- Oct 13, 2020
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Great work so far, looking forward to more Jessica and the Mayor in the next few updates
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- Jul 17, 2019
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this time I have no idea, nothing has leaked.
the new update should contain the end of day 13 (Saturday) and perhaps all day 14 (Sunday)
jessica won't be at work, so no tommy and larp.
maybe there could be the event with Blake or quakcoa with Heather.
with mr parke it was recent so I don't think there is another event.
with Rosa perhaps ?
This time I don't know what to bet
- Nov 14, 2020
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I would expect larp to happen at weekends. I doubt there would be enough time for it for evenings.
If you are referring to Jess telling Tommy that she would see him Monday, I presumed that was simply back in the office.
I don't remember a date for larp being mentioned - maybe Tommy has yet to tell Jessica the date of the larp event?
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- Oct 25, 2020
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If I remeber well they will go to a wedding next week-end. If they go only for one day then the larp could fit in. It should only be an afternoon event I presume.
Jess and Blake have an agreement to go to club sometimes. Then Jess promises to call Blake, but she didn't. In next meeting between them Jess makes another promise to call Blake on Saturday. So when she goes home after Parker's event, she must call Blake and (I hope so) go out with her in some nightclub.
Sunday - Rosa will bring hers children (or child) somewhere and invite Jess with her. That will be the first half of the day. The evening is for Heather - dinner in her place.
Jessica and Blake in nightclub will be hot as hell. Guys, alcohol, drugs (why not), dancing, grinding, groping... so much possibilities.
The forthcomming week - work with Tommy, Mr. Burch must call her to talk about somethink (after last meeting this must be an interesting event), after Tuesday (or on Tuesday) she must recieved a phone call from Senator Harris to appoint a meeting and (the most exciting) Connor must be going to a bachelor party. I hope that Jessica will listening Eve and secretly will visit the party...
Sunday - Rosa will bring hers children (or child) somewhere and invite Jess with her. That will be the first half of the day. The evening is for Heather - dinner in her place.
Jessica and Blake in nightclub will be hot as hell. Guys, alcohol, drugs (why not), dancing, grinding, groping... so much possibilities.
The forthcomming week - work with Tommy, Mr. Burch must call her to talk about somethink (after last meeting this must be an interesting event), after Tuesday (or on Tuesday) she must recieved a phone call from Senator Harris to appoint a meeting and (the most exciting) Connor must be going to a bachelor party. I hope that Jessica will listening Eve and secretly will visit the party...
- May 27, 2017
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the next update (in 6 months) will not be anything special in my opinion. Jessica doesn't go to work and this unfortunately takes away a lot of spicy opportunities for interaction with the characters (not that there are many actually). On weekends I don't see many alternatives for jessica, if I were in stoper I would seriously consider making him work overtime for some reason that could affect the plot, doing the usual weekend activities is quite boring already in the games that come out every two months , let alone if you have to wait six months.
- Jul 17, 2019
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the fact of not knowing from the developer what events there will be (a simple list would be enough) makes everything very boring;
- Mar 6, 2019
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Usually investigative reporter are invited in TV Talk Shows...
This should be great for a future update... and of course some other crime scenes in that city should be great...
The only thing stoper should do at this point would be to create faster and more closely events related with the crime scene at the start of the game in a big city there are not only one murder in 2 week specially if the crime is related with powerful man.
provably she works for a secret government(?) agency or or she investigates on behalf of some political(?) organization .. (this would explain why she has no financial problems)
when something like this happens in a big city the following things happen:
1) TV Talk Shows (never mentioned in the game)
2) Socials media (like Twitter or similar) is it ever possible that no social media was never mentioned in 2 weeks?
yet, even in God Girl Gone Bad it is mentioned a popular social media to investigate about the owner of a white BMW
Today all investigate reporter are looking on socials
3) i can understand that stoper (or some of the non professional writer that support his patreon page) wants to go slow with the full sex scenes ... but in 2 weeks the city and the investigation continues ...
and as i said before crime doesn't wait for Jessica to gradually become willing to have sex like in a normal bribery game.
This is a mistake that only novice teen writers can make.
I suggest to go for:
1) TV Talk Shows
2) interview with Mayor
3) Do not go every day at work after shower... and repetitive routin that are nothing to do with an investigative reporter that usually cab also work 24 hour days to investigate! (the shower scenes should be only a good scene before a party night or a TV show invitation with hairs and fashion stylist)
4) Showing Jessica after a sleepless night on a stakeout where she drinks as much coffee and alcohol as the best detectives do ... with tousled hair and exhausted face... because the fact of always seeing her perfect as a doll is pretend!
5) Using more her phone and social media with messages that can interrupt some scenes that in this way there would be a reason to do so-
As you can see i never talked about sex scenes but I just gave stoper tips on how to make the story much faster interesting and with events that make sense-
In all the scenes I listed above it will be Stoper to include sex scenes that are directly related to the progress of the plot.
The problem with the current plot is that it seems improvised by following only the polls and advice of inept writers.
This should be great for a future update... and of course some other crime scenes in that city should be great...
