Detective Dc345
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The latest preview makes me think that Onund God of the Hole is going to make a return
Gotta love that look of "Now that I know you're a confirmed predator, I'm ready to take our relationship to the next level".Right beside Osako.
That S penis is hilarious.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Huh.Being dumb, probably, but... who's the girl we're seeing from behind? Io, I'm guessing?
In which case....
Sensei: Ah, yes, Io. Sana is just coming with me for... tutoring. Because I'm doing that. Again.
Sana: ...
Io: ...
interesting that Selebus says that "I swallow my pride" cause the characters need to be true to themselves, like he didn't literally send said character to be passed around as a cumdump for 19 years immediately after Chika forced him to change his scriptYou don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
I think you're one of the only people here who has payed enough attention to know what Selebus really meant when he says that the characters write themselves.interesting that Selebus says that "I swallow my pride" cause the characters need to be true to themselves, like he didn't literally send said character to be passed around as a cumdump for 19 years immediately after Chika forced him to change his script
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I see through you, Selebus. You aren't foolling me.
That last quote from Sel, about the characters writing themselves... Props. A lot of writers don't listen to the characters and that's almost always a bad idea. My characters are constantly taking me in unexpected directions, usually better than whatever I'd penciled into my poor excuse for an outline.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Oh, boy. The Amy event. The mall. The mall. :shudder:Day 54 character count 5453.UnchangedYou don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
I think it speaks to the quality of the writing that characters might go against the intentions of plot, since they matter to the writer. It’s part of why they matter to us, too. They aren’t just puppets of the writer; instead, they take on a life and character of their own, so it makes them much more relatable and deep as creations. And considering Sel is intensely conceited, for him to admit that characters take priority over his own ego is a point of relief and positivity, given his usual assholish nature.That last quote from Sel, about the characters writing themselves... Props. A lot of writers don't listen to the characters and that's almost always a bad idea. My characters are constantly taking me in unexpected directions, usually better than whatever I'd penciled into my poor excuse for an outline.
Now, mind, with a cast this big, and so full of... highly eccentric folks, I can also imagine the cast's muttering driving Sel nuts.
Or more nuts.
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We call that character growth, folksYou don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
I think we call that being groomed by your teacherWe call that character growth, folks
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I think we call that being groomed by your teacher
Very unrealistic way of being groomed by a teacher by the way. Miku is probably a failure in terms of representing a teenage girl, the only one even more ridiculous than her is Io(but maybe teenagers like her a common place in America, in which case I retract my statement).I think we call that being groomed by your teacher
I wonder if this is related to the last ayhh post.I think it speaks to the quality of the writing that characters might go against the intentions of plot, since they matter to the writer. It’s part of why they matter to us, too. They aren’t just puppets of the writer; instead, they take on a life and character of their own, so it makes them much more relatable and deep as creations. And considering Sel is intensely conceited, for him to admit that characters take priority over his own ego is a point of relief and positivity, given his usual assholish nature.