VN HTML Lapis Arcanum [v0.5] [IndomitableAshur]

[AbsoluteMadman]

I like the flavor idea of being more aggressively dominating the women, or more protectively/passively making them fall for you, so i do think there should be more consequences to your hidden karma score. maybe like a mostly blue, neutral and mostly red choice route?
the writing so far quality-wise served its purpose, you'll get better the more you write.

 

[JNugz]

While the story is a bit inconsistent, as the dev said. this is a good start, definetly waiting for more! Only complain from my side is that I need to choose between the girls.

Agreed, the game has awesome potential!

 

[Dicaprio17]

When is the new update coming?

 

[Chaosslayer]

When is the new update coming?

Let me know

 

[IndomitableAshur]

The update is more or less done. The reason I haven't posted it is because I need to figure some patreon stuff out first (set up a discord, publish tiers etc.) and I took on a work project earlier this month which has turned into a hellscape. On the upside, I only have a few more days before I finish that project and I'm free for the summer. Hope you'll join my thoughts and prayers for a release next week.

I might add a couple more scenes as well to make the update worth the extra wait.

 

[TFurguson69]

This needs the novel tag. There really is not any free roam in this game.

 

[Tyrranus]

fun little update

 

[youraccount69]

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[Chaosslayer]

The update is more or less done. The reason I haven't posted it is because I need to figure some patreon stuff out first (set up a discord, publish tiers etc.) and I took on a work project earlier this month which has turned into a hellscape. On the upside, I only have a few more days before I finish that project and I'm free for the summer. Hope you'll join my thoughts and prayers for a release next week.

I might add a couple more scenes as well to make the update worth the extra wait.

My bdays next week lets go

 

[Chaosslayer]

The update is more or less done. The reason I haven't posted it is because I need to figure some patreon stuff out first (set up a discord, publish tiers etc.) and I took on a work project earlier this month which has turned into a hellscape. On the upside, I only have a few more days before I finish that project and I'm free for the summer. Hope you'll join my thoughts and prayers for a release next week.

I might add a couple more scenes as well to make the update worth the extra wait.

Had a question so I chose the mom/grandma ? instead of the rich blonde heiress will I still be able to get her or no

 

[IndomitableAshur]

Had a question so I chose the mom/grandma ? instead of the rich blonde heiress will I still be able to get her or no

Next update or so may or may not have a plotline involving the Vanleers. Both characters will be available. Happy birthday!

 

[Froilan]

Thanks for the update

 

[qchill44]

I d/l the update but when I open it it say 0.3 version...

 

[IndomitableAshur]

I d/l the update but when I open it it say 0.3 version...

It is 0.4, I forgot to change that part of the sidebar. My bad. If in doubt, check the changelog.

 

[qchill44]

Well then there is a problem because I load my save from 0.3 and there is no new content.

 

[IndomitableAshur]

Well then there is a problem because I load my save from 0.3 and there is no new content.

The newest update contains content with Lacey/Pamela, Serena, and revisits with Kat and Donna. If you can't access these scenes, dm me your save and I'll take a look for you.

 

[ashrana88]

0.4 is a really good update, I enjoyed it a lot!

It's hard to verbalise everything I liked without just retreading points, but the prose feels like it continues to improve. There are lots of great details in the writing that improve the sensuality and undercurrent of affection in the scenes, and narration is getting more varied and distinct.

I love little written details that enhance the portrayal of the women's beauty, femininity, and yearning, such as how they giggle, walk or carry themselves. The common sense adjustment and subconscious slutty behaviours when they see the protag and struggle to hide their attraction is really fun; Donna in particular is a great example.

Even though a lot of the girls don't get explicit story moments and focus on smut, the scenes this update felt more varied, and an undercurrent of personality and unique kinks shined through. It felt less repetitive even though it all still covers the same overall fetishes (that I love).

Donna's rape-play, Kat's shameless cheating and cum-play, Lacey's clapping bubble butt and muscle worship, Pamela's haughtiness/submissiveness and baby crazy urges, Nancy's hyper-stamina, Naomi's trad wife transformation; definite highlights for me. Perfect mix of wholesome and wicked.

