Well I finally played this... great production quality, as expected, and the writing is technically ok (as in no grammatical errors, mistranslations, etc), but godddd it's soooo bad... the dialogues are really fuckin' rancid.
There's so much wrong here I don't even know where to start... like there's this constant narrative/visual dissonance because of the writing "style"... the game is super serious in some respects, and asks you to take it seriously, but then everyone talks and acts like rejects from the most generic tropey anime ever created... and given the context of the story, the location and the art style, it just doesn't work, it just doesn't.
It felt like I was reading a cheap x-rated westernized clone of my hero academia or something like that... it's so juvenile, it feels like it's written for 13 y/o kids, but it's a porn game... like, who is this game even for?
But hey, at least now I get why so many people dislike this game, can't blame them, it really made me cringe all the way through, and it's really a shame because goddamn it's really high quality... oh well, not for me I guess =/