HTML Just One More Chance [v0.45] [Lotrum]

[Lotrum]

Edit:
A new TEST version (0.1c) has been uploaded for testing and feedback on the discord server

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[limpbizket598]

Will there be Impregnation/Pregnancy?

 

[Lotrum]

Will there be Impregnation/Pregnancy?

Sorry, I can probably already rule out pregnancy as in "videos with big bellies" as i wouldn't like making that kind of content, maybe impregnation in the future, but it's not a focus at least for a while.

 

[LarryButz]

Really good game!

 

[Cab-boe]

Missing AI art tag?

 

[Lotrum]

Missing AI art tag?

Probalby missing a few more tags than that, i'm still in the process of understanding how to update tags correctly, thanks for pointing it ouy!

 

[poldy]

natasha room button is missing
i have info that she is sleeping but during day i cannot go to her

 

[jwk92]

I get a error message when you succesful try anal for the first time with susan

 

[RPJames]

Shouldn't mark this game as 'All', it will not work on Linux do to the naming convention, or should I say lack of.

The pictures are in folder 'Images', but the game is looking for 'images' (there are other bad links also) which are not the same and are only the same in Windows. So, I would recommend trying to match up the names of your files to all of your links in SugarCube, or just state that this game is for Windows ONLY.

 

[Lotrum]

natasha room button is missing
i have info that she is sleeping but during day i cannot go to her

It's normal that the button is missing when you can't go there, which is usually when she sleeps or when you already visited her, is your case different?

I get a error message when you succesful try anal for the first time with susan

Hello, that scene is still a work in progress, what kind of error do you get? is it anything different from a "Work in progress" caption?

Shouldn't mark this game as 'All', it will not work on Linux do to the naming convention, or should I say lack of.

The pictures are in folder 'Images', but the game is looking for 'images' (there are other bad links also) which are not the same and are only the same in Windows. So, I would recommend trying to match up the names of your files to all of your links in SugarCube, or just state that this game is for Windows ONLY.

That's bad, thanks for pointing that out, I did use a "find and replace" tool to try and fix all the capitalization mismatchs, but apparently some things skipped through my check, i'll do my best to find them all for the next test version, if you want to throw me some examples of stuff that doesn't work, that would help, and thanks again!

 

[hagare]

btw, an error from anal sex @_@

 

[Lotrum]

btw, an error from anal sex @_@

Oh, ok thanks, this is the "failed version" of a scene that is still work in progress, should have taken out the link entirely, but there basically is no scene yet

 

[Lotrum]

Edit: (context: this was an answer to a angry/offensive message that caused a bit of flame but has been later edited and removed from the thread)

The general idea is that everyone has his own opinions and tastes, I don't think that people take issue with the fact that you have different ones, but mostly on the way that you are choosing to express them.

I personally don't care about insults, trying to be honest, what you said about porn being easy to access could be said for basically any kind of media, the internet is full of porn as much as it's full of hentai, drawings, renders, porn arn and basically everything we can think of.

My idea behind making a game is to create a story, some game mechanics and challenges in order to "try" and make the player get hooked and immersed enough to make him forget that he can just open another tab and directly access any kind of material that he wants.

When i played other games, i found myself to be hooked more by interesting game mechanics and the freedom of choice in a complex world than by "original content". So this is what I'm trying to achieve in my game. I realize that it's not easy and might also not be what everybody or even most people want, but that's what I strive to achieve.
The game is on a very early stage of development and I know I'm not very good at it, but this is my end goal, and if I failed at THAT even on the long term, that's what would be very disappointing for me, not some generic insults about how you don't like real porn in games.

 

[Theflyingcow]

save games don't seem to be working. Saved a game yesterday, but it is gone now.

 

[Lotrum]

save games don't seem to be working. Saved a game yesterday, but it is gone now.

I'm sorry to hear that, this is a problem that you are having with the game engine and not with the game itself.
Most likely your browser cache got cleared and the save file along with it, what you can do is exporting savegames as a file and loading them manually between game sessions, or try with a different browser, or manually change browser settings in order to not wipe those files.

 

[Traytray1212]

Anyone know the new cheats?

 

[somebodynobody]

So first advice, have all files follow a format. lowercase all words, use an _ to separate words, and no punctuation. Example. ambers_hairbrush.png, this makes it readable and almost 0 likelihood to mess things up, which can cause issues on some systems like linux.

Second piece of advice is to make the narrated stuff stand out more. wether giving them their own text box or some css otherwise it kind of gets lost.

The chosen colors aren't great, the greenish is harsh on that grey background.

Hovering over last available/save area makes the last available slightly move down instead of letting you click save.

Some things like choices will allow for you to still click other removed choices. Example is if you have a confidence starter, you use that benefit, you now have 2 choices. The "so that's it" can still be clicked but does nothing. As does "I will complain".

words on the picture are a bitch to read.

The first day ends on second sleep?

I would say look at games like apocalyptic world for their control of sound in videos.

