Lana I just find it crazy she is a side girl cause she doesn't come across one until she is just put to the side. I kind of wish Episode 1 didn't spend so much time building her up if she was gonna be a side girl if im being honest. As that chapter build up my hopes alot with her to tear them down as she is still my favorite LI if I would include side girls.
I 100% agree with this. The only reason to keep Lana as a side girl is because she isn't looking for anything serious... But neither is the MC at this point, so that really doesn't matter. Lana is a sweet girl, and I wish we had more actual conversations with her to discover more depth to her personality. You're right about her falling to the side, and it's a shame.
Rose : It's just the lack of progression on their path for me. Also she does some questionable things for a best friend that made her come across in a bad light for me and let others catch up. ( the library thing) Also doesn't help outside of some comedy bits here and there she feels like she is almost forgotten about at times.
As the season went on, Rose gave more and more impressions of being a cuck queen. If this was a harem game, that's the role she'd play. She's not jealous of the MC or the women he sleeps with; she's annoyed when he doesn't tell her the deets. I agree about the lack of progression on her path. Writing-wise, I think this was explained nicely, with the MC getting used to the new normal and not giving her the same one-on-one attention as before. But I am frustrated with the MC really considering her as just a friend. Even when she presses on him that she's becoming a woman with needs, he just promises her to only let the good guys get near. This could've been a player choice, even more so because Rose is advertised as an LI on the neutral path (maybe others as well).
I'm glad she stopped getting used as comedic relief, and on that topic, I'm glad the silly sound effects more or less stopped after episode 1. I was half expecting episode 2 to include a laugh track.
I said it in another post, but I am surprised that Rose has the most lines in the game after the MC. It really doesn't feel that way.
Miranda : honestly for me this mostly comes down to her lewd scene. I'm in the miniority for this one but I did not like it at all. For me I felt like I didn't know her well enough or good enough build up for me personally and felt like it was too quick and rushed to me , as it felt like they barley spent anytime in their room together being romantic or getting to know one another to me. Now if it happened after she got out of the Hospital I would of liked it more especially if we got to spend a little time getting to know each other more in her room before it lead to sex. As I felt like it lead there to quickly for me personally.
Miranda, to me, is adorable. I would pat her head all day every day. But as a character, she's fairly one-dimensional. If she were promised a treatment for her voice, she'd be out of that school and in treatment in a heartbeat.
I agree that her path felt rushed, I felt the same. I brushed this off because she's 24 and likely hasn't been touched in a while. You're right that being intimate with her would've felt much better after the hospital. They would've had a connection instead of just another casual lay.
Another thing I didn't like is how easy ASL came to the MC. At the party in episode 1, I would've loved it if the MC tried to sign "How are you", and Miri manipulated his hands to correct him. But as it is, the guy only needs to see a sign once to remember it forever. I'm not saying this is out of character, because he can quote Romeo and Juliet in the right context after reading it once when he was 11. Just saying that having this kind of interaction would deepen their bond faster. They'd be doing something together, even if it's a 5-minute ASL lesson.
There's also a significant oversight in how her illness is portrayed. At a certain point it's said that if it gets worse, Miranda wouldn't be able to create any kind of sound. This is bullshit, unless her entire mouth would be paralyzed and her trachea closed. We can produce many sounds without our vocal cords, just using our breath, tongue, and lips. Similarly, instead of Miranda's "mmmhmmm", she would use other sounds (whistling or hissing) that would spare her vocal cords.