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Scy7he

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One thing I see the problem with is the text color...in some scenes like this one it just makes your head hurt trying to read it with everything being pink and all including the background
also I think the color of the text in the normal text box should be a more darker black or u should inverse the colors and make itwhite text on semi-transparent black text box...would be easier to see and read and less eye straining
otherwise the game looks great and I have given you 5 stars straight away!!! (btw you are the 2nd dev I've ever given rating to...so I'm really proud of you :)....buuuttt I really hope you make all the scenes animated..just still body with only the facial expression changing doesn't feel as good as a nice animation would)
 
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While the girls are cute, that's not really what kept me going. It is REALLY well written and the characters seem very "fleshed out." I have to say, I was hooked by the humor though (especially for the gamestop stuff! 3 coffins!!! LMAO!) Great work and I'll be keeping my eye on this one!!
 

Blake639

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Thank you so much! That means a lot to me!!
I also had the same reaction with how much I enjoyed your game so far, and before It's too late I should warn you that Patreon doesn't take too kindly to lolis or incest unfortunately. Not to mention combining the two despite how awesome such a fetish is in fictional games. I highly recommend changing what you refer to Ami as to something like a "roommate" or "step-niece" (it doesn't have to make sense) and making it so the player can change what you refer to her as in the beginning like say how Family Matters did it to avoid this same issue and still write the story like she was your niece. For the loli part of it, you might just have to face the music somewhere down the line as Harem Hotel had to re-costume Ashley because she looked too young in a school uniform or be demonetized and compared to Ami, Ashley had bigger breasts. This shouldn't be a problem for a while though unless you get too popular (which i imagine your game doing considering how good it is) and Patreon moderators finally notice your game. Hopefully they never notice as I for one am very happy that a game like this came out using Koikatu models without half of them having ridiculously large breasts for being in high school.
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Scy7he

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I also had the same reaction with how much I enjoyed your game so far, and before It's too late I should warn you that Patreon doesn't take too kindly to lolis or incest unfortunately. Not to mention combining the two despite how awesome such a fetish is in fictional games. I highly recommend changing what you refer to Ami as to something like a "roommate" or "step-niece" (it doesn't have to make sense) and making it so the player can change what you refer to her as in the beginning like say how Family Matters did it to avoid this same issue and still write the story like she was your niece. For the loli part of it, you might just have to face the music somewhere down the line as Harem Hotel had to re-costume Ashley because she looked too young in a school uniform or be demonetized and compared to Ami, Ashley had bigger breasts. This shouldn't be a problem for a while though unless you get too popular (which i imagine your game doing considering how good it is) and Patreon moderators finally notice your game. Hopefully they never notice as I for one am very happy that a game like this came out using Koikatu models without half of them having ridiculously large breasts for being in high school.
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or an incest patch (or code in-game to activate it) or whatever
 
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i feel that i should let you know... in case you don't Patreon does not like incest or loli's, if they notice you they will take your stuff down, so i would recommend that you find some other way to monetize your game than putting it on their site, i'm not sure if their are other site's you could use, there probably is though. another way you could probably get away with it is by putting a version with the offending content cut on the site and either put an "anonymously" made patch somewhere people can find it, or just put the full game somewhere else
 
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Scy7he

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i feel that i should let you know... in case you don't Patreon does not like incest or loli's, if they notice you they will take your stuff down, so i would recommend that you find some other way to monetize your game than putting it on their site, i'm not sure if their are other site's you could use, there probably is though. another way you could probably get away with it is by putting a version with the offending content cut on the site and either put an "anonymously" made patch somewhere people can find it, or just put the full game somewhere else
ya (honestly forget about the patreon stuff earlier to inform him :p)...Selebus you need to immediately take down the download links from your patreon and then make a 'safe for patreon' version (which changes neice to whatever else...maybe someone he adopted and the loli to idk) with patch for us to revert as a code maybe which many game devs do like code=truestory or whatever before patreon decides to take action]
 
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StratoSquir

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this description trigger somes Nam-flash about that one other visual-novel about cute girls and high-school...
how bad (the shocking elements i mean) is it?
 

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uhh...has anyone figured out how to activate the horror event yet?
(and can it be played even after day 24?)
 
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uhh...has anyone figured out how to activate the horror event yet?
(and can it be played even after day 24?)
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Anyone know what the Japanese translates to?
 
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I wasn't ready for some existentialism in my porn game but hey, no complaints!

Edit: This game deserves the old (is it old yet?) McDonalds catchphrase: "I'm lovin' it!"

Okay, "loving it" is officially an understatement. This one goes into my golden folder!
 
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Yup!
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Anyone know what the Japanese translates to?
okay now I've done some further research and....
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means "do you look for me?" or "are you looking for it?" (when trying google img translate it switches between the two) and
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this means "tired tired tired tired tired tired"
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this is apparently "good evening"

Edit: I saw more japanese and decided to translate them too soo....
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this means laughing face or a bunch of "LOL"

and
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means bunch of "a" or "ah" but why it is used so many times here and what it implies idk (whenever two of them are used as in ああ I think it means oh! or ah! so I guess it is that but given more emphasis as in she is scared???)
 
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Any idea if the poster in the character's room has anything hidden to it?
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Also, there's probably something hidden in the pattern of elevated dots and regular dots in the clock room dialogue in that one sentence where there's a ton, but I have no idea what it is.
 
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