VN Ren'Py Jikage Rising [v2.09 Arc 3] [Smiling Dog]

[JamesWhisky]

And one more suggestion I may have. It would be awesome that if you can make some pointers what is the building for. I mean it took me about 10 minutes to orient myself in the game screen. Like I mean at simplest just add some tag that this building is Ino fuckhouse or sumtin. I know that it maybe was in the opening but when have most blood in my dick during fapping I was getting lost a bit . Otherwise great game so far

 

[Deleted member 90837]

i love the art ❤

 

[Umbra_Corvus]

This is looking pretty good so far definitely looking forward to more. As for the poll I would say develop them mostly at the same time. Not only does this allow joint scenes to be made easier/faster.

The main downside I can think of is this means you can't have situations where one girl helps you corrupt another. Maybe a staggered approach would work better, so some of them would be easier to corrupt/access than others. For example to get access to Hinata you might need one of the others at level 3.

Then again I am spit balling and might be throwing out the worst ideas possible so yer take it with a grain of salt.

 

[Muffeh]

I think all the girls should see some development. If you focus on one your potentially alienating people who don't like that particular character.

 

[HydratedMan]

The first time you see shizune there's a message in the upper-left saying that "image sakura normal not found" if someone can report to the creator... I didn't find a way to do it

 

[epidemico]

I'm pretty sure this can be classified as (mostly) child pornography, especially with the characters (who in the first half of the series are all 12-13 years old) being represented by artwork that's so close to their original designs in the series. Even in Shippuden, Naruto and the gang are still between 15-17 years old depending on where in the story you are, so.

Kind of really super fucking gross, guys.

Also, before anyone brings it up:

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, and

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in the US are

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.

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Edit: I know we're kind of making jokes and haha'ing in the thread about hearing police sirens, and that quite a few of the incest games on Patreon featuring "technically not" young characters try to get away with what they do by saying all the characters portrayed are actually 18+ (despite often not looking it, or still being in high-school, etc) but a game like this, in much the same vein as Four Elements Trainer, is really not even making a token effort to hide how pedophilic its content is.

My suggestion for fixing all this (potentially illegal) mess, take it or leave it: would be to start with the Shipudden character designs, but age up the underage cast so they're all at least 18+. You could also easily set the game as taking place within the context of the

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event that happens during the Ninja World War, or rehash the events of

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, wherein an "evil" version of Naruto named Menma switches places with the real Naruto due to a ninjutsu that transplants both into the body of their counterparts living in an alternate universe.

 

[RoadWulf]

So I spent the night thinking about this one after having played it. Art issues aside, I have something else that I think should be addressed. I think you should have more relationship development between the characters based on the corruption level. I get that the game is very early days, but I think that as they become more submissive in their trance moments, they become more trusting and perhaps become somewhat romantically attracted to him in their waking life.

Given the nature of their individual personalities, it would be a shame if you had them lose all of that and just become mindless sex drones. It also kinda feels like the character should be less of a sociopath and maybe have reservations about this power at first, perhaps even being regretful at first given that he may actually like the girls and feel bad about using them.

That being said, I highly agree with the underage issue of the girls in this first part of the game and think that you should rethink your corruption levels when they are this age. A preteen/young teen should have a lot more psychic blockage about stripping naked, so much that the trance should have less effect for it. You should start with levels like kissing, making out, copping a feel and at the end level maybe them strip some as they do that. Then you should get to the higher degree of action with the older women or when the 4 main girls are in their teens in the Shippuden era.

I guess I just wish you'd write this with the MC being less of a douchebag who goes overboard with his new powers.

 

[epidemico]

2D is not 3D, so I think its okay.

"In response to

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, Congress passed the

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(also dubbed the Amber Alert Law) and it was signed into law on April 30, 2003 by then president George W. Bush. The law criminalizes material that has "a visual depiction of any kind, including a drawing, cartoon, sculpture or painting", that "depicts a minor engaging in sexually explicit conduct and is [considered] "

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" or "depicts an image that is, or appears to be, of a minor engaging in [...] sexual intercourse [...] and lacks serious literary, artistic, political, or scientific value."​

Similarly, from the Wikipedia article on

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"Anime or manga that portray children engaged in sexual activities has been included in the PROTECT Act's prohibitions in several jurisdictions.