The only thing stoper should do at this point would be to create faster and more closely events related with the crime scene at the start of the game in a big city there are not only one murder in 2 week specially if the crime is related with powerful man.
provably she works for a secret government(?) agency or or she investigates on behalf of some political(?) organization .. (this would explain why she has no financial problems)
when something like this happens in a big city the following things happen:
1) TV Talk Shows (never mentioned in the game)
2) Socials media (like Twitter or similar) is it ever possible that no social media was never mentioned in 2 weeks?
yet, even in God Girl Gone Bad it is mentioned a popular social media to investigate about the owner of a white BMW
Today all investigate reporter are looking on socials
3) i can understand that stoper (or some of the non professional writer that support his patreon page) wants to go slow with the full sex scenes ... but in 2 weeks the city and the investigation continues ...
and as i said before crime doesn't wait for Jessica to gradually become willing to have sex like in a normal bribery game.
This is a mistake that only novice teen writers can make.
I suggest to go for:
1) TV Talk Shows
2) interview with Mayor
3) Do not go every day at work after shower... and repetitive routin that are nothing to do with an investigative reporter that usually cab also work 24 hour days to investigate! (the shower scenes should be only a good scene before a party night or a TV show invitation with hairs and fashion stylist)
4) Showing Jessica after a sleepless night on a stakeout where she drinks as much coffee and alcohol as the best detectives do ... with tousled hair and exhausted face... because the fact of always seeing her perfect as a doll is pretend!
5) Using more her phone and social media with messages that can interrupt some scenes that in this way there would be a reason to do so-
As you can see i never talked about sex scenes but I just gave stoper tips on how to make the story much faster interesting and with events that make sense-
In all the scenes I listed above it will be Stoper to include sex scenes that are directly related to the progress of the plot.
The problem with the current plot is that it seems improvised by following only the polls and advice of inept writers.
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- Mar 6, 2019
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There are no weekends for an investigative reporter!
The Plot is not written... there is no plot in this game actually
I'm not agree with you. The first boring Saturday was followed by Jess/Heather evening with two opportunities - lesbian scene or voayeur scene ot the blond guy! If Jess and Blake go out somewhere, then this weekend will be fantastic!
And I'm not agree with you eather - I don't want to know what is happening. L&P events are public and I don't read more than 50% of the script!
- Mar 6, 2019
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As you can see there are many amateurs who advise stoper how to write the plot ...
this will make the game stupid and without any plot...
They are looking only to sex scenes disconnected from the Jessica job... poor stoper
I don't envy him and understand why he delays new updates more and more. By this way is impossible create a storyline that make sense.
this will make the game stupid and without any plot...
They are looking only to sex scenes disconnected from the Jessica job... poor stoper
I don't envy him and understand why he delays new updates more and more. By this way is impossible create a storyline that make sense.
- May 27, 2017
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if it produces another lesbian scene i would say it is jessica's premature death. I am confident that she will keep the two choices as long as she can finish both of them. It 's really a shame for her too long development time of her but as long as the cards turn with her number of supporters she can largely give a damn about everything and everyone. Other developers have equipped themselves in small teams with decent results.
You don't like lesbians, neither do I, but there are many supporters who does! THis is a marathon, not a sprint and there will be something for everyone. For me JOHN is a far more than a just porn game. I like the way Stoper is doing his job. When something is working, then no changes is need to be made! JOHN is fantastic at this point!
- Jan 19, 2019
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Nice update by the way. I was hoping for the final scene between Mr. Parker and Jessica, we can choose between Jessica being submissive or Mr. Parker being submissive. It will add up more hot scenes between both characters and develop more sexual chemistry between them.
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Sometimes I do wonder if you've lost your marbles or something. I myself have some criticism about certain things when it comes to the development of this game, but none of it has anything to do with the story. I highly recommend googling the meaning of being an investigative reporter for a newspaper if you are able to do so.
Jessica just started working at the newspaper, and now all of a sudden you want her to appear in TV shows? What on earth would justify that? She's literally just began investigating the vigilante's case and is getting used to the gazette, getting to know people and co-workers. The things you suggest are so out of this world that all I can do is to literally stare at my laptop, shaking my head in disbelief. God knows why you think mentioning any form of social media would be a good idea and benefit the game at all. I'm not playing this game to see Jessica browsing through her phone sending funny cat memes to her friends on facebook. She's using her phone to communicate with people, and that is all we need.
For someone working at a newspaper as an investigative reporter for barely even 2 weeks, we are actually neck deep into the action. You're asking for realism and on the other hand a faster story progression, yet you don't seem to understand that no goddamn news reporter who just started working would do most of the things Jessica already does, which honestly comes to no surprise seeing the suggestions you're coming up with. You want more realism in the game regarding the storyline? You'd fall asleep if Stoper did that for you. It is pretty clear that you have no idea as to what an investigative reporter actually does, especially when they're new to the job.
You've called this game a slow burner several times by now, even comparing it to AWAM and Fashion Business which, with all due respect, is completely dumb. Stoper's provided us with several characters, sex scenes, handjobs, blowjobs, threesomes aswell as a somewhat realistic story progression and some of the highest quality renders this entire genre has to offer. What you're asking for is not an erotic VN. What you need is a AAA sci-fi action thriller on Netflix.
I can totally see why some people recommend to ignore your posts entirely as there is so little sense to anything you write, it's actually mindblowing. Or in other words, like Stoper said before, try to stay away from sharp objects. lol
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Any news about when the final version of the update will be posted here?
