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VN Ren'Py Just Bros [v2.25] [Ello Fat Dog]

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UncleDolan

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perles75 said:
The author gave some more details:


As mentioned before, I’m currently reworking JB, adding daytime chapter notifications, and implementing screens for multiple scenes and events in every chapter. While doing this, I couldn’t help but repulsed by how poorly some of the earlier scripts were written—full of grammatical errors and awkward phrasing (sorry, I’m not a writer haha).

I’m still by no means a writer, but after nearly 100 chapters/episodes of VNs, I’d like to think my English and storyboarding have improved a little. So, along with the structural updates, I’m also overhauling the script chapter by chapter. The dialogue is undergoing major revisions—keeping the core plot intact but refining the conversations significantly.

Key Focus Areas in the Rewrite:
  • Stronger character personalities – Now that I have a clearer vision of each character, their early-game dialogue is being adjusted to fit them better (e.g., Ryder will be slightly more playful instead of bland, Jasper will lean more into his stoic nature, etc.).
  • Expanded interactions – New dialogue options and extended character exchanges to enhance immersion.
  • Grammar and spelling corrections – Cleaning up the writing for better readability.
Minor Gameplay Adjustments:
Some affection gains/losses may shift slightly due to new dialogue options or adjusted interactions. However, these changes are minor and won’t significantly impact existing playthroughs.


They have reworked fully the first 5 chapters for now and pieces of others, and they said that each chapter takes around 4+ hours to rework.
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if they've done all this shit already, there's a pretty good chance they aren't gonna abandon the project. Cheering and hoping for the best
 
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perles75 said:
The author gave some more details:


As mentioned before, I’m currently reworking JB, adding daytime chapter notifications, and implementing screens for multiple scenes and events in every chapter. While doing this, I couldn’t help but repulsed by how poorly some of the earlier scripts were written—full of grammatical errors and awkward phrasing (sorry, I’m not a writer haha).

I’m still by no means a writer, but after nearly 100 chapters/episodes of VNs, I’d like to think my English and storyboarding have improved a little. So, along with the structural updates, I’m also overhauling the script chapter by chapter. The dialogue is undergoing major revisions—keeping the core plot intact but refining the conversations significantly.

Key Focus Areas in the Rewrite:
  • Stronger character personalities – Now that I have a clearer vision of each character, their early-game dialogue is being adjusted to fit them better (e.g., Ryder will be slightly more playful instead of bland, Jasper will lean more into his stoic nature, etc.).
  • Expanded interactions – New dialogue options and extended character exchanges to enhance immersion.
  • Grammar and spelling corrections – Cleaning up the writing for better readability.
Minor Gameplay Adjustments:
Some affection gains/losses may shift slightly due to new dialogue options or adjusted interactions. However, these changes are minor and won’t significantly impact existing playthroughs.


They have reworked fully the first 5 chapters for now and pieces of others, and they said that each chapter takes around 4+ hours to rework.
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Ooo nice. And it seems like they've been doing this for some time, seeing that they've reworked 5 chapters. I hope this means they also already have a clear idea on where the story is headed

I gotta say, Prof. Jones's "wakakakaka" laugh feels like what an Indonesian would write to express their laugh in chats, though it's usually shorten into "wkwkwk". It's like their version of LoL/lmao
 
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perles75

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UncleDolan said:
if they've done all this shit already, there's a pretty good chance they aren't gonna abandon the project. Cheering and hoping for the best
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yes, seems so!

tbh they never gave me the impression to be on the verge of abandoning, they've always been on-the-clock regular with their monthly updates. Also I've seen before reworks that were, well, actually reworks (SpaceCorpsXXX, Medieval times), so I wasn't thinking of it as an excuse to give up the game.
 
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How many people work on this game? They have the main game and constantly pumps out Hard Out. And I think on their itch page, they also work on some unrelated stories?
 
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donorys

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perles75 said:
yes, they decided not to skip the month but publish the Just Bros rework that has been done up to now, which is the first 11 chapters.
These are the changes by the way:

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Honestly I didn't know that we could even reject Yan's fighting lesson. Anyway, would it be shared here I wonder?
 
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SkylerSkizz said:
Anymore gay, nsfw VN like this? There's so much option, path and partners we can choose for this story, i love it. Need more recommendations like this if anyone have it.
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Let's see... Coming Out on Top, Yearning: A Gay Story, and (One More Time) From the Top have quite a sizable cast you can romance, each of them has their own subplots. If you strictly want smut, you can look up Male's Hunter Daily Adventure, which is mainly about sex and kinks

There's also Freshman: Physical Education which cast is also comparable to Just Bros, but it still doesn't have much to go on imo, because the dev keeps introducing new guys as side flings rather than moving forward with the story. It's pretty good so far though
 
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perles75

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De puta said:
Hello any update?
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the dev rarely publishes any update before the last day of the month when he releases whatever he has done, which can be Just Bros or another of his less demanding series.
However, there is a page in his Patreon where he is currently flagging what he has done on the Just Bros rework, and it has barely progressed this month, so either he will crunch a lot of work in the next 13 days or we'll get another thing.
 
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So they reworked the game?
Is it a strict up upgrade / polish from the old version?
Or there are deleted contents from the old one, for better monetisation / for Patreon like certain other games.
 
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nackedsnake said:
So they reworked the game?
Is it a strict up upgrade / polish from the old version?
Or there are deleted contents from the old one, for better monetisation / for Patreon like certain other games.
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Its more of a polish from the old version with new content, he kinda is reworking a lot of charcaters history, ryder before had like 0 personality, now he is more glued to you, and he is going for a more comedic side
 
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