LuvFlatChests

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May 11, 2019
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is it just me or is natasha's pic (the one in girls stats) crosseyed? and yet her pic in the chat bubbles is not.

you can see it especially clearly if you compare the 2 images in the /images/natasha folder, face.png vs instatok.png
Yes, Natasha is a bad girl. She suffered the penal code for her misdeeds getting her face dick slapped so hard she went crosseyed. She's in rehab now learning how to suck dick better so that never happens again. Yes, the system does work.
 
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jawz

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Jul 9, 2020
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how did this get 4.5 stars???

there are several issues with the dialogue: "don't talk to me unless you want being made fun of"

many terrible attempts at photoshop or ai: natasha's cross eyed pic AND her doorstand pic, susan's oversized head that doesn't fit her body on some random stock image, melanie's doorstand pic. actual quote from developer notes, "AI use is mostly for editing flavor/backgrounds, Actual content is not AI-CG". that's a lie.

poor image selection: carol's full body pic is NOT the same actress as her chat bubble. all of susan's images seem to be split between 2-3 different actresses (edit: ok nvm there's a plot reason for the switch) , a random txt file in rose's folder named "katie kush - jewelz blu" where neither actress matches rose.

the typos: how is there such a glaring typo in the most basic part of the end simulation screen? 4 - 14 = 18? 2 - 12 = 14? it's not a big deal, but such an obvious mistake shows there's no attempt at qa.

the grind doesn't seem too bad, and i do like the stat calculation, but damn, the rest of it needs a LOT of work. if this was v0.02, i'd give it a pass, but we're on v0.64...

edit: so i finished the content. the game is enjoyable. but still not worthy of 4.5 stars due to all the typos, bad pictures, etc. if that was fixed, i'd definitely give it 5/5
 
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Eonor

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Updated my compressed Android port of Just One More Chance to v0.64.

Please let me know if you encounter any issues with the port and I'll see what I can do to get them sorted.

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Drearash

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who is danielle btw ?cant seem to find her name
I believe she's the girl you meet having lunch with Carol. You'll need to start hanging out with Carol and then check the cafeteria at lunch. You'll need a high popularity to make a good first impression on her.

ETA: Wait, were you asking who the model is? That I don't know.
 
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Lotrum

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Nov 11, 2023
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how did this get 4.5 stars???

there are several issues with the dialogue: "don't talk to me unless you want being made fun of"

many terrible attempts at photoshop or ai: natasha's cross eyed pic AND her doorstand pic, susan's oversized head that doesn't fit her body on some random stock image, melanie's doorstand pic. actual quote from developer notes, "AI use is mostly for editing flavor/backgrounds, Actual content is not AI-CG". that's a lie.

poor image selection: carol's full body pic is NOT the same actress as her chat bubble. all of susan's images seem to be split between 2-3 different actresses (edit: ok nvm there's a plot reason for the switch) , a random txt file in rose's folder named "katie kush - jewelz blu" where neither actress matches rose.

the typos: how is there such a glaring typo in the most basic part of the end simulation screen? 4 - 14 = 18? 2 - 12 = 14? it's not a big deal, but such an obvious mistake shows there's no attempt at qa.

the grind doesn't seem too bad, and i do like the stat calculation, but damn, the rest of it needs a LOT of work. if this was v0.02, i'd give it a pass, but we're on v0.64...

edit: so i finished the content. the game is enjoyable. but still not worthy of 4.5 stars due to all the typos, bad pictures, etc. if that was fixed, i'd definitely give it 5/5
Hey, thanks for the feedback! you're definitely right about a few things.

When i started the game, I tried to rely way more on the use of AI for editing and making "unique pics", but the results were honestly pretty bad, so I gradually stopped using that almost entirely.

I wasted a lot of hours and kinda gave up on it, I wouldn't consider that to be neither a sizeable or important part of the content, but i get that they are annoying and a bit out of place. I'll probably just replace them at some point, but to be fair nobody really seemed to mind those.

I kinda forgot the txt in that folder, they are the actresses that had a threesome with her (susan, francine)

All Susan material is only from a single one, which at some point kinda changed her appearance. There are a couple bad AI edits, I didn't paste the face, I tried to replace the dress but that probably messed up proportions, I don't have a very good eye for that. But it's not from multiple, it's always her.

The - isn't a minus sign, it's just a dash to separate from the rest of the calculation , which is hidden behind a clickable link to avoid a massive wall of text.

I'm happy though that in the end you kinda ended up liking the game, It was my very first attempt at developing a game, and the stuff I did in the beginning is lower quality compared to the one I added recently, in hindsight starting with a game this big probably wasn't the smartest idea,but it's too late now :D

I apologize for the messy stuff left behind, I'm trying to split my efforts between rewriting/fixing old stuff and making new content. But to be honest, everyone always seem to appreciate the new content more.

The portraits definitely fall in the stuff that needs to be redone, I just never gave them priority, but it'll try to fix most of them in the next few updates.
 

jawz

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Jul 9, 2020
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All Susan material is only from a single one, which at some point kinda changed her appearance. There are a couple bad AI edits, I didn't paste the face, I tried to replace the dress but that probably messed up proportions, I don't have a very good eye for that. But it's not from multiple, it's always her.
if you say it's the same actress i'll believe you, but man she looks sooo different. i really like how she looks in her face pic vs her face2 pic

what about carol though? she looks so different in her face vs standing pic, surely that's not the same actress?
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I apologize for the messy stuff left behind, I'm trying to split my efforts between rewriting/fixing old stuff and making new content. But to be honest, everyone always seem to appreciate the new content more.
i'd agree with the latter part of that, new content is always better, but first impressions are important as well. some might get that bad first impression and decide to give up, but i pushed through cuz i'm stubborn and ended up enjoying it. that'll be a hard decision you'll have to make as dev, whether to spend that time improving earlier parts of the game or not.

also in regards to bad dialogue, i didn't notice it as much in later parts. the example i used was glaring since it was like one of the very first lines we see, which again might harm first impressions.
 
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