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According to the

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, the PROTECT Act can be used to prosecute people who obtain

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[...] such as

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of Virginia, who was charged with 19 counts of "knowingly receiving" child pornography for download[ing] "Japanese

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style cartoons of children engaged in explicit sexual conduct with adults,"

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alleged to depict "children engaged in explicit sexual conduct with adults."​

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So, again. Like--I know we're making jokes, and there's bound to be an argument revolving around free speech and 2D porn not really hurting anyone in the real world, how it's healthier to roleplay this kind of fetish/whatever out in a virtual space than to do it for real-real, blah blah; but the laws are what they are, and I just wanted to let everyone here know what the kind of "real-world" views/implications of developing and/or playing a game like this might be, worst come to worst.

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Anyway, I've said my piece. Ya'll have fun; I won't shit on anyone's parade, I promise--even though, yeah: I think this entire thing is kind of skeevy--but I do hope the Developer behind this game knows what they're getting into, and at least considers some of the concerns I've raised here, and the suggestions I offered in my previous post.

 

[HydratedMan]

@epidemico

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I'm not defending but it seriously has some points to consider

 

[Sgt_Frederik]

"In response to

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, Congress passed the

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(also dubbed the Amber Alert Law) and it was signed into law on April 30, 2003 by then president George W. Bush. The law criminalizes material that has "a visual depiction of any kind, including a drawing, cartoon, sculpture or painting", that "depicts a minor engaging in sexually explicit conduct and is [considered] "

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" or "depicts an image that is, or appears to be, of a minor engaging in [...] sexual intercourse [...] and lacks serious literary, artistic, political, or scientific value."​

Similarly, from the Wikipedia article on

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:

"Anime or manga that portray children engaged in sexual activities has been included in the PROTECT Act's prohibitions in several jurisdictions.

You must be registered to see the links

According to the

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You must be registered to see the links

, the PROTECT Act can be used to prosecute people who obtain

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[...] such as

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of Virginia, who was charged with 19 counts of "knowingly receiving" child pornography for download[ing] "Japanese

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style cartoons of children engaged in explicit sexual conduct with adults,"

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alleged to depict "children engaged in explicit sexual conduct with adults."​

​

So, again. Like--I know we're making jokes, and there's bound to be an argument revolving around free speech and 2D porn not really hurting anyone in the real world, how it's healthier to roleplay this kind of fetish/whatever out in a virtual space than to do it for real-real, blah blah; but the laws are what they are, and I just wanted to let everyone here know what the kind of "real-world" views/implications of developing and/or playing a game like this might be, worst come to worst.

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Anyway, I've said my piece. Ya'll have fun; I won't shit on anyone's parade, I promise--even though, yeah: I think this entire thing is kind of skeevy--but I do hope the Developer behind this game knows what they're getting into, and at least considers some of the concerns I've raised here, and the suggestions I offered in my previous post.

Not everyone is from the US if it is illigal in the US , dont download it

 

[epidemico]

@epidemico

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I'm not defending but it seriously has some points to consider

Like I directly said in my post above: "I know we're making jokes, and there's bound to be an argument revolving around free speech and 2D porn not really hurting anyone in the real world," or: how it's possibly "healthier to roleplay this kind of fetish/whatever out in a virtual space than to do it for real-real, blah blah,"...but that's one argument, and what I'm more concerned with is bringing to light the illegality of a game like this, and potential problems it can bring.

Don't want to argue morals, or games-as-therapy, or escapism, or what 'healthy play' looks like in terms of mental disorders; that's an entirely different can of worms that really isn't the main issue here, as you've kind of implied by (essentially) saying: "I'm not defending pedophilia, but we can at least have a fruitful discussion about ways virtual reality can help keep pedophiles from committing crimes."

