Ren'Py JL: Next Generation [v0.13 Public] [Big T]

[BigT141]

As the NTR is becoming more present now, would it be too much to ask for a switch to turn it off completely? Just like the "safe mode" switch (which doesn't work for me)? I'm sure it would please many other players, it would prevent us from seeing the NTR options with our girls.

I’ll think about it, sure, why not. Just know this statement might help a bit: ‘NTR is not canon in the story.’ The only true path is the MC’s vanilla path. Most of the NTR options are just player preferences, nothing is forced on your characters. The choices mostly happen before anything serious occurs.

That said, I have no problem adding new steps or options if you or anyone else prefers not to see or experience NTR content.

 

[gdwwdg]

well it is winter so a few snowflakes are to be expected

 

[Tomy75]

I’ll think about it, sure, why not. Just know this statement might help a bit: ‘NTR is not canon in the story.’ The only true path is the MC’s vanilla path. Most of the NTR options are just player preferences, nothing is forced on your characters. The choices mostly happen before anything serious occurs.

That said, I have no problem adding new steps or options if you or anyone else prefers not to see or experience NTR content.

I know nothing is forced, but just seeing the option, like with the sweet Mia, makes me sick because my brain goes wild imagining all the NTR scenarios. I may be too vanilla but I know other players feel the same so thanks a lot for considering it, much appreciated.

 

[SavageKing]

Which path is the harem route on?

 

[Darkbreed]

Not sure which part you’re referring to, but no, there’s no time limit on anything.
Each update simply has a final quest, and when you reach it, the game will show a message warning you that continuing will cancel any remaining side quests.

I found a phone bug- In the quest where that dude asks u to check on his ex girlfriend and u get thrown in jail by her detective dad, whn u reject the girl and go back and talk to the dude , the quest log in ur phone disappears.

 

[Mike Hunt TG]

Something went wrong for me on this update. When I load it up it shows the MC and the font on the left looks different. I load my last save and it takes me to the map (where I saved at the end of the last update). When I try to access any locations on the map, nothing triggers except working at the restaurant and Home.

At Home on the phone I can see two missions that are ???? and one of them is locked. I also cannot trigger the bed to advance to the next day.

What's wrong here?

 

[XxXGhost]

Anyone got Save game?

 

[AbsordH2Odemon]

Is it just me, or does MC seem somewhat like the SC2 pro player Serral?

 

[Look-see]

damn dissapointed Luna died. i liked her model well enough. quit the game after that. short hair girls r rare. i think i'll pass on this game for now.

also game is missing the graphic violence tag.

 

[nhnf85]

damn dissapointed Luna died. i liked her model well enough. quit the game after that. short hair girls r rare. i think i'll pass on this game for now.

also game is missing the graphic violence tag.

Is that Luna character a LI?

If yes, the killing of a LI, combined with the game having NTR and being a shitbox, is more than enough reason to ignore the game.

 

[ss3freddy]

Anyone has the list to use console commands on this game?

 

[Look-see]

gave it a shot after my initial dissapointment with luna. some things i noticed maybe bugs other story/choice issues.

1. never should have had to make us choose between maeve and alice. seemed annoying.

2. some of the sex scenes feel off because they end abrubtly. in some of the scenes the MC doesnt even finish. although i do like the repeatable batgirl scene.

3. might just be me but feels like Harely was wasted. easily one of the most famous characters in DC and you barely did anything with her. hell supergirl and ivy was better flushed out.

4. got a bug regarding choosing to side with sofia falcone over penguin. if i choose her the game doesnt let me advance cause it says all the other missions are complete. didn't notice it right away since i chose to side with penguin first since i knew i was gonna choose her as my main playthrough since it meant more content.

4.5 storywise regarding sofia i though it was weird what happens if you choose her path. mostly because if you choose to side with her you just let her use you. if you side with penguin as far as MC is concerned he sends her to her death after brainwashing and having sex with her. but penguin keeps her as an ornament. to me it would've made more sense if you decide to side with her to keep her as and slave even though she still a mob boss. basically - she may be a boss but you're her master. you could then just move her to penguins place as his property would be her trophy so the MC would still have access to the Lounge and she could introduce more girls.

BUT if you side with penguin you ...let him win? you dont decide to brainwash him as a tool or anything, the dude just wins and keeps her as a trophy.

5. Ivy is sort of wasted as well. here you have a servant who could mind control people and nothing is done with that (Yet). she could easily be given the order to use her power to control other villains to keep them in line and lower the crime rate in gotham and even make events where she offers other girls to the MC.

6. apparently pregnancy is gonna be a thing soon. considering it's been six months since gotham, batgirl could easily become Oracle at that point due to revealing she's pregnant instead cause she was paralyzed. same with the other girls MC banged.

7. personal preferance but Raven's model seems off like she's too big. feels like she should have wonder womans current figure while wonder woman looks too small. like Mia should be what wonder womans build should be but a bit taller.

