RPGM Ren'Py Laura: Lustful Secrets [Ch. 1 RenPy v0.11 BETA] [Dark Anu]

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KingsRaiden

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Will there be American English later on? jk

Loved the Bunnies, I hope there will be more of them in the future. We only had the Bachelor Party and the short club scene before.
 
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cleanfeel said:
I played a few minutes. Here's my thoughts.

Pros:
1. Isometric graphics of the map is refreshing
2. Amount of locations on map shows ability to create a believable world (at least physically)

Cons:
1. Writing is poor - (more later)
2. Proportions of women is off - Kim Kardashian's ass is not a good indicator of a good hot body. Go look at the Olympics athletes in Tokyo if you want to see what perfect female asses should look like. Kim's ass is all fat and plastic surgery, which is gross. It's not natural. Go to reddit /r/gonewild if you still can't figure out. There's no excuse for not knowing what a shapely ass should look like)

Writing is the core of any narrative driven game experiences, such as the ones here in h-games. There's a lot of issues with the writing in this game, I will list them in order of pressing matter.

1. Lack of characterization for wife, daughter, and husband - Who are they? What does wife do? What does daughter do? Where are they living? What kind of neighborhood is it? What does wife want in her life? Is she a homemaker (unemployed leecher)? Is daughter a student? Does she have a job? Does she have a boyfriend? What is wife scared of? What makes her happy? etc. etc. Learn how to do it:
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2. Lack of real meaningful dialog between characters - Biggest examples being the conversation that the MC had with his wife when he told her "Hey babe, without asking you, I am going to have some stranger live in our house". You need more life experiences or watch more TV if you think the way you portrayed that conversation is how real people talk. It's completely bogus
3. Too many side characters - I don't give a shit about the neighbor when you can't even get the 4 characters you have correct: MC, wife, daughter, and Marketing Consultant. Too many characters don't make your game better, well developed characters do.

Overall the writing in this game is just poor. It sounds like someone with no life experiences trying to emulate real life. The first thing that jumped out to me was when the Boss chewing MC out in the office. It's 100% not believable and not how real corporate BS meetings go down (at least here in America where I work).
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FAT ass isnt very attractive to me at all, neither are balloon tits. Not sure why developers are going this lazy route. Game needs to be more hardcore, with corruption/blackmail because shes basically enjoying every dick
 
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cbomb

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Dodzh said:
I'm taking a look as this does not happen on my end. I'll post an update if necessary. In the future please quote or replay to my post so i get alerted.
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You don't have to waste your time. Seems the "universal gallery unlock" works. At least it did for me. Up to you though.
 
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cbomb said:
You don't have to waste your time. Seems the "universal gallery unlock" works. At least it did for me. Up to you though.
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Not true; plus, this version i made does not change the game or game save at all; simply removing the mod makes it as it was before
 
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uncommonsence

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hello there. any clue what's the difference between old chapter 1 and remade one?

UPD I've noticed that old was build on rpgm instead of renpy so I'm updating my question to whether there is any content difference among versions. thanks
 
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cbomb

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Dodzh said:
Not true; plus, this version i made does not change the game or game save at all; simply removing the mod makes it as it was before
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Cool and thanks. I have to point out though that the universal unlocker did unlock the scenes for me so it is true. Cant speak for any changes it made to the saves though. Assuming yours is a better and safer option so appreciate it and you.
 
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IHATESlowburnBluBallgames

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Bjorntufuk said:
Honestly not even worth it. Fucking lame but if you are a completist just look for objects and such. One of them is finding the crow and another is something in the street at night right before the update ends (can't remember which). There's also the porn magazine in her Son's room.

Both are pretty weak. First is that obese piece of shit having some wet dream about Laura and the other is some badly animated thing where she fucks a bunch of black midgets.

What's with all the fat guys in this thing anyway? Who's asking for this? My only guess is that most of these devs weigh 400 pounds and are living out there fantasies through the game remincising about the good old days when they could actually see their cock when taking a piss.
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makcim334

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нет хуже чем муж самуэль уебан который выглядит гротескно ни выебать нормально не удовлетворить .поэтому жена пошла во все тяжкие .остальные терпимо уроды но ебут его жену а он пробка .бггг there is no worse than husband Samuel the idiot who looks grotesque, can't fuck normally, can't satisfy. that's why the wife went to all lengths. the rest are tolerable freaks, but they fuck his wife and he's a cork. lol
 
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