idiotamerican
Newbie
- Aug 18, 2018
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i thought at the time that the shift from maya to nodoka driving the plot wouldn't work well. however, it was necessary to "lose" maya, both because it was in some sense the payoff to the first part of the story, and because it's one of the only real consequences a time loop story could have. it was also necessary for maya to stay lost for at least a chapter or two, to reinforce the pathos.
the focus moved to ayane after maya left, and it should have stayed that way. most of what nodoka is doing should take place behind the scenes. very difficult to execute that well, though.
the focus moved to ayane after maya left, and it should have stayed that way. most of what nodoka is doing should take place behind the scenes. very difficult to execute that well, though.