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XKL27

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I'm fine with a rework of EP 1 if it didn't slow down development, but The Entrepeneur still really needs better endings.
 
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jadepaladin

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Looking forward to ep 3. It's not a make or break update for me, I'm probably committed to this for the long haul but I'll be happy to get out of introduction land and onto actual paths.
 
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mike12013

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I lost a lot of my interest when i learned Lana isn't a LI, outside of Aurora and Taylor, the rest don't really do a lot for me.

I'll keep up with it for sure, but it did bum me out
 

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Just now got around to Ep 2 and it's definitely keeping up quality. Pacing is really nice, writing is good, characters are very well done.
Huge fan of Miranda and Rose, seeing Miranda turbo-signing absolutely wrecked my sides.
Aurora is also just nuclear fallout levels of toxic and with more red flags than Turkey.

Honestly, really excited for the next chapter, this was really enjoyable.
 

mike12013

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There's probaby a good reason for it. We just have to wait and see. She's too close to the MC without there being a good reason for it.
It just feels weird that a girl who you end up having to bunk with, is at least physically attracted to and has seemingly good chemistry with the MC isn't an option.

Interested to see what it could be, maybe MisterMaya is planning on her dropping out soon
 

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It just feels weird that a girl who you end up having to bunk with, is at least physically attracted to and has seemingly good chemistry with the MC isn't an option.

Interested to see what it could be, maybe MisterMaya is planning on her dropping out soon
While it's weird, it's definitely pretty interesting from a design standpoint, I can't think of any other games off of the top of my head that has sprung a character like that on the MC without them being an LI.
 

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While it's weird, it's definitely pretty interesting from a design standpoint, I can't think of any other games off of the top of my head that has sprung a character like that on the MC without them being an LI.
I can think of a VN where the LI was a travelling partner of the MC, has sex with him, and then gets written out for a while so other things can happen to the MC. LI comes back, reconnects, then leaves over story events, never to return. Angered quite a few because she seemed like she was written to be a main LI but ended up not being one.
 

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I can think of a VN where the LI was a travelling partner of the MC, has sex with him, and then gets written out for a while so other things can happen to the MC. LI comes back, reconnects, then leaves over story events, never to return. Angered quite a few because she seemed like she was written to be a main LI but ended up not being one.
Alright THAT'S a weird one. Having a yo-yo LI that turns out to be not an LI is kind of a mistake honestly, if you're going to write a compelling character that turns out to be not an LI, you kinda need to go about it in the right way and not roller-coaster that shit. Atleast in my opinion.

Out of curiosity, what VN is that? Doesn't ring a bell.
 

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Alright THAT'S a weird one. Having a yo-yo LI that turns out to be not an LI is kind of a mistake honestly, if you're going to write a compelling character that turns out to be not an LI, you kinda need to go about it in the right way and not roller-coaster that shit. Atleast in my opinion.

Out of curiosity, what VN is that? Doesn't ring a bell.
Ellaria.

Thankfully there is no chance of that getting pulled here. I'm kinda glad Lana was upfront about things and didn't try to string it along and then drop it right before the ending as some kind of twist.

Removing her from the LI pool allows her to get used in a lot of ways that won't come with the backlash of "you harmed/killed/affected" my LI in some way.
 

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I can think of a VN where the LI was a travelling partner of the MC, has sex with him, and then gets written out for a while so other things can happen to the MC. LI comes back, reconnects, then leaves over story events, never to return. Angered quite a few because she seemed like she was written to be a main LI but ended up not being one.
I always wanted to try that one but reading this makes me less inclined to do so if im being honest now
 

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Ellaria.

Thankfully there is no chance of that getting pulled here. I'm kinda glad Lana was upfront about things and didn't try to string it along and then drop it right before the ending as some kind of twist.

Removing her from the LI pool allows her to get used in a lot of ways that won't come with the backlash of "you harmed/killed/affected" my LI in some way.
Huh, I do remember scrolling past that game but never checked it out.

Yeah, I mean it's definitely interesting and opens up a few doors in terms of storylines that the dev can do. Lana in general is a really well written character and it was a great idea to keep things upfront in terms of communication, even if some people end up disappointed, they atleast won't feel betrayed by it.
 

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Huh, I do remember scrolling past that game but never checked it out.

Yeah, I mean it's definitely interesting and opens up a few doors in terms of storylines that the dev can do. Lana in general is a really well written character and it was a great idea to keep things upfront in terms of communication, even if some people end up disappointed, they atleast won't feel betrayed by it.
tbh I still have and playing a Lana save even tho I know she isn't a LI officially. It just helps me sleep better at night to not think about it and act like she is one despite the facts. That and im hoping this dev's pulls one of those cards ive seen in other AVN's with certain LI. Where a side girl is technically a side girl but she has a big enough role and path that she is more in the middle between side and main even if she doesn't get an ending id be happy with that much.
 
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