I can't do this anymore.
This is getting beyond a joke.
What is it with eastern games and shit writing?
I managed to get through the first 3 battles until we get to a war camp. Some little shit comes in and says she wants Aisha and hints that she'll tie her up and whip the shit out of her, Aisha declines and this fuck stick of an MC tried to convince her to join and get tortured.
Why, oh fucking why, do all these Japanese MC's have to be idiotic twats?
I carried on ... I should have stopped.
There is a scene where he goes on a walk with a girl and her dog.
She gets into the water naked.
What follows is some of the worst writing i've ever let my eyes skim over.
I mentioned once in another thread about idiots in H games seeing a pair of tits and being unable to look away while not hearing anything else and having an inner monologue that reads like a 13 year olds diary that just found out what breasts are. All the while talking about nosebleeds.
That scene could have looked quite nice if the writer hadn't made the MC into the stereotypical Japanese male lead that has no idea how to act around women despite having nothing but women around him.
I don't ask for much.
I just want a normal MC that can hold a conversation without devolving into a drooling halfwit at the sight of flesh.
So many scenes ruined by this awful writing. I wouldn't mind if it was an isolated incident but it's in so many translated games it makes me think Japan only has 1 writer.
It's made worse when i've read the same things appearing in western works. It's like a disease that's spreading.
It needs to stop.
Edit - can confirm this was most certainly written by a virgin that has never shared the company of the opposite sex.
How could I possibly know this?
Indirect kissing.
At first I thought it was a joke but nope, it get brought up several time to the point where grown adults get embarrassed about sharing a bit of bread because the woman had taken a bite and "oh noes ... it will be an indirect kiss" ..... WHAT IS THIS BOLLOCKS?
It's full of porn yet it reads like the ramblings of a child that's been asked to explain what boys and girls do.