Hello
Jamleng, first, sorry for my english, is not my native language.
I read this post of yours
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and i wanted to express my opinion, please take this as a constructive criticism, I like your game.
I think that the first problem in your game is that it tries to cover a lot, but at the end does not stand out at all. Why did I say this? I'll use my situation as an example. I love the games with bdsm, slavery, power-fantasy and things like that, but I don't like the incest and I'm not a fan of romance, comic and childish stories, and your game have things that I like, but things that I don't like, and I think that is the same problem with the people that like the romance or the incest, but don't like the slavery. Besides that, in the end, I'll only play half of your game (dark path), I am not interesed in all your game. I will use pinktea as an example. When he created
https://f95zone.to/threads/slave-lord-v1-4-1-pink-tea-games.155/,
https://f95zone.to/threads/slave-lords-of-the-galaxy-v1-0-1-pink-tea-games.3370/,
https://f95zone.to/threads/elven-conquest-elf-trainer-v1-0-1-pink-tea-games.14153/ and games like that, he was constantly growing and his popularity was constant, in those games you had two paths, the kind master and the cruel master, but both have bdsm, slavery, domination, power-fantasy and kinks like that, is focused in one thing, but with his recent games, his losing a lot popularity and patreons, because he's mixing bdsm with romance, feelings and things like that, then the lovers of slavery and bdsm are not full interested in his games and the people abandon the game or change to others. I think that's the problem in terms of kinks and porn.
With the plot I think that you have the same problem, because at the end, and by what you write in the forums, look like the "ugliness" of the character is relevant for the story, but at the end, is irrelevant and only is a dead weight
, or are parts where looks like the game is serius and dark with the plot being one of the game's strenght, but other parts are childish and frivolous, at the end your game don't attract neither to people looking for a good plot or a dark plot, nor to those looking for something light and childish.
And from the same thing that I comment above, the game also feels slow, like "I want my slaves" or "be a pimp", but because you are working in the good path too, I feel like the progress is slower than it really is. And I think that is the same problem for the people who crave the good path.
I think those are the problems so your game does not have much scope.
and there is characters who are unavoidable corrupted by story?
