Thank you very much for your kind words.
As for a KC comic. Have you got an any ideas for one? What would you like to see in it?
You're welcome, those renders you do are much appreciated. As far as a comic is concerned I have to declare that I much preferred the manipulation path, as it formed a sort of "middle way" which to me was more interesting than a straightforward goody-goody, or "let's release an inner slut" approach. Nobody is that one-dimensional. Slags are pretty boring sometimes. Sequential storylines, as in a comic, don't preclude a variety of trajectories but it's much easier to stick to one at a time.
I believe that one of the ways the story lost credibility was the sheer proliferation of characters. Personality-wise both Brandon & Jacob were believable but just plain nasty and in Jacob's case dull. Jacob was not physically possible, or do penile extension treatments really work? I felt that if I'd been in Mr. Wright's shoes there'd be no way I'd happily hand Katie to other partners. On the other hand, business connections would have been a different matter, if specific circumstances applied, i. e. would a deal be more likely if Katie was temporarily part of it?
I was glad when the father became Katie's step-dad because I don't have incest as a kink but realise we're all different as regards such matters. Bestiality I find totally repellant, (poor old Max), with no need for it in a tale of manipulation or corruption. I would hate to see it in a comic....'nuff said.
When Hannah's Corruption first appeared and for most of it's length, it represented a genuinely erotic high quality adult visual novel. It was spoiled somewhat by tragic endings but it remains an outstanding piece of work. I would really like a Katie comic along somewhat similar lines with no video tricks but with Brian being pushed into the sidelines, whether Katie wants this or not. There are only so many hours in a day and time for Brian would inevitably decrease, not to mention Katie's energy levels if she had to satisfy Wright to a greater extent.
When it comes to body modifications I think that occasional tasteful tattoos and some piercings are enough. Surely Wright wouldn't want to tamper with nature to the extent of making his subject top heavy or spoiling a perfect arse. He may be a blackmailing lecher but he's not stupid. IMHO he should be even more controlling than in the game. Katie being exposed in public as per your pics is a perfect illustration of this approach. Katie being co-erced into dancing in the pub was an example in the game.
Pole-dancing &/or stripping, lesbianism, bdsm and office sex are all possibilities that could & should be developed with the loving guidance of Mr. Wright. My personal preferences would include at least one forced orgasm, (as opposed to "thanking Mr. Wright properly" which would never have happened) and a long over the knee spanking to teach Katie the Wright way of doing things. (I know spanking featured in the game but it was cursory & throw away).
Characters like Hannah, Orlov & Vera certainly belong in the story because they are in Wright's network. I think their personalities should be left intact, though with less treachery, e. g. would friends spike Katie's drink? why?...they weren't going to have sex with her that night, or were they?
Anyway I'd better leave off for now And let the above be an intro to the type of comic I'd like to see. I have ideas for specific scenarios but hopefully we'll revisit the comic concept soon.
