Ren'Py Completed Lewd Town Adventures [v1.0.3] [Jamleng Games]

[Deleted member 3189752]

Looks like the DEV is reading this. And is deeply hurt again and again because of criticism from the players. On the other hand he boasts aboout the superiority of this game. And there are also others from the team. All in the same vain, arrogant disposition towards the players.
Dudes, players will be the ones who support you on Patreon - or not - (or maybe buy a game). Stop being arrogant and boastful. Porn games are most of the time a question of (dis)taste, so it is quite possible that all the dev team can't stop cumming all the time when making the game, but still the target audience would be just NAH.
Here on F95zone is quite a lot of games, which sold pretty well and are well known to be of value. You must still show this.
Eg, I'm on metered connection and so strategize quite a lot what to download and what not. So it is quite crucial to me to know, what the story and mechanics are about - if I am interested or not. But if I read self sufficient boasting about the superiority of the game instead - this forum is also full of various "money suckers" from Patreon, and such a relationship towards players (clients) tends to smell of it also. Graphics look nice, but that is all I managed to figure out. RenPy generally means boring clicking from picture to picture and thoroughly skipping dialogues of low intelligence. If you don't show you are different in the heading of the game, we will just skip over - and you'll have "#lewdest porn game out there" for yourselves.
Warnings in the heading look just stupid. "This game might not for the fainthearted" just under the depiction of three high schoolers ...
And nobody really counts the images and graphics. Remember, (eg.) Degrees of Lewdity and Witch Trainer don't realy boast with extensive graphics - but are a reference here.
Get a grip.
Look at the Third Crisis team here on F95 ... Vilsa Nara is so kind and nice I almost started to feel sory to corrupt the hero in the game.

 

[quanbe]

how can I check out the bar in the city ?

 

[Deleted member 3189752]

To not be shooting in the air I just played through the game. It is great, kudos for it. Nina is a tad too in puberty for the rule 7, but otherwise I like it, and it will be interesting how the matters develop further. I played the compressed version and even there the graphics are superior.
I'm very happy you have responded so quickly and profoundly. From the response I can also understand, why you are being kind of sensitive to the comments.
The idea of the beginning is, let's say, different (although hard, I didn't dislike it). Can be quite painful for the players who identify with the uglyness, trauma or loneliness of the MC - and in that way also catharsic. I just read Abercrombie's "First law" and parelleled him with Glokta all the time. And kind of suspected what you have written above, that you have gone through equal or greater trauma. This may be a "dirty site", even maybe a stupid "safety valve" for our own dark pain, shame and guilt, but still, I care about that. I know it too well myself.

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Now that I am aware of your sensitivities let me say that I suggest rewriting the header block for the game on f95zone

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[quanbe]

Evenings - you have to progress with Lilly and Sophia path first. If you have not met Sophia, keep visiting the University on Emily's path.

I find the solution I could not go to the bar because I don't get the scene on the cafe with Elsa

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[NoScream]

Jamleng

Here is a save from the end of 0.4 non-NTR path if you want to add it to thread for those players.

How to change character MC name?

 

[bobdillan]

How to change character MC name?

uhhh, no idea. you probably have to change that variable w/e is. basically enable the console, and change it once you load the save.

you may need to use unren to unpack the script in order to read the variable for MCs name. or just ask jamleng.

 

[Jamleng]

How to change character MC name?

That's only possible by restarting a new game as of now.

uhhh, no idea. you probably have to change that variable w/e is. basically enable the console, and change it once you load the save.

you may need to use unren to unpack the script in order to read the variable for MCs name. or just ask jamleng.

That's a possibility as well, but it's a hassle, especially when the player doesn't know what he's doing.
Thanks to these posts, it gave me the idea to make your name changeable by accessing the computer in the next update or so. I'll look into it.

Cheers!

 

[~J&F~]

Once the game is finish then there will be endings that if you chose the bad path will end the game faster, the right or good path will play for a long game.

