VN Ren'Py Leviathan [v0.03] [Mr. Ovis]

[Mr. Ovis]

I mean no offense by this, but I have to ask...
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...what the hell did Liechtenstein do to deserve to get on this particular map?

Is the dev from there or something? I've been there, it's tiny and there's fuck all there (I mean, it's scenic), and it's completely landlocked, it's nowhere near water.

They invented the Super Pretzel, and are now the 5th richest UGS region in the entire Global States. Put some respect on their name.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

They invented the Super Pretzel, and are now the 5th richest UGS region in the entire Global States. Put some respect on their name.

Oh, ok, sure. I guess being a tax haven paid off (pun intended).

 

[Mr. Ovis]

For anyone who's wondering what the update schedule shall be like, I am personally of the opinion that shorter tends to be better, since I can get more feedback and input to adjust things around and learn what works better. I'm going to be aiming for around 2-4 month updates, with things are as they are, I'm thinking this next one is probably gonna be solely focused on purely busting out the scenes and really adding some content in there, since this past update was a 50-50 mix of things like UI, maps, learning video and audio editing (I hope y'all like the main menu song, I spent like 2 hours tuning it). I'm going to aim for hammering down on the renders, since currently I still have a long way to go on those. I'll be rolling out small tweaks and reworks and adjustments to earlier content all the time, but generally I'm trying to not have the quality jumping around be too jarring.

I post a load of previews on the Discord, they tend not to be spoilery though, since it's usually entirely outta context lmao. I just am going to make sure to try and communicate as much as I can, I do recognize that a shitload of early games are dropped and so people tend to steer away from getting invested, I have no intentions on doing that.

 

[Tyrranus]

surprisingly meaty update, Im kinda impressed so far

 

[qljrnt6jc4eh2]

It's okay to play, but PLEASE stop with the wannabe pirate-slang. "Ya", "cap'n" (should be "capt'n", I assume), "pal", "gotta", aso. I've seen this in several games lately, and it can only work its charm when you actually KNOW how to use this slang. You don't, so please stick to proper English. No offense, but this feels forced and only makes reading/ playing cringe and annoying. As long as it's only happening in the intro/ first part of the game, I guess it's okay. But if You ever think of improving your writing or the text of your current version- please edit it.

 

[Mr. Ovis]

It's okay to play, but PLEASE stop with the wannabe pirate-slang. "Ya", "cap'n" (should be "capt'n", I assume), "pal", "gotta", aso. I've seen this in several games lately, and it can only works its charm when you actually KNOW how to use this slang. You don't, so please stick to proper English. No offense, but this feels forced and only makes reading/ playing cringe and annoying. As long as it's only happening in the intro/ first part of the game, I guess it's okay. But if You ever think of improving your writing or the text of your current version- please edit it.

I do appreciate the feedback, it's interesting to see different perspectives on that. I didn't really hear anything about that during my proofreading reviews, but it is noteable. I didn't really think anything of it since I was honestly just typing the way I speak. I'd put it down to habitual clinical language as part of being raised by an english major, but the slang comes from the tribulations of military service. Everyone ends up speaking with that particular American bend, and I kinda just resolved that I cannot really get rid of that 100%... So I made the obvious logical choice and shrimply made the entire planet American on paper lmao.

 

[sexypeanut]

Gave this one a go

Curious premise: it's basically Pacific Rim, but with ships instead of mechs.
There's a lack of background music during the non-action scenes. I'd love to have it added to them.
An interesting plot. I'm curious to see more of it!
Strea is quite pretty and cute

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[Mr. Ovis]

Gave this one a go

Curious premise: it's basically Pacific Rim, but with ships instead of mechs.
There's a lack of background music during the non-action scenes. I'd love to have it added to them.
An interesting plot. I'm curious to see more of it!
Strea is quite pretty and cute

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Thanks for the excellent feedback, this is really appreciated! Yeah, a big thing I've gotta work on is being more careful about typos and spellchecking and everything, I tried a few different programs and a lot of them had some issues. I like your notes about the outlines and the narration, I'm definitely got a lot to work on in terms of UI and text and everything, and I have some plans for how to take care of that. MC is definitely a big ol' dork, he will become a gigachad with time, he's in his first pokemon stage of evolution currently.

 

[wiseold6996]

Kinda disappointed about having no nun li. Well the story is unique. There also should be a codex of some kind to keep track of all the terminologies like hacker, angel, splice etc.

 

[Mr. Ovis]

Leviathan Devlog, The Raw Beef Update - 0.03v!



