VN Ren'Py Karma's Revenge [Ch.1 P1] [IntensiveCareGames]

Saerwen

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Can the female MC be corrupted or enslaved by the man who killed her family? It would be boring for her to get a revenge happy ending only IMO. There should be a route were she progressively falls for the man who ordered their deaths and an ending where she becomes his slave and where he makes her thank him for killing her family because thanks to that she can now be with him. Some optional taboo content that pushes boundaries, not always the cliche boring stuff. Also please consider making the main antagonist a white/asian/latin guy for the likes of us who don't enjoy BBC content.
Lmao, you want corruption cliché to be in the game but don't BBC cliche to be too. As you order, Sir!
 

Prokopije

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Hello, will this game follow pattern of your other game (Singer)? I liked that game while everything was optional, but then at some point it became kinetic novel and ended up at my ignore list.
Is this game going to be the same, so should I even bother to check it?
 

recoba

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Looks promising, but I hope the game's development doesn't distract the author from his main project, "The Singer."
 

smarty101

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And I believe losing to the man that ruined your life and becoming his sex slave, starting from being a strong willed character, is a really good story. I don't like slut characters who sleep with every man they see. I prefer one or two antagonists and the slutiness, if you can call it that, to be reserved to that one villain. I'd find it boring if sex scenes were all vanilla.

Anothere route I'd like would be a femdom and lezdom one, where the MC grows more dominant and corrupts and ultimately enslaves others. Though I prefer femdom when the MC is a submissive man. I agree the game could have a good story and be supported for it. But sex scenes are important and a big selling point if your storytelling isn't that good, even if it is. And I don't see how vanilla sex only can be good. And too many routes can stagnate game development. I don't know how much success vanilla games have here if there is not incest.
Can you please explain what is so Vanilla about non corrupted sex scenes?? And what actually is vanilla, the only thing vanilla is standard sexual intercourse.
How did you come to the conclusion it was a man that ruined Karma's life, was it not a female who shot her family?? i dont think i misssed any dialogue mentioning a man ordering the death of her family.
in a way im the same as you, i like multiple paths in an AVN, i hate being forced down a certain path, choices are what can elevate an AVN above and beyond the normal.
lets hope we get several paths to choose from, not only will you and myself be happy, but it would also appeal to a larger amount of people.
and thank you for having a normal conversation about our different likes and dislikes, so many times i have left feedback on certain AVN's onlt to have people try to humiliate and abuse myself and my likes and dislikes using foul language.
ok i just looked up what is considered Vanilla, i have to say its not how i thought it was, seems the describtion of Vanilla has changed through the decades, but i still stand by being vanilla can be just as good.
 
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smarty101

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Typical male crap. Dev probably hikikomori. Combats, fights, robots, revenge and another shit.
wow its only the first preview and already you dont like it, at least give it a few updates before trashing it, Nothing wrong with a revenge story, its good to see a FMC that is strong ad determined to fight for the truth and get justice for what happened to her, to many devs/creators fall into the trap of creating total sluts just to apease the so called masses, lets wait and see what happens next.
 

smarty101

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Looks promising, but I hope the game's development doesn't distract the author from his main project, "The Singer."
Can you tell me what "The Singer" is like, i have read the overview but not played it. im not a fan of NTR or heavy slutiness/whores.
Dont get me wrong, i dont want straight forward sex, i like some above the norm sexual activity, just not all the stupid heavy kink/fetishes the younger generations seem to worship.
 

smarty101

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What about planned tags? I hope to see the FMC as a corrupted slut! Nothing more sexy than a bunch of old fat dudes gangbanging her (of course, she is innocent and shy in the beginning). Let's make porn great again!
Is that all you want?? would you be happy if there was a choice, you can take the fully corrupted slut route or stay ressilient and strong, it is a story about revenge after all, it would not be trully revenge if she became a full corrupted slut and surrender herself, as we see Karma so far she is strong determined and has that look in her eye that revenge is the only goal she wants, don't you think completly corrupting her into a surrendered slut would push a lot of people away(the people who dont speak up or leave comments).
personaly im hoping she follows through on revenge and stays true to her family, i dont need kinks/fetishes blackmail/corruption to fully enjoy an AVN. you will probably say Vanilla is a bad thing, but seeing as the describtion of vanilla is any sexual activity that does not contain kinks/fetishes like say BDSM, then vanilla is not actually a bad thing, so much can be done in an AVN that is so called vanilla and be very sexual and exciting but not include kinks/fetishes.
hopefuly we both get what we want from this AVN.
 

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CutieLvr

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Thank you for your kind words.
Unfortunately, unlike the girl in the other game (Ria), Karma will not become corrupted. Yes, she will sleep with a few boys or girls to achieve her goal.
As for the “contests”... I'm planning a skip button for them. But I'm not very good at coding. I'm working on it. This is the first version, and there will be many improvements in the future.
You'll see more fight and conflict animations than sex scenes.
That is great. I am very big on sex scenes, but for your game, and the way you make the action/fighting happen it is just perfect. Love that Karma plays both sides of the street. I see her as an Angelina Jolie type, in terms of being a fighter, or some of those other strong, fighting women in the movies. I love that. Keep doing your thing. I love this game.
 

smarty101

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Thank you for your kind words.
Unfortunately, unlike the girl in the other game (Ria), Karma will not become corrupted. Yes, she will sleep with a few boys or girls to achieve her goal.
As for the “contests”... I'm planning a skip button for them. But I'm not very good at coding. I'm working on it. This is the first version, and there will be many improvements in the future.
You'll see more fight and conflict animations than sex scenes.
Thank god for that, i was kind of afraid you would turn Karma into a corrupted slut sex slave over time, glad to hear your going to keep her strong and determineed to fulfil her goal of revenge without destroying her chatacter that we see so far, now im really looking forward to the next realease.