Ren'Py JL: Next Generation [v0.06] [Big T]

[BigT141]

how much mind control is there, and are we the ones doing the mind control? hopefully and a lot, and yes.

1- This is an early build, there is not much, 2-it’s just a word, but I was thinking of making like a quick time event or something like that for example the pc player holds a button to full a bar making you mind control this person idk

 

[XX-topic]

nice game

but

1-there is a bug when you try to talk back to Ella after talking with the dealer at internet
2- when the dialog say you need at least 2 str after finding the the panty on the other girls quest it doesn't do anything yet
3-many typos

 

[BigT141]

nice game

but

1-there is a bug when you try to talk back to Ella after talking with the dealer at internet
2- when the dialog say you need at least 2 str after finding the the panty on the other girls quest it doesn't do anything yet
3-many typos

1- yep and already been fixed it was a small line of code

2- you have level 2 str right (I will check it out)

3- sorry, I will have to talk to my writer

 

[BigT141]

whats the other 4 if you dont mind

1- two times with Sofia
2- Alice
3- Jane

 

[BigT141]

Does this 'mind control' mean that MC simply uses this thing to fuck girls and bring them into the harem? I don't see the Romance tag, so...

Gonna fix that, yes there is Romance in the game and it’s good too the game it’s not that dark

 

[ninjasamuri]

1- two times with Sofia
2- Alice
3- Jane

What did the dev mean by this?

 

[BigT141]

What did the dev mean by this?

srry wrong reply

 

[XX-topic]

1- yep and already been fixed it was a small line of code

2- you have level 2 str right (I will check it out)

3- sorry, I will have to talk to my writer

1-Thanks - btw i re downloaded the game just now and still it doesn't proceed. I suppose the the fixed version isn't uploaded or a bug fix file?

2- yes. I tried with and without console commands and it just skips it . I also tried with 102 str and still the same result.

3- Most of the typos was at the first half of the game

keep up the good work man Thanks for the game

 

[Furrexx]

Why wonder woman turned into loli?

 

[BigT141]

1-Thanks - btw i re downloaded the game just now and still it doesn't proceed. I suppose the the fixed version isn't uploaded or a bug fix file?

2- yes. I tried with and without console commands and it just skips it . I also tried with 102 str and still the same result.

3- Most of the typos was at the first half of the game

keep up the good work man Thanks for the game

sorry was not clear I fixed the error but I didn’t update the version* cuz ‘m still working on all the bugs (yeah bugs are sucks)

And for str thing, I will look into it, sorry again and hope the next update fixes most of those issues

 

[BigT141]

Why wonder woman turned into loli?

Pls I don’t want to be canceled, but I will try to adjust the character in the future

 

[Sylaann]

I tried the game and after less than 5 minutes I have to stop. Please let someone check the english before actually releasing the base game or an update.
The synopsis is nice and i want to play this game but I just can't if have to decypher the meaning of words "dealcer -> declare" (only 2 letter are right, all the other in random order).

Good luck and i hope it gets better, I may be back in a few updates, hoping the text isn't an issue anymore X)

 

[ninjasamuri]

srry wrong reply

Oh btw in case you haven't seen it I left a reply with bug reports here it is

Ok I just played this some notes:
1. Obviously going with the Injustice backstory
2. Wonder Woman doesn't look right, I don't mean she doesn't look like the movie actress but that this model is too soft/small/young looking to be Wonder Woman make her blonde and she'd work as Wonder Girl/Cassie. I think the problem is mainly the face, I think Wonder Slave Trainer is a good example of a 3D Wonder Woman model. Though it's not just the face I think the hair style being wrong is also part of it. Mia looks more like Wonder Woman. give her long black hair and there you go
No notes/problems with Batman the DKR look is an acquired taste but it is from one of the most iconic batman stories to exist
I thought because the first time you have a choice of whether or not to use your power you'd always have a choice between whether or not to act villainous but you're forced into mind raping Jane
Also bug report you can infinitely loop talking to Henry both before you get your three per day thing and after same thing happens when you go to buy clothes for Isaac, also for talking to Akari and when Naomi asks you Superman or Wonder Woman and the Jane rape.
The go further option with Alice is BROKEN, Ella quest is very broken you can kind of skip it by just talking to her again, and if instead the go back to Ella part is broken, also you can't complete power up because Mia's room is locked after her quest so you can't use the new power on her.

