Gotta say, referring to the protagonist as 'you' really threw me off. Being a heterosexual male, the allure of a female protagonist is in being an observer. The narrative treating me as the female protagonist is just too weird for me
This isn't a critique, just an observation. I am fortunate in having bajillions of games that do cater to my specific tastes. Good luck with the development!
Astelia: "My hero! Just like in fairy tales, the brave knight rescues the helpless princess." You: "...Fairy tale, or not, that dress COMES OFF by midnight."