- Apr 23, 2019
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Nice game. I am liking the storyline, and although I am not a fan of younger, smaller MCs on the weaker side, this one is relatively ambitious, and wishes to improve for a major goal, so I like him. Him not simping for Ann or Madison towards the end of their interactions in 15.c helped too.
As constructive criticism, there are a few typos. I could read through all of it and understand, but sometimes it was a bit distracting.
Also, something to keep track of what you are supposed to do would help a lot. Something like "Ann is waiting for me at the Arts Studio. I should take the bus there"
As constructive criticism, there are a few typos. I could read through all of it and understand, but sometimes it was a bit distracting.
Also, something to keep track of what you are supposed to do would help a lot. Something like "Ann is waiting for me at the Arts Studio. I should take the bus there"