 

[BigT141]

I tried the game and after less than 5 minutes I have to stop. Please let someone check the english before actually releasing the base game or an update.
The synopsis is nice and i want to play this game but I just can't if have to decypher the meaning of words "dealcer -> declare" (only 2 letter are right, all the other in random order).

Good luck and i hope it gets better, I may be back in a few updates, hoping the text isn't an issue anymore X)

Hey thx for taking a like in my game, i will need to have a serious talk with the writer, yeah i wrote the story but i didn’t write the dialogues cuz i am busy at the moment with other major projects, sorry and hope most fixes come in the near future

Ok I just played this some notes:
1. Obviously going with the Injustice backstory
2. Wonder Woman doesn't look right, I don't mean she doesn't look like the movie actress but that this model is too soft/small/young looking to be Wonder Woman make her blonde and she'd work as Wonder Girl/Cassie. I think the problem is mainly the face, I think Wonder Slave Trainer is a good example of a 3D Wonder Woman model. Though it's not just the face I think the hair style being wrong is also part of it. Mia looks more like Wonder Woman. give her long black hair and there you go
No notes/problems with Batman the DKR look is an acquired taste but it is from one of the most iconic batman stories to exist
I thought because the first time you have a choice of whether or not to use your power you'd always have a choice between whether or not to act villainous but you're forced into mind raping Jane
Also bug report you can infinitely loop talking to Henry both before you get your three per day thing and after same thing happens when you go to buy clothes for Isaac, also for talking to Akari and when Naomi asks you Superman or Wonder Woman and the Jane rape.
The go further option with Alice is BROKEN, Ella quest is very broken you can kind of skip it by just talking to her again, and if instead the go back to Ella part is broken, also you can't complete power up because Mia's room is locked after her quest so you can't use the new power on her.

1-you would be surprised what the story holds

2- okay you might be right maybe she is a bit young, but there is a good reason for that and I won’t spoil you, future updates will tell you more (and sure yeah I will adjust the character look)

3- using power on Mia, you sure mean Mia cuz I didn’t do an x-ray on Mia render for this version (for this version only Alice, Ella, and Sofia)

4- Jane's rape mind was supposed to be optional I will look into it

5- About Talk Infinite it was intended for the player to go back and see if he missed something or wants to repeat the scene again

6- in Alice's quest option I will look into sure

7- go back to talk to Ella I fixed it, it was a small error (I didn’t update the game yet)

8- finally about Batman I want to tell you more but in future updates you will be amazed at what he will look like.

9- any errors, or questions you can ask me directly in Discord anytime.

Edit:
Any bug fixed won’t be updated till the next version either the quick one v0.03.2 or the next one v0.004

 

[zxal22]

Anyone can upload android version in Google drive? Because in my country Download in Google drive its high speed
Thanks

 

[vs2011xyz]

Nice game specially in DC universe I really like this game.

 

[BigT141]

Nice game specially in DC universe I really like this game.

thx

 

[throwaway65y6134]

sorry was not clear I fixed the error but I didn’t update the version* cuz ‘m still working on all the bugs (yeah bugs are sucks)

And for str thing, I will look into it, sorry again and hope the next update fixes most of those issues

The str bug is that your conditional is inverted. In choice_red_2_2 you are checking "if strength <= 2:" but it should be "if strength >= 2:". That will work but another option some games do is put the condition directly in the choice so it doesn't show up (or isn't clickable) if the condition is not true. See

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[BigT141]

The str bug is that your conditional is inverted. In choice_red_2_2 you are checking "if strength <= 2:" but it should be "if strength >= 2:". That will work but another option some games do is put the condition directly in the choice so it doesn't show up (or isn't clickable) if the condition is not true. See

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for some examples.

Yep thx for pointing it out, but I already fixed it yesterday for now (I fixed Ella quest, Alice, and small errors) if you find more pls send them to me it helps me

 

[istlover08]

nearly every interaction has some kind of exception for me