The update is roughly 50% complete, with 8 scenes rendered, coming out to 350 total images.
This update will be introducing:
-1 adorable NEET
-1 goth mommy
-2 shortstack graffiti artists
-the first lewd selfie of the game (there shall be many more)
-Cervesa Cristal battery/assault.

The goal of this update is to really provide some content, so it's gonna be a quicker one, only 2 months, but solely focused on the production of more scenes with as many variables and choices as I can pack in. It already has the first missable main LI event of the game, and setup for several others. It's going to be EXTRA MEATY!

I will be dropping devlogs on all platforms every 2 weeks. I yap relentlessly about the game and drop teasers all the time on my Discord, special previews go out to $5 and above subscribers to the Patreon, as well as early access to rough drafts of the game several days before official release.

 

[Mr. Ovis]

Kinda disappointed about having no nun li. Well the story is unique. There also should be a codex of some kind to keep track of all the terminologies like hacker, angel, splice etc.

There are plans for a journal that the player can refer to, which the MC is shown drawing into at a few points as well as the pages directly shown, which is going to be based off of the journal of Arthur Morgan in RDR2. I fully plan on expanding that out, probably adding more pages and expanding the sequences of transitional exposition, and the player can go back through those to refresh on events and key terms throughout the game. I do recognize I can be a little bit opaque with the terms and not explain everything super quick upfront, but I do promise that all of the terms will be delved into with greater detail, given some time.

Whilst there's no plans for Madame May to be a direct main LI, there ain't no rule in the rule books that says she can't show up at a later date. The Horny Character Path is intended to be a lot more stacked with side girls, since you lose a lot of access to some of the main LIs, so there will be a variety of side dishes to enjoy that will come in and out every once in a while.

 

[Mr. Ovis]

Realized that I hadn't made a render with all of the girls as of yet. Had to remedy that one.

 

[Mr. Ovis]

Leviathan Devlog: 0.03v Drops on the 30th!


Currently, we are sitting at an addition of: -650 renders, probably going to round things out with another 200 over these next few days. -15 scenes, going to aim for another 3-5 rendered out soon. -4 animations This update is all about maximizing the size, and working on the quality of the renders. It's gonna be fun.

 

[Mr. Ovis]

With just five days until the release of version 0.3, I’m proud to report that we’ve added 900 renders—more than the last two updates combined—and included more scenes than in either v0.1 or v0.2 while maintaining a comparable word count. In light of the recent itch.io delisting of NSFW titles, I remain fully committed to pushing this game toward excellence, free from outside compromise, and I’m deeply grateful for all the support I’ve received so far. Your feedback—whether it’s bug reports, playtest impressions, or design suggestions—continues to drive improvements, and I look forward to refining the experience even further after the launch.

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[Mr. Ovis]

Leviathan 0.3v Has Officially Arrived! Available Everywhere I Could Find!Itchio cannot stop us. Collective Shout cannot stop us. There will be no slowing down on this train! This update has been a labor of love, and I've been putting in the hours non-stop to make this the biggest one yet. From the word "Go!", it's been about one thing, putting out plenty of new content to be enjoyed, and I focused on that heavily. I am proud to announce the addition of:

-900 new renders, more than the last 2 updates combined!
-Over 30k new words to the script!
-25 new scenes!
-More branching and choice than ever before!

This has been a big one, and I focused heavily on the improvement of my rendering and animation, and simply putting out as many renders as I possibly could, managing to fit all of this in to a short and sweet update window of just 1 month and 20 days. Next update will see further content, heading towards the Babel Gala, further polishing and refinement of previous content, a few reworked scenes here and there, and best of all a fully realized and brand new GUI done by the illustrious Pax. The very same Pax who created the wonderful GUI featured in Eternum, Cosy Cafe, Sicae, and many, many, many other games!

Available On All Devices! Download on the ⁠links channel of the Discord, or the sites below!

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[Wolfram99]

Tried out the new update, i guess girls will always be haremable and not double-tappable as 0.2 release led you to believe with Emesina.
Did the variable names get messed up?
Strea date variables are mismatched

 

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[Mr. Ovis]

Tried out the new update, i guess girls will always be haremable and not double-tappable as 0.2 release led you to believe with Emesina.
Did the variable names get messed up?
Strea date variables are mismatched

Yeah, I'm working on some GUI stuff that'll inform the player as to whether or not a gal is Main Girl (as in part of the overall harem), or Side Girl. Side girls shall not receive the same protections as the Side Girls... Beyond that, yeah, some of the variables are fucked. Technically it still works fine so I'll leave it, but for the next update imma polish my variables and make a nicer system for flags.

 

[Wolfram99]

Technically it still works fine so I'll leave i

So the Cold strea date will be later?

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