I also liked how Jane got a micro scene in the narrative transition. Flavour text and media that is more brief, but gives the impression of how many girls the protag is satisfying throughout his day would be fun without necessarily requiring the workload of a full scene every time. It would also lean into the casual/free-use sex kink.

Really amazing choice of models and media too, milfy bimbo splendour and fit hourglass figures, but I love that writing is the priority and the media accentuates it. Plus the large variety of creampies, I'm excited to see the payoff from every 10/10 in town getting knocked up.

It'll be fun to see the lore around the witches and women in town open up more, I enjoy smutty world-building. There's a fun mix of empowerment and objectifying depravity, and I'm keen to see how characters like Deanna get involved in the main story.
It wouldn't surprise me if there is a curse/blessing on the bloodline of the men and women in town that the protag is destined to break (or heighten).

I hope you keep the motivation up, it's really great!

 

[IndomitableAshur]

0.4 is a really good update, I enjoyed it a lot!

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Yeah, I've been trying to come up with "archetypes" or character-specific traits/kinks for characters. I want to avoid just having similar generic encounters where you could basically switch out the characters and nobody would notice. The idea is for the writing to reflect the nature of specific characters. Doing more "foreplay" is also fun when the characters/kinks are interesting and helps build tension, like Kat and Donna's scenes.

As a result though, writing scenes is more challenging. Some times it comes by itself, another time I'll be stuck on one scene for a week. I do like the challenge though, and I am getting a better hang of it over time. I'm also moving from a mentality of "I should have a new character here just because" to a "X happens which introduces a new character who has Y relationship to PC" or if I feel like the story hits a point where new character encounters should be introduced, I work out who they are and what their kink is first so I have solid base to work from for an interesting scene instead of just generic stuff. There probably will still be some generic stuff in the future though.

Donna's first scene was my favorite scene for a long time because it was interesting, fun to write, and more or less wrote itself.

The micro-scene thing is something I'm trying out. Jane is a prominent character just by the fact that she lives in the same house as the MC. I can't have her be gone 90% of the time, but writing full scenes for her every update is also creatively draining. This is an easier compromise and I feel like her character is well-established enough to where I can get away with shorter scenes for her. There's still gonna be some bigger ones down the line though.

Lastly I want to say, this is the best feedback I've gotten so far (and not just because you only have positive things to say I swear). You noticed stuff I've consciously made an effort to work on which feels great. Thanks a lot, I really appreciate it and it does help motivate me.

 

[Chaosslayer]

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Yeah, I've been trying to come up with "archetypes" or character-specific traits/kinks for characters. I want to avoid just having similar generic encounters where you could basically switch out the characters and nobody would notice. The idea is for the writing to reflect the nature of specific characters. Doing more "foreplay" is also fun when the characters/kinks are interesting and helps build tension, like Kat and Donna's scenes.

As a result though, writing scenes is more challenging. Some times it comes by itself, another time I'll be stuck on one scene for a week. I do like the challenge though, and I am getting a better hang of it over time. I'm also moving from a mentality of "I should have a new character here just because" to a "X happens which introduces a new character who has Y relationship to PC" or if I feel like the story hits a point where new character encounters should be introduced, I work out who they are and what their kink is first so I have solid base to work from for an interesting scene instead of just generic stuff. There probably will still be some generic stuff in the future though.

Donna's first scene was my favorite scene for a long time because it was interesting, fun to write, and more or less wrote itself.

The micro-scene thing is something I'm trying out. Jane is a prominent character just by the fact that she lives in the same house as the MC. I can't have her be gone 90% of the time, but writing full scenes for her every update is also creatively draining. This is an easier compromise and I feel like her character is well-established enough to where I can get away with shorter scenes for her. There's still gonna be some bigger ones down the line though.

Lastly I want to say, this is the best feedback I've gotten so far (and not just because you only have positive things to say I swear). You noticed stuff I've consciously made an effort to work on which feels great. Thanks a lot, I really appreciate it and it does help motivate me.

My bday goon will succeed thanks to u

 

[AbsoluteMadman]

the 0.4 update definitely had an improvement in writing and is making me hunger for more, especially how you are gonna approach the taking over/uniting the covens under you.