Just finished playing the update, and I wanted to offer some feedback.
I enjoyed the update for the most part. It was good to have a quest log so there was Z good understanding of what the player needed to do next. That being said, I think there are some improvements in game flow that could make things better:
* I would have liked to have the option to pursue multiple quests during the game. For example, if I had the option to Work for Bernard and make money OR pursue Mary OR pursue Leah OR move forward with training rather than be locked into one path. That's a strength of a sandbox style game--the player can decide how they want to move forward and at what pace.
* I know it's part of the main story, but I felt kind of rushed into the training path. I wanted to take more time to explore.
* The game still needs translation. I could understand what was happening without difficulty, but the language was pretty stiff and there were many grammatical errors, primarily in terms if tense and sentence structure.
* The only issue I have with the art is the poses of the characters in many of the scenes. I don't need them jumping off the walls or anything, but simply having them standing around for the most part isn't very visually interesting.
Overall I think things are headed in the right direction. I did enjoy plthe game, and it never felt grindy. The art is fine as far as I'm concerned in that it's clean and easy to follow, if a little static.