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- Nov 30, 2018
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Much better now my line of sight will no longer be distracted 
- Nov 28, 2017
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Definitely felling the "Live to fight" wibe, but theres only so much unique ideas out there. Not necessarily a bad thing, renders checks out, MC looking good (not some 12yr old goblin), about the story, well am mostly skiping text on early devolopment games (just checking if game has potential, not wasting my time until further development).Would be nice to have a background story about MC and his life before.. Looking forward to the next update..
- Oct 23, 2016
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Okay, few thoughts.
The writing is... passable. It's not good, the English isn't good, but it's okay.
The renders are about the same, one or two errors in regards to clothing.
All in all, this could become quite a good game, with a bit more work on the writing. Like Alice wears a dress when her boyfriend shows up and in the next render she is in her lingerie.
Two things I felt were weird.
1. Why would you show the MC's giant, humongous dick about 10 times with the same render in the shower.
It's absolutely not necessary. Show it if something comes out of it, meaning a girl comes in or something or at least he fantasizes about one.
2. Does the MC really think the moment Alice's face is covered in your cum is when you should tell her she looks beautiful?
Because tbh, she looked rather gross in that moment.
The writing is... passable. It's not good, the English isn't good, but it's okay.
The renders are about the same, one or two errors in regards to clothing.
All in all, this could become quite a good game, with a bit more work on the writing. Like Alice wears a dress when her boyfriend shows up and in the next render she is in her lingerie.
Two things I felt were weird.
1. Why would you show the MC's giant, humongous dick about 10 times with the same render in the shower.
It's absolutely not necessary. Show it if something comes out of it, meaning a girl comes in or something or at least he fantasizes about one.
2. Does the MC really think the moment Alice's face is covered in your cum is when you should tell her she looks beautiful?
Because tbh, she looked rather gross in that moment.
- Oct 23, 2016
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Here, one render she wears a dress before opening the door:
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The next one, when the door is open, she wears her lingerie:
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Honestly, I really don't like it to get dicks shoved in my face so often. It really felt weird that you would show the dude showering so many times for no obvious reason.
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- May 11, 2018
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Maybe the rage of seeing her ex caused her dress to burn into thin air, leaving her in her lingerie
- Jun 14, 2018
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God damn the name of this game should be ha-ha. Dev is not the only one who has stepped into this mine and received a shit storm as feedback.
Many people on this site already complaint about it and the dev kinda promised to drastically reduced his usage of ha-ha ... lets just hope he is a man of word ... haha ...
- May 6, 2017
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MooN <3 When you release a new bugfix for your game, please change the version name by adding an a, b, c, etc to the filename. This way players can tell the difference between the versions (and so can we when we're mirroring your game for you) It also makes supporting players easier because you can ask them what version they're seeing an error on.
It also makes supporting players easier because you can ask them what version they're seeing an error on.
- May 29, 2018
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Please no.
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- Sep 6, 2017
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- May 10, 2018
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i wouldn't have taken that comment serious....
the game seems to have potential, but you should work on the writing, not just on the grammar aspect, but the whole story writing part. everything seems so rushed and just looked over.
looking forward to seeing what the next version brings to the table.
looking forward to seeing what the next version brings to the table.
- Oct 5, 2018
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Fan Sigs/Fan Signatures:
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https://attachments.f95zone.to/2019/10/447840_KM-Fan-Sig---Leah.gif
https://attachments.f95zone.to/2019/10/447839_KM-Fan-Sig-A.gif