So, actual review of the game.
Pros: (not much to say here)
Art is great. Keep up the Great work
Cons: (also, not much to say here)
The scene with Valentine falling over drunk, make that a CG, it doesn't look well with one panel being her ass and the other being her face. Its better off as a CG.
Speaking of art, alot of the introductions feel odd, this could be due in part that the introduction feels like asset(i.e boobs, ass, etc) panel, then to full character. I think it should be Full character, THAN highlight the assets, makes the transitions in theory smoother.
Another con would be the town and the forest feel lifeless like just dead. I think the forest needs to look/feel like a forest, right now it's like a grassy plain. The Town feels so barren, like it needs citizens, tho if the implication is that the player is located in a small area NEAR a town, I can get by that. Tho I still believe it needs people, or just something to make it feel lived in. (I can't offer more to this as this only an alpha and I'm just giving out ideas/ criticism.)
Review/ Ideas/ Where do you plan to go with this game?
Questions:
What is the goal of this game?
What's the plot, is there any?
What's the player motivation?
What are your inspirations for this game?
Will there be combat, will that combat have weight to it (meaning does it actually matter, is there a purpose to it, not just in there to be in there).
But the most important questions I have to ask are.
Will there be combat sex? (If combat is to be implemented)
How will you go about integrating Sex into the combat? (The general thing, not necessarily vaginal and anal. Foreplay is also being referenced).
Is there any player choice into the Plot that can dictate the corruption flow of the game's female cast?
Is this game going to be linear? (I'm not asking for 4 or 16 multiple choice endings, but maybe like idk 2 or 3)
Is every character going to be the typical, positive outlook towards sex archetype? (The thing I HATE most about that is they get fucked by MC and be like instant mind break or some shit), Or will some be like eh no, not rly, which will require you to convince them? (Adding more into the corruption tag).
Will there be Minigames? Most importantly mini games that utilize the sex/combat in them. (If you plan to do that). Think Karryn's Prison.
Costumes? To be fair, not as important just asking.
Who are you planning on adding?
Don't worry about pre-established relationships, you can just say in text this is just a different universe in which character A and B didn't get together, but the events still run parallel.
IF you want character ideas I got plenty! From Bayonetta, Rias Gremory, Yourichi, Rouge the bat, 2B and A2. Etc... of course ask your patrons what they want first as they are your supporters, but it's always good to sometimes put in YOUR favorite character too and if u want this site
End of Questions
Long story short, I can't give a full review. Not much to go off of. Just question and ideas. Most importantly tho, if you want your game to stand out. You need to make ideas, concept and execution stand out. See Karryn's Prison for reference, not saying you have to be like that game but I for sure believe that game has some of the best execution, ideas and concept in any H-Game in history. From seamless sex integration into the combat, from mini games and a Nice Core gameplay loop that exist with a PURPOSE (It loops into each other, from sex to combat, from sex combat etc.).
I think the idea of this game is interesting, I can't say much but I do hope it just turn into the standard H-game with good looking characters but just a CG hunt disguised as a game.
