- Aug 20, 2022
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Playing a lewd VN for 10 hours straight and then complaining about the writing consistency is such Molly behavior.So, probably no one cares but fuck it. So I've gotten further and I feel scared of raising the lust stat on anyone. It almost feels like the game doesn't want me to with some of the... interesting scenes that occur at certain times. And it also leaves me kind of confused about what the message is meant to be, to horny them or not?
I think I would feel bad actually using the game mechanics that are given to me as the player controlling an avatar who's controlling someone else. Is that the point?
I'm genuinely conflicted by this game and I'm not sure what to think about it. Some of the scares are kinda cheap and even though there was a flashing lights warning at the start of the game I'm almost certain one of those scares were made specifically to cause problems. The writing so far is... interesting, it seems to vary somewhat in quality? but given what the game does already I'm sure that's intentional. or it's just one of those common products of updating and adding to a game over time which... might add to it?
I'm not sure what I've even just written, literally all I've done today is play this game for maybe 10 hours probably more, no breaks at all, I'm very hungry and tired so all I see when I even try to look at what I've written is blurred to the point of it being a blank page.
But in all seriousness, take a break. The writing is quite consistently good, especially after the chapter 1 rework. It's just that one has to get used to Sel's style of writing and understand that there are various narrators and that they might clash in their messages and tone. I think Moonflare once summarized it well, topics and atmosphere switch a lot depending on which narrator/god is currently at the steering wheel.