Times don't seem to line up, like playing a 1 hour game at 00:42 should be 01:42, but it is 02:12

If you don't have stats for meeting carol there is a large area not used below the answer.

I would suggest keeping closer to rounded numbers, at most 2 places after a decimal. Your Culture score is 14.879999999999999 (not good)

Need a way to move tiny increments of time. Or hard stick to hours. Being 2 minutes from lessons and having to pass an hour and thus only get 1 lesson seems bad.

I would suggest trying to keep the center section to always be 1 size, and thus nicely frame things, the text boxes are longer than the videos areas.

Some spelling and grammar errors.


Error: child tag <</if>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<if>>
<</if>>
value @ index.html:7932

Anal with Susan.
Uncaught Error: <<set>>: bad evaluation: Unexpected token '?'
at Function.value (index.html:7932:146765)
at HTMLAnchorElement.<anonymous> (index.html:7932:218866)
at HTMLAnchorElement.<anonymous> (index.html:7932:198706)
at HTMLAnchorElement.<anonymous> (index.html:7932:45856)
at HTMLAnchorElement.<anonymous> (index.html:7932:45634)
at HTMLAnchorElement.dispatch (index.html:57:43064)
at v.handle (index.html:57:41048)

 

[Lotrum]

So first advice, have all files follow a format. lowercase all words, use an _ to separate words, and no punctuation. Example. ambers_hairbrush.png, this makes it readable and almost 0 likelihood to mess things up, which can cause issues on some systems like linux.

Second piece of advice is to make the narrated stuff stand out more. wether giving them their own text box or some css otherwise it kind of gets lost.

The chosen colors aren't great, the greenish is harsh on that grey background.

Hovering over last available/save area makes the last available slightly move down instead of letting you click save.

Some things like choices will allow for you to still click other removed choices. Example is if you have a confidence starter, you use that benefit, you now have 2 choices. The "so that's it" can still be clicked but does nothing. As does "I will complain".

words on the picture are a bitch to read.

The first day ends on second sleep?

I would say look at games like apocalyptic world for their control of sound in videos.

Times don't seem to line up, like playing a 1 hour game at 00:42 should be 01:42, but it is 02:12

If you don't have stats for meeting carol there is a large area not used below the answer.

I would suggest keeping closer to rounded numbers, at most 2 places after a decimal. Your Culture score is 14.879999999999999 (not good)

Need a way to move tiny increments of time. Or hard stick to hours. Being 2 minutes from lessons and having to pass an hour and thus only get 1 lesson seems bad.

I would suggest trying to keep the center section to always be 1 size, and thus nicely frame things, the text boxes are longer than the videos areas.

Some spelling and grammar errors.


Error: child tag <</if>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<if>>
<</if>>
value @ index.html:7932

Anal with Susan.
Uncaught Error: <<set>>: bad evaluation: Unexpected token '?'
at Function.value (index.html:7932:146765)
at HTMLAnchorElement.<anonymous> (index.html:7932:218866)
at HTMLAnchorElement.<anonymous> (index.html:7932:198706)
at HTMLAnchorElement.<anonymous> (index.html:7932:45856)
at HTMLAnchorElement.<anonymous> (index.html:7932:45634)
at HTMLAnchorElement.dispatch (index.html:57:43064)
at v.handle (index.html:57:41048)

Thanks a lot for your feedback.

Most of the stuff you reported comes from me not being great at developing/coding in general but hopefully doens't make the game unplayable, it's stuff that i'll strive to improve over time. (decimals, double links, spaces, and the damn incomprehensible mess that is CSS, lol)


Susan anal error wasn't supposed to even be in the game, i forgot commenting a link in the passage before

Words on pictures have a redesign already planned.

Colors are a difficult issue, i don't really want to change the green, but i also can't make the grey either darker or brighter without messing up other text's readability, so i'll have to think about what can be done.

I'll definitively throw something in that uses less than 1hr at some point, but the number of lessons that you can take shouldn't be restricted by the current minutes in any scenario, you still have a large margin to take 2 lessons in a day.

2nd day message showing is something i forgot fixing, I'll change it from "sleeping at day2" to "waking up in day2"

 

[poldy]

It's normal that the button is missing when you can't go there, which is usually when she sleeps or when you already visited her, is your case different?


Hello, that scene is still a work in progress, what kind of error do you get? is it anything different from a "Work in progress" caption?



That's bad, thanks for pointing that out, I did use a "find and replace" tool to try and fix all the capitalization mismatchs, but apparently some things skipped through my check, i'll do my best to find them all for the next test version, if you want to throw me some examples of stuff that doesn't work, that would help, and thanks again!

i mean i know i cant visit her when she is asleep but even after sleeping to next day her room button isnt option to chose in v1 i could go to her now i cant.
sorry fro bad eng

 

[N0nsens3]

" In this game you play as a desperate, virgin fat guy that in the future manages to become a test subject and gets back in time through a technologically evolving simulation and has a second chance to re-live his life in college "