8. small personality issue mostly personal belief. when MC was staring a Raven i dont think she would've responded like that. more likely she would've just stared back unless he said something.

9. small issue almost nothing. but the girl that superman takes advantage of has the same name as another character and it threw me off a bit "lily" was her name. personally her model could have been something but seemed off on some parts. if she nevers shows up again i dont think it'll matter. especially since Superman already had his way with her.

10. Supermans personality is weird. i was expecting him to go the Injustice authoritarian route not Homelander. dont mind him going dark side but him going Rapey seemed off even if he was going the superman who laughs route.

11. almost Lost me with Naomi. glad she's still around.

12. the story in general i like.

13. also like how some missions have random girls MC can choose to interact with or not. more random missions or encounters like that are a plus.

14. liked the model of the girl waiting on the pizza man. hope she makes a comeback.

15. not into NTR content so no idea how it fits into the story. cant give my opinion on it. just glad so far it seems if you avoid it then it doesnt happen. not just skipping but still happens.

16. would be nice if we could choose the option where to finish for sex scenes. thats always a bonus. things like facials, creampies, etc.

17. some other things i cant remember but for now thats it. aside from hoping Luna comes back all i can do is wait for the next update and see how things go.

 

[BigT141]

gave it a shot after my initial dissapointment with luna. some things i noticed maybe bugs other story/choice issues.

1. never should have had to make us choose between maeve and alice. seemed annoying.

2. some of the sex scenes feel off because they end abrubtly. in some of the repeatable scenes the MC doesnt even finish. although i do like the repeatable batgirl scene.

3. might just be me but feels like Harely was wasted. easily one of the most famous characters in DC and you barely did anything with her. hell supergirl and ivy was better flushed out.

4. got a bug regarding choosing to side with sofia falcone over penguin. if i choose her the game doesnt let me advance cause it says all the other missions are complete. didn't notice it right away since i chose to side with penguin first since i knew i was gonna choose her as my main playthrough since it meant more content.

4.5 storywise regarding sofia i though it was weird what happens if you choose her path. mostly because if you choose to side with her you just let her use you. if you side with penguin as far as MC is concerned he sends her to her death after brainwashing and having sex with her. but penguin keeps her as an ornament. to me it would've made more sense if you decide to side with her to keep her as and slave even though she still a mob boss. basically - she may be a boss but you're her master. you could then just move her to penguins place as his property would be her trophy so the MC would still have access to the Lounge and she could introduce more girls.

BUT if you side with penguin you ...let him win? you dont decide to brainwash him as a tool or anything, the dude just wins and keeps her as a trophy.

5. Ivy is sort of wasted as well. here you have a servant who could mind control people and nothing is done with that (Yet). she could easily be given the order to use her power to control other villains to keep them in line and lower the crime rate in gotham and even make events where she offers other girls to the MC.

6. apparently pregnancy is gonna be a thing soon. considering it's been six months since gotham, batgirl could easily become Oracle at that point due to revealing she's pregnant instead cause she was paralyzed. same with the other girls MC banged.

7. personal preferance but Raven's model seems off like she's too big. feels like she should have wonder womans current figure while wonder woman looks too small. like Mia should be what wonder womans build should be but a bit taller.

8. small personality issue mostly personal belief. when MC was staring a Raven i dont think she would've responded like that. more likely she would've just stared back unless he said something.

9. small issue almost nothing. but the girl that superman takes advantage of has the same name as another character and it threw me off a bit "lily" was her name. personally her model could have been something but seemed off on some parts. if she nevers shows up again i dont think it'll matter. especially since Superman already had his way with her.

10. Supermans personality is weird. i was expecting him to go the Injustice authoritarian route not Homelander. dont mind him going dark side but him going Rapey seemed off even if he was going the superman who laughs route.

11. almost Lost me with Naomi. glad she's still around.

12. the story in general i like.

13. also like how some missions have random girls MC can choose to interact with or not. more random missions or encounters like that are a plus.

14. liked the model of the girl waiting on the pizza man. hope she makes a comeback.

15. not into NTR content so no idea how it fits into the story. cant give my opinion on it. just glad so far it seems if you avoid it then it doesnt happen. not just skipping but still happens.

16. would be nice if we could choose the option where to finish for sex scenes. thats always a bonus. things like facials, creampies, etc.

17. some other things i cant remember but for now thats it. aside from hoping Luna comes back all i can do is wait for the next update and see how things go.

Thanks for the long review, really, I mean it. I appreciate honest feedback and criticism a lot, because it helps me understand how different players see the game.

About some of the points you mentioned (I can’t reply to everything):


I’m always trying to improve the sexual content and add new ideas.

Unfortunately, some parts of the story in Chapter 1 had to be removed from the script especially things involving Harley, the Suicide Squad concept, Killer Frost, and a few others. There are reasons for that which I can’t share, but yes, that content had to be cut.

I’m also planning a redesign/rework for Raven and Wonder Woman in the future.

