate forum.
Now that the update is out, and you looking back on the development, what do you think went wrong during production?
Were it the animations? Did you underestimated the render time for it? Or were you unhappy with the result of the overall first draft of the update?
I can imagine how stressful the entire situation must have been for you delays after delays and reading all the crappy post from entitled freeleechers on a pirate forum.Now that the update is out, and you looking back on the development, what do you think went wrong during production?
Were it the animations? Did you underestimated the render time for it? Or were you unhappy with the result of the overall first draft of the update?
stoper
Since pretty much every picture of this game is a work of art I wonder if it might ALSO be smart to try publishing it as a webcomic which would then allow each picture (or a frame of a few pictures) to be released when done and with the corresponding plot. That way we could see roughly weekly webcomic releases rather than twice a year game releases. Those that want to play the game rather than just read can wait for enough comic pictures to be released to fill a release. Also, the gamers will not be able to complain about release date "lies" since all the pictures are already released as webcomics.
Since pretty much every picture of this game is a work of art I wonder if it might ALSO be smart to try publishing it as a webcomic which would then allow each picture (or a frame of a few pictures) to be released when done and with the corresponding plot. That way we could see roughly weekly webcomic releases rather than twice a year game releases. Those that want to play the game rather than just read can wait for enough comic pictures to be released to fill a release. Also, the gamers will not be able to complain about release date "lies" since all the pictures are already released as webcomics.
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Update was alright, but at the same time when i play these games that take so much time between updates i just think in my head that it will take like few years to develop and finish all stories and characters introduced.
Threesome scene was nice, but it's another connor scene really i would take another little teasing scenes over that one anytime.
Threesome scene was nice, but it's another connor scene really i would take another little teasing scenes over that one anytime.
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Are any of the scenes different if you keep turning connor down? Does Jessica see him with anyone else?
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Are you sure you can count?It's 30 months since the debut of the game.That is not even 3 full years,let alone 4.
Some spanking from principal for sure.
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