VN Ren'Py Jinxed Mark [v0.01.1] [ALEXIDUNCAN]

[holaje12]

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Yeah, you managed to add cuck stuff without getting the tag, congrats I guess? That seems to be the main goal for most devs nowadays.

Zero interest in the game if it is anything like what that guy described above, but good luck anyway. Just dont be expecting money and see it as a hobby and you'll be fine.

 

[TKdropemoff]

Be patient guys!!, netori will come after Walter gets every LI pregnant and then you'll have the romance choice with a cum bucket.

yea from that screenshot and what I read in the thread. safe to say this can go on ignore.

 

[BaasB]

also forced mc name

Yeah skipping.

 

[CallMeHuff]

This is the dumbest game I've ever played. The MC is cucked in every scene. Some guy goes around the house fing every girl while the MC is creeping around. Honestly, the shitties game I've ever played. The MC has ZERO scenes himself, and Walter (the guy from the first picture) has like 10. I seriously wish I had my last 5 minutes back.

 

[alexiddd]

This is the dumbest game I've ever played. The MC is cucked in every scene. Some guy goes around the house fing every girl while the MC is creeping around. Honestly, the shitties game I've ever played. The MC has ZERO scenes himself, and Walter (the guy from the first picture) has like 10. I seriously wish I had my last 5 minutes back.

ermmm, the mc is not the owner of the house/girls to begin with
therefore i dont see the point of fing any girls when he just got move in?
thx for the comment anyway

 

[alexiddd]

Yeah, you managed to add cuck stuff without getting the tag, congrats I guess? That seems to be the main goal for most devs nowadays.

Zero interest in the game if it is anything like what that guy described above, but good luck anyway. Just dont be expecting money and see it as a hobby and you'll be fine.

hmmm, funny why everyone thinks that the mc is being cucked?
i mean, since the beginning of the story, all the girls being fk are not mc's to start with
he just bumped into someone's rodeo in action
i thought he is the one going to seduce the girls to fall for him
sigh, i think my story telling skill sx

 

[alexiddd]

also forced mc name

not knowing forced mc name is an annoying choice as i had the bad habit of skipping the game dialogues and hate naming them (names n relationship etc)
will see to this on the next update
thanks for the comment

 

[Wolfeszorn]

hmmm, funny why everyone thinks that the mc is being cucked?
i mean, since the beginning of the story, all the girls being fk are not mc's to start with
he just bumped into someone's rodeo in action
i thought he is the one going to seduce the girls to fall for him
sigh, i think my story telling skill sx

Yes.... Yes, it sucks. Sorry to be that blunt. You literally added Harem as future tag and in the very first episode you show MC watching a potential LI getting fucked by a different guy. You are not stealing the girl from a unhappy relationship, you are literally after sloppy seconds. That, my guy is cuck 101

Pro tip: If you want to tell that kind of story, be my guest. But stop lying to us about a Harem game. Maybe you should go back to the drawing board and drastically rewrite this first release. I highly doubt that you´re going to get a lot of support for this mess

 

[Nimbus Commando]

This is more like a peeping tom game, honestly.

 

[marcodelamoret]

but... who like fat women really ???


sorry , i'm going out

 

[Ezekiel Jones]

So this is going to be a netori harem?

 

[alexiddd]

This is more like a peeping tom game, honestly.

Quite true

A fan of lucky mark, bab bobby saga, amnesia, big bro , snd more ;D

 

[alexiddd]

So this is going to be a netori harem?

Yes

 

[alexiddd]

but... who like fat women really ???


sorry , i'm going out

Fat? Hmmm

 

[alexiddd]

Yes.... Yes, it sucks. Sorry to be that blunt. You literally added Harem as future tag and in the very first episode you show MC watching a potential LI getting fucked by a different guy. You are not stealing the girl from a unhappy relationship, you are literally after sloppy seconds. That, my guy is cuck 101

Pro tip: If you want to tell that kind of story, be my guest. But stop lying to us about a Harem game. Maybe you should go back to the drawing board and drastically rewrite this first release. I highly doubt that you´re going to get a lot of support for this mess

Sigh, of course there r background stories to b unfolded for the senior girls, eg natsuki's spouse issue, that i didnt plan to unveil on their 1st encounter
N wanted to make Alycia looks like a bxxch so tat mc can prank on her in near future

maybe my marketing strategy sux as i reserved the privilege of revealing some of the personalities of the girls in vip ver.

And plan to release the limit to all on 2nd playthrough

N as the title implies, some jinx is at work

 

[alexiddd]

Btw, regarding the "harem" term, does the girls needed to b all virgins to begin with?
I just found out this term is a Arabic word. I always tot this is a Japanese term of 1guy with many girls?
Do literate me so i can remove the tag if necessary if it contradict with the end game result
Thanks in advance ☺

 

[OWSam000]

Btw, regarding the "harem" term, does the girls needed to b all virgins to begin with?
I just found out this term is a Arabic word. I always tot this is a Japanese term of 1guy with many girls?
Do literate me so i can remove the tag if necessary if it contradict with the end game result
Thanks in advance ☺

Are you really serious?
Harem game doesn't mean you need to have all of the love interests being virgin. I think most people expect the most important thing from harem game is the tone/vibe of the story. Most players who seek harem game don't expect to see lots of sex scenes of other people except mc, especially with the love interests in game. When you show them those scenes, the vibe is gone and players may begin to complain.
You may better make a clear statement in the OP that the game theme is about MC stealing other's girls and will show unavoidable sex scenes of love interests with their partners/other people.

 

[alexiddd]

Are you really serious?
Harem game doesn't mean you need to have all of the love interests being virgin. I think most people expect the most important thing from harem game is the tone/vibe of the story. Most players who seek harem game don't expect to see lots of sex scenes of other people except mc, especially with the love interests in game. When you show them those scenes, the vibe is gone and begin to complain. You may better make a clear statement in the OP that the game theme is about MC stealing other's girls and will show unavoidable sex scenes of love interests with their partners/other people.

Wow! Thanks for the advice!
Tbh, i only found out about this term when my colleagues discussed about jap animes(non-h)
Well, quite true it does aroused anger when seeing LI being molested by others, but i tot since mc is the molester himself, it wld b ok(jap approach, n focused too much on netori elements)...especially some predecessor titles... n for the intro only to excel the landlord's bossing attitude....seems tats not the best approach.
Will see to that soon, thanks again!!!

 

[RossyOs]

Cant wait what the second part will bring.

And they cant be all Virgins or that would exclude any MILFs, Cant have a perfect HAREM without a few MILFs can we!!

 

[Acesaw]

Bruh the first picture the girl face is gone!