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should be but we were poor at the time? "Not so long ago all my relatives past away" maybe should be not so long ago all my relatives passed away for some odd reason. "he was living in a bit far town from my village" dhould be he was living in a town a bit far away from my village. "It's already a week as I traweling to my new house and new life" should be It has been a week since traveling to my new house and life. "It is late at night and only that I see..." should be It's late at night, the only light I see coming from an old tavern." *knock knock knock* "is someone there?"... and many more typos....
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