Ren'Py King's Revolt [v0.1.1] [ButtLikeBaoBuns]

[Ali ibn Hassan]

Thnks fr shrng

 

[9alwa]

The previews look good, I have a soft spot for HS models lol
Question though, is the rape tag just there because of the villain intro scene or will that be a more prevalent element in the game?

I'd like to know as well

 

[Vortex@]

Rather not see random people having sex. I'm only interested in the MC and his Li's, not some voyeurism.

I see harem is mentioned, will Lesbian/bi be avoidable??

 

[Johan_0000]

People saying don't listen, or "do what you want for your vision" do not help, or bring anything to any feedback. Yes you should in fact make what you want. But you should also know who you are making it for. You said no ntr, and harem game.

Thank you, I kepp sayin this sh1t. Also thanks to you I know that this game will propose harem. The tag should be added.


I'll follow this game closely (won't play the initial though release I hate those lol)


GL dev/s




THX

 

[longjohngold]

Overall pretty good, it was well enough written that I didn't feel inclined to skip at all (which is a good sign). Will have to see how the setup pays off once we get into the actual story, this was more just the backstory atm. Interesting vibe at the start with the traffickers, hopefully have more of that kinda darker stuff going forwards.

None of the LIs have super grabbed me, that captured posh girl at the start was hotter than any of them. Yadira's the best of the bunch but was much better with long hair, like at the start/office, not totally sold on her actual non-disguised look. Hopefully there'll be some more wild ones in the future now he's a merc, the first 2 girls I found especially kinda dull.

Knowing where you can move around is a bit annoying in the office freeroam, maybe keep the arrows on the screen or something.

"mc" rather than name:

 

[ButtLikeBaoBuns]

Wow a decent start with more than enough content for a first release, the only problem is that sometimes the characters name doesn't change when speaking it happened 3,4 times ,and there were a few instances where the mc gets called as 'MC' other than those few issues it's a 10/10 game . Really liked the last emotional scene

Noted with the errors. Thanks for letting me know and appreciate that you enjoyed the game

 

[ButtLikeBaoBuns]

dev really needs to go over his script and make sure the correct speaker is listed there are a ton of instances of incorrect name on dialogue. Or referred to as MC.

aside from that an some poor english in spots, this is a fairly strong start for a good story/game
given the two distinct sides Id also suggest adding save game naming

Sorry bout that, and thanks for the suggestion, Ill find out how to do that save game naming

 

[ButtLikeBaoBuns]

I'd like to know as well

I wouldn't say that my game focuses on rape rape, added the rape tag because it does contain some non-consensual scenes, but it is mainly more to a journey of domination and trainer, of how you conquer a girl, maybe in a little darker and spicier way rather than just rape rape, u feel me?

 

[ZaynX]

Hey Dev!
What are the planned tags?

 

[ZaynX]

How frequent are the updates and how many renders each update contains.

 

[Tenchip3d0]

I think Developer might get confused with his own VN plots.

 

[ButtLikeBaoBuns]

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Watch me aura farm dawg

 

[ButtLikeBaoBuns]

 

[ButtLikeBaoBuns]

I think Developer might get confused with his own VN plots. View attachment 4809327

HAHAHAHA

 

[ryansFLYIN]

I can't understand what the fuss is all about. It's not a voyeur scene at all. I don't think it's meant to be hot or anything. It's literally a story plot of some bad guys trafficking women. Like 2 images to set the tone? And the one with the boss banging his secretary is some meme scene from a movie or something. Literally nothing to do with the voyeur or NTR fetish. I have a feeling most people who are hating haven't actually played the game. And yeah, I got some sex scenes with MC within my first playthrough.

I don't know what the meme scene is from, so to me it was just a weird scene to include.
Edit: Wait, is this from Horrible Bosses?

As someone else mentioned before, a human/sex trafficker using their 'products' is just stupid, and you can show what they are without that kind of scene. You can show them locked/chained up or something. The scene as-is is just over the top and did feel like a way to put in random sex for the sake of random sex. Maybe it's meant to portray the guy as stupid, but it just felt unnecessary to convey the scene. That being said, I didn't like the scene because (I guess it did its job) of what is happening in the broad stroke, not specifically because it is being shown, but that it is happening.

Also, Niko is hotter than both of the LI's. Just saying.

But I did get two scenes with Aiko, just bummed that she is only a side girl.

 

[Lucas LU LU]

Professional rage baiter haha. Welps anyways thanks for the thoughts and comments. appreciate it

Nice argument you put as much thought into it as you did with the game. Although surprised you didn't include some random sex gif though, here I do it for you

 

[kibaris]

The game seem promising, the premice of the story seem interesting enough,realy liked the girl too and happy to see the side girl arent just there for sex and have some developement , but are just less present in the story.
I'm not realy a fan of this system with locked choices though, at least not the way it is currently in the game.

I dont know how it will be with futur girls, but for these two it was realy punitive, if you do just one wrong choice in one of the two path the first scene with both of them is blocked.
for me it was because i didnt want to insult the guy in the street at the begining when we meet Myu, so i couldnt have the scene with Aiko later, but since i was too advanced on rebel (Sato and the boss make it difficult not to be...) i couldnt access the one with Myu either, all that only for a single "bad" choice at the begining.

Also you can even miss the two girl path, if you are more advanced on the rebell path but arent punching the boss for the major choice , no path with Aiko and vice versa for Myu, if you are losing your shit one time but are more on the integrator path, it's over with both girl and they leave you alone after the shopping session with them.

And it isnt realy normal to me, the game present 3 path but in the end for now the game reward being on a full rebell or integrator and is punishing neutral, so if it was to do that it probably would have been better to make 3 kinetic path (not saying that i want that to happen) since even deviating a little from one of the two main is punished, otherwise it would be good to maybe balancing better the points and choices to leave a little more freedom for the player.

 

[ButtLikeBaoBuns]

Nice argument you put as much thought into it as you did with the game. Although surprised you didn't include some random sex gif though, here I do it for you
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You're like the 100th one that comment and trying to attack the same thing and I argued, explained and even apologised as a new dev many times that shits you dont like is not intentional. And honestly now I do not give a fuck anymore because I did not intentioanlly piss people off. Maybe read the thread or play the game, and I'm trying to be respectful here. I do whatever the fuck I want, and I said what I do and provide in this game.

 

[MangoTree]

Zemax Hi, tagging you since you create walkthrough mods for so many honey select games. Haven't played the game yet myself so I don't know if it needs one yet but figured I'll let you know so you can check it out when you're able and create a mod If you can and want too. cheers and thanks.

 

[Wolfram99]

Hmm, the only choices where you can negatively/neutrally reply to a girl seem to be the very first choice, and when you deny looking at boobs. Otherwise it feels like MC is flirting 100% of the time.
Can't comment too much since the game didn't manage to hook me in.