The Russian text is too formal. No one speaks like that in real life. I played the opening scenes, and there are no idioms or slang, and there are too many words in the sentences.It's still an interesting storyline with a very likeable MC but I agree it could definitely be beneficial to make it a more cohesive story. And I believe some things got lost in translation from Russian to English also. But I don't think the dev will spend more time on season 1. Just hope season 2 can continue to improve