I like the humour, the writing is fine, the ladies look great, story not super original, but fine as well, but for me, there definitely was too much exposition in the game.
When I read the dialogue and thought during the drive to the university, I thought to myself, "holy exposition, Batman!"
Because given that these two are childhood friends AND experienced all they are talking about, there would be zero need for them to talk like this about their past. It feels incredibly forced and is also completely unnecessary, because during conversations with the MCs other new friends and colleagues you basically repeat every little bit of information we get there, and a lot of it more than once. And even if so far not everything was repeated elsewhere, it would still be better to insert it in some conversation where not everyone participating ALREADY knows what happened.
Overall, this is a great start, this was the one thing I found seriously irritating.