For the rest of your points, I can’t go into detail because it would spoil major parts of the story. All I can say is: if you stick around, you’ll see where everything is heading.

 

[Look-see]

Thanks for the long review, really, I mean it. I appreciate honest feedback and criticism a lot, because it helps me understand how different players see the game.

About some of the points you mentioned (I can’t reply to everything):


I’m always trying to improve the sexual content and add new ideas.

Unfortunately, some parts of the story in Chapter 1 had to be removed from the script especially things involving Harley, the Suicide Squad concept, Killer Frost, and a few others. There are reasons for that which I can’t share, but yes, that content had to be cut.

I’m also planning a redesign/rework for Raven and Wonder Woman in the future.

For the rest of your points, I can’t go into detail because it would spoil major parts of the story. All I can say is: if you stick around, you’ll see where everything is heading.

fair enough. but regarding sofia. is not being able to progress the game with her side a bug or is that part also going to be reworked?

 

[BigT141]

fair enough. but regarding sofia. is not being able to progress the game with her side a bug or is that part also going to be reworked?

I ran multiple tests (as I always do) and didn’t run into any issues, but I will look into it again.
To explain how this storyline works: it actually didn’t end yet.
There are four different outcomes depending on your choices:

1. If you completely side with Sofia:
   Oz dies, that’s the end of his storyline and Sofia takes over his club.
   However, at the end the MC uses his power on her mind, which leaves her a bit confused.
   This will affect how she reacts when you meet her again later.
2. If you choose to pick Sofia and betray her later:
   This path is a bit of a spoiler, but it has its own unique outcome that plays out differently from number 3
3. If you side with Oz:
   Sofia becomes more of a controlled “sex slave” in his club.
   Penguin wins, and the Falcone family falls.
4. If you choose Oz first but then betray him afterward:
   This results in yet another different outcome.

Where are these outcomes going?

You’ll see them soon, because their story isn’t finished.

There’s still more coming involving Penguin, Sofia, and that entire plotline as the story continues.

 

[Look-see]

I ran multiple tests (as I always do) and didn’t run into any issues, but I will look into it again.
To explain how this storyline works: it actually didn’t end yet.
There are four different outcomes depending on your choices:

1. If you completely side with Sofia:
   Oz dies, that’s the end of his storyline and Sofia takes over his club.
   However, at the end the MC uses his power on her mind, which leaves her a bit confused.
   This will affect how she reacts when you meet her again later.
2. If you choose to pick Sofia and betray her later:
   This path is a bit of a spoiler, but it has its own unique outcome that plays out differently from number 3
3. If you side with Oz:
   Sofia becomes more of a controlled “sex slave” in his club.
   Penguin wins, and the Falcone family falls.
4. If you choose Oz first but then betray him afterward:
   This results in yet another different outcome.

Where are these outcomes going?

You’ll see them soon, because their story isn’t finished.

There’s still more coming involving Penguin, Sofia, and that entire plotline as the story continues.

ok figured out what i was doing wrong. so when i replay a scene to see the other choice i tend to skip the text so i can get where i need to get faster and it stops when i reach the text i need. the problem in this case at somepoint it says "quest updated" while i was holding down control up until i entered sandbox mode. and i guess when i entered sandbox again it jumped the amount of quests finished. so even though the npc were where they needed to be i couldn't interact with them. however i just had to wait for the "quest updated" sign to go away before i got to SB mode.

after that the scene with sofia was so quick i almost missed it.

 

[Darkbreed]

I played through the game, I was holding it off till now bcoz Of NTR tag, but it was very easily avoidable.

I like that u tried to do something different, like making the LIs not immortal, but I dont think many will appreciate it, just be carefull not to overdo it, usually tragic deaths do not fit well in porn games (I got that petite girl killed, not sure if I fucked up or it is unavoidable.)

The only other complaint I have is that Even if u try to be "good" most scenes involve dubious consent, and u will only be missing some other scenes in the process if u try.

Other miscellaineous complaint I have is in the fight b4 Havrez final fight he could pop ppls heads like ballons, but he never used that trick agains maeves bro in the finalle, which would actually screw us up, but since its a porn game Its whatever.

 

[The Frog]

Supergirl is no where to be found
Can anyone Help please
View attachment 5-5-LT1.save

 

[RHMax]

What's the gallery code can anyone help?

 

[PureoSpice]

This is a decent game with a great writing,great humor, very decent passing easily an 8.5 if it weren't for some unfortunate bug. When I first see this game I thought it would of been one of those hideous parody but no I was wrong and dev had done a great Job to adapt his own story to the DC universe. Really top!

I'm currently playing this game and I'm now in Chapters 2 after defeating Avrez(also notice the improvement of renders quality) and I have to agree with Darkbreed on this one. Naomie's scene was so unexpected not in a good way and also a big fell off. Seem unavoidable as well
She was in the road to become my favorite li. Maaan.... I was low-key pissed but aight,But I understand this is a pretty rich narrative. if that's how the story along with MC's development need to go. so be it....pss and I hope she recover soon