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I can't add animations right now as it's two times more expensive and way more time consuming to make than still pictures. It's unsustainable.
One of the solution I found was to add those comics pages during fights. It wasn't there during the first playtest build and most of the playtesters told me fights lacked dynamics.
I'll think about adding animations if I get enough support to go for it, but sadly I can't promise anything right now.
I do plan to add more complex fight in the future. I just wanted to avoid starting with a very complex first fight as adding more actions would require even more illustrations.
But it's one of my goal to add more complexity into the game, relationship and fights.
For some Li yes.
As much as I like the game so far, there are a lot of grammatical inconsistencies:
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Thank you for this colossal work. It's truly helpful. Unfortunately, English is not my native language, and despite multiple proofreads, there are always errors that slip through the cracks. However, I try to note the mistakes I make to prevent them from happening again.
Letting a space between the last word of a sentence and the question mark or exclamation point following it, for example, is such a common mistake since it is the correct way to write in my native language.
I noticed quite a few missing commas among the mistakes you pointed out. I'll take note of that for next time.
I'll try to upload an updated version this week to fix all the little mistakes people helped me to spot.
Thank you again.
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I like what's going on so far. The characters are fairly well established and consistent, the plot has me somewhat intrigued and the sex scenes are also well written and make up for the lack of accurate visuals with their detailed descriptions.
I have a number of criticisms but I'll only mention the main one for now: it's unnecessarily long. Many descriptions and dialogue scenes could be trimmed down and still retain their full meaning while possibly also getting rid of some of the, shall we say, less impressive bits of writing, like a few comedic moments that felt a bit forced.
I have a number of criticisms but I'll only mention the main one for now: it's unnecessarily long. Many descriptions and dialogue scenes could be trimmed down and still retain their full meaning while possibly also getting rid of some of the, shall we say, less impressive bits of writing, like a few comedic moments that felt a bit forced.
- Feb 19, 2019
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This is really a great start! You can feel that every detail didn't went unnoticed: from the lore of the original anime to the new characters, everything feels smooth, even natural regardless of the hentai plot. The CG are pretty nice too! The gameplay however is quite lacking, I think 3 choices for a Battle Fuck mechanic is a bit poor... I hope we will get more choices in the future, especially considering the hint of the possibility of different narrative paths. Anyways I will keep following the development and I hope you will succeed.
My only complaint is that Ryuko's boobs look kinda weird in her naked standing portrait. Her nipples are both facing straight forward despite her boobs facing slightly outwards. I draw a lot of NSFW stuff myself and know that nipple placement can be hard to get right though, so I get it if you don't wanna fix it lol. Slight critique aside, I'm loving everything about this and can't wait for the next update
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The whole game is indeed quite wordy. I try, at the very least, to ensure that each scene is useful for the plot. That's also why, despite the school setting, there will be almost no "class" scenes. I hope to improve over time, and I will probably ask more feedback about it from all the players that played this game.
Programming is definitely my biggest weakness. Integrating a more complex combat system will be difficult for me. Nevertheless, this first battle is certainly a first attempt, and I will have to do better for the next ones. The issue I currently face is the balance between the complexity of the battles and the need to illustrate most of the action. The more complicated the battles are, the more illustrations I need, the more resources I require, and the longer people will have to wait. It's important to maintain reasonable deadlines between each update while striving for improvement. One solution was the addition of a 'comic pages' format to illustrate the battles, which didn't exist in the game's first test version. I'll continue to explore and find other solutions.
This is the very first sprite that was made, and I also think it's the one that needs the most touching up. Unfortunately, it's also the sprite of the main character.
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Yes, it's the main focus of the game.
while i get the game's intend is to have the nude combat, will we get outfits for ryuko or satsuki like the senketsu or junketsu outfits?
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Je me suis refais le jeu et j'ai vraiment hâte de voir la suite, j'ai effectué deux sauvegardes aussi avec le choix de fin et je pense que c'est ce que je vais faire si il y aura plusieurs routes différentes à l'avenir.
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I've replayed the game and I'm really looking forward to the sequel, I've made two saves too with the end choice and I think that's what I'll do if there are several different routes in the future.
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I've replayed the game and I'm really looking forward to the sequel, I've made two saves too with the end choice and I think that's what I'll do if there are several different routes in the future.
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Knowing how tricky saves can be and how challenging it is to get back into the story after a long waiting period, I plan to add, with each new update, the option to restart the game from any point. I will also add a short recap in order to refresh everyone's memory, so nobody get lost.