Ren'Py JL: Next Generation [v0.09] [Big T]

[Tomy75]

Btw BigT141 the english got much much better from chapter 5 or 6 (not sure which one but it's when you go to Gotham), I'm glad I continued playing this game, but the early chapters (in the HQ) still need to be reworked, the english is sometimes almost impossible to read.

And I don't know what Cyberjack38 is talking about in his review, the sandbox is super easy, there is a quest list, you follow it by clicking on the correct locations. I do not even consider it a sandbox game, there is no grind element, it's just a very simple point&click.

 

[BigT141]

Btw BigT141 the english got much much better from chapter 5 or 6 (not sure which one but it's when you go to Gotham), I'm glad I continued playing this game, but the early chapters (in the HQ) still need to be reworked, the english is sometimes almost impossible to read.

And I don't know what Cyberjack38 is talking about in his review, the sandbox is super easy, there is a quest list, you follow it by clicking on the correct locations. I do not even consider it a sandbox game, there is no grind element, it's just a very simple point&click.

To be honest I don’t know if it’s rage bait or this is the way he thinks but everyone has their own opinions I guess, and I mentioned before, in the coming update (v0.1) all the previous scenes have been fixed in terms of dialogues

 

[BigT141]

I see the NTR tag, are we cucking or getting cucked?

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[kingmountvic]

Great game, after MC going to Gotham the story keeps getting better, actually I think it can be divided into two games. Before Gotham it is more like a fxxk and go, however, after that it's a good novel, with less sex scene and more story-telling, which I am not against. I think it deserve a 3.5-4.5 rank, keeping your great work dev!

 

[Aion_Abyss]

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The error I found is that shitty sandbox that is impossible to navigate.

Every sandbox dev is a sadist fr

 

[LucidAsaDream]

dude thought he was kratos your not him

 

[Hazchadim]

good game

 

[AnyName'llDo]

There are lots of spelling mistakes. They are distracting. Here are just a few corrections to get the ball rolling:

The shortened way of saying pervert is perv, not "prev".
The word gothic is not spelled "gohic".
The word is reaction, not "rection".
The word understand has a t in it. It's not "undersand".
The word figures is not spelled "fiuge". I not only corrected the spelling for figure, I added the s because that's how you would conjugate the verb correctly for a singular noun in present or future tense. Not trying to be annoying. I am trying to help. Thanks.

 

[BigT141]

There are lots of spelling mistakes. They are distracting. Here are just a few corrections to get the ball rolling:

The shortened way of saying pervert is perv, not "prev".
The word gothic is not spelled "gohic".
The word is reaction, not "rection".
The word understand has a t in it. It's not "undersand".
The word figures is not spelled "fiuge". I not only corrected the spelling for figure, I added the s because that's how you would conjugate the verb correctly for a singular noun in present or future tense. Not trying to be annoying. I am trying to help. Thanks.

Thank you for letting me know, but as I mentioned before all of these errors and poor quality of writing at the beginning have been fixed in v0.1

 

[AnyName'llDo]

good game

It is. Definitely deserves higher than the current 1.5 rating.

 

[BigT141]

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BigT141

I'm confused, what’s the problem

 

[BigT141]

It is. Definitely deserves higher than the current 1.5 rating.

There is something wrong with the rating i have no idea what it is

 

[BigT141]

Mystrery

Yes, again and again, like I said before v0.1 comes with all the fixes on dialogues, names, quality, but still thanks for pointing it out