Maybe it's just me who's interested (though I doubt it) but I'd like to see more of this type of game address whether and what kind of contraception is used.
Jessica has sex with her boyfriend several times and he comes inside her.
Is she on the pill? Has he had a vasectomy? Are the days safe? Other forms of contraception?
Unfortunately, this isn't mentioned once.
In the threesome with Heather, no one asks if she's on the pill, or if maybe he'd be better off using a condom.
Or asking him to pull out would have been quite appropriate.
It's extremely easy to work something like that into the story.
It only takes one or two lines of text.
Maybe Jessica just thinks (while she's brushing her teeth in the morning) that she still has to go to the pharmacy because her birth control is running out.
That way you know she's on the pill.... And you'd have a possible path where she might not have time to go to the pharmacy
Or maybe she's talking to Heather about birth control, post-threesome.
After all, Connor had unprotected sex with her.
That's a good time to ask about birth control, isn't it? (would have been better to ask up front of course, but... well)
I'd be interested to know if my friend could possibly get her pregnant.
For me personally it's a real turn on to know if the ladies are protected or not. (more of course if they are not).
The risk and knowledge that she could possibly get pregnant is sher erotic.
It's not even that it has to happen, but just mentioning it and "playing" with the risk or fear of it in the story is hot.
It may not be everyone's fetish, but you could appeal to a wider audience with very little effort.
And it´s way more realistic, I think.
Just my two cents...