That's not a convo I want to have in this thread, tho.

xxx

Not everyone is from the US if it is illigal in the US , dont download it

Yeah, obviously. But also, maybe check out:

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and scroll down to this bit in the last part of the intro--

"Currently, countries that have made it illegal to possess (as well as create and distribute) sexual images of fictional characters who are described as or appear to be under eighteen years old include Australia, Canada, the Philippines, South Africa, South Korea and the United Kingdom. At the upper edge, this encapsulates pornographic depictions of even seventeen-year-olds together, or adults where the predominant impression conveyed is of a person under the age of 18 (such as small-breasted women)."​

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[RoadWulf]

Would it count as pedophilia if the main character was the same age as the other characters?

It wouldn't if he were. But you have to remember that the MC is a guy who was an adult during the Boruto era who almost died and was sent back to his child body.

 

[Xypher]

Why not a compromise? Just say the characters are 18+ but keep their underage appearance.

I mean Four Elements Trainer and Insexual Awakening did the same thing and they are doing fine.

 

[jmts16]

Ugh, the anti-fun police is here.

Have fun trying to convince this guy that this is ok.

 

[Karnell]

Jezz guys calm down, let's just appreciate that we got to play this game, if you don't like it just don't play it. And it doesn't mean that everybody else can't play it too

 

[Yuki231]

It wouldn't if he were. But you have to remember that the MC is a guy who was an adult during the Boruto era who almost died and was sent back to his child body.

Yes, I know. I was more curious if it would be considered if both were children.
Speaking of which, do you think the MC is an adult if he in his child body? Would he be an adult if he regressed in age instead of going to his younger self's body?

Anyway, I can see a pretty easy fix for all this.
Make the MC a child during the Boruto era when he almost died and instead of being sent back to his younger self's body, just be sent back in time.
The MC could still act like an adult anyway, a lot of characters in anime act older than their age.

 

[Muffeh]

It's up to the moderators on F95 to decide if this violates rules. If it does the thread will be locked / removed. If it doesn't then it will remain. I see little point in arguing about it.

 

[Belphegor007]

Like I directly said in my post above: "I know we're making jokes, and there's bound to be an argument revolving around free speech and 2D porn not really hurting anyone in the real world," or: how it's possibly "healthier to roleplay this kind of fetish/whatever out in a virtual space than to do it for real-real, blah blah,"...but that's one argument, and what I'm more concerned with is bringing to light the illegality of a game like this, and potential problems it can bring.

Don't want to argue morals, or games-as-therapy, or escapism, or what 'healthy play' looks like in terms of mental disorders; that's an entirely different can of worms that really isn't the main issue here, as you've kind of implied by (essentially) saying: "I'm not defending pedophilia, but we can at least have a fruitful discussion about ways virtual reality can help keep pedophiles from committing crimes."

That's not a convo I want to have in this thread, tho.

xxx



Yeah, obviously. But also, maybe check out:

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and scroll down to this bit in the last part of the intro--

"Currently, countries that have made it illegal to possess (as well as create and distribute) sexual images of fictional characters who are described as or appear to be under eighteen years old include Australia, Canada, the Philippines, South Africa, South Korea and the United Kingdom. At the upper edge, this encapsulates pornographic depictions of even seventeen-year-olds together, or adults where the predominant impression conveyed is of a person under the age of 18 (such as small-breasted women)."​

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Report the thread or fuck off

 

[spellbreaker]

To the game's creator. I really suggest you add better screenshots for the game at the start. Right now I wouldn't try it out, because I don't know what the art looks like and how good it is.

 

[RoadWulf]

Yes, I know. I was more curious if it would be considered if both were children.
Speaking of which, do you think the MC is an adult if he in his child body? Would he be an adult if he regressed in age instead of going to his younger self's body?

Anyway, I can see a pretty easy fix for all this.
Make the MC a child during the Boruto era when he almost died and instead of being sent back to his younger self's body, just be sent back in time.
The MC could still act like an adult anyway, a lot of characters in anime act older than their age.

It's pedophilia because he is mentally an adult having sexual encounters with girls when they are children. It would basically be the same as if he had done this to Sarada in his adult life.