At this time that one short ending still allows you to keep playing.

And what the Good path choose was?

 

[~J&F~]

Once the game is finish then there will be endings that if you chose the bad path will end the game faster, the right or good path will play for a long game.

At this time that one short ending still allows you to keep playing.

And what the Good path choose was?

 

[Jamleng]

And what the Good path choose was?

There are 4 small "hidden endings" in the game that are in there for fun, as of yet they don't hold any consequences.
Good paths in general are more friendly, vanilla-ish. Normal naughty stuff.
Dark path decisions will make the character progression more hardcore. Very naughty stuff.

Those paths are still in the early stages of development and will be extended upon in future updates.

 

[quanbe]

I like the joke about gordon ramsay in this game . It's could be good if in the dark path, in a future update we could get a scene in the mansion where the mc can choose to let rordon ramsey have Pamela and Rose in a threesome as a repayment for pamela's restaurant. " I hope this time you will give me some good meat to eat and not some disgusting dishes!!!! " " Finally some good f*cking food!! "

 

[Dideldidum]

review:
i have the feeling that the developer of this game wants to make it good. so i post my review here instead of the review section with a bad rating. hopefully the many issues of this game (not content wise) get resolved.

about the story:

i get that you want to please everyone and want to offer ntr and non ntr paths aswell as more "vanilla" scenes compared to "wild". but please when you introduce a game and make people suffer through 12 days of pointless "playtime" with the definition of "ugly" as mc, so we see a bit of backstory, HAVE THE STORY MAKE AT LEAST A LITTLE SENSE.

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about gameplay:
there isnt any. click different buildings repeatedly and use skip button till sex scenes. <= even for a vn that´s weak..

the game essentially starts in the mansion:
no stats to train on mc
no sex/slavery training for mc
no work shedule
no "capture" targets

just walk around and drug girls hoping noone notices them missing (why is this a secret organisation again?)

"train girls" simply gives you money. why is there a "work option" in your room and what work is mc doing there?

why do you even need money ? apparantly there is nothing to buy except pay a fee to see the church lady (which is part of the organisation anyway so it doesnt make sense to pay at all )


tl;dr: developer started rendering scenes, put them into renpy and calls it a game. story doesnt make sense and there are no game mechanics.

 

[Jamleng]

review.

Thanks for your review and feedback, I would love you, if you could add some spoiler tags.
There are some solid points you've got there even though I do think you take the plot of this porn game a tad too seriously.
I mean I tried to write it as a comedy/porn/corruption game. Purely for entertainment and to give back to the community after playing quite a few VN's myself.

I'm definitely doing my best to improve many aspects of the game. Currently, XoMo is rewriting/editing/proofreading many parts of the dialogue. The prologue was made when I just started developing this game, it was sort of a learning experience and is there for comedy purposes.
As the game progresses, the story gets better and has fewer plotholes. (I hope). More information about the organization and everything else for that matter unlocks the more you play. Money does have some usages aside from the cathedral and will definitely play a bigger role in the future.

The game is a classic style sandbox game with quite a lot of stuff going on in the world, you'll unlock more characters and events the more you play. There's a guide that tells you where to go and what to do to progress the game.
It might be just me, but I don't really understand your comment about there being no gameplay since this game has a pretty similar type of style as quite a few other VN's on here. I personally chose not to have mini-games and stuff in there. I kept the grinding aspects to a minimum. I could add a stat system but I felt that mostly adds up to the grinding aspect.
So in that way, yeah, this is a pretty straightforward sandbox VN, I get that that's not for everyone.

Also with all due respect on your tl;dr.
Creating games is takes a lot of time and effort. I wish I just started rendering, slapped it in some program and the game was ready. It takes a lot of thought, creativity, time, planning, and more just to create a single scene. Sure, not every single event speaks to every player. But there are absolutely some gems in there or at the very least references/recognition that the player can appreciate. Those ten thousands of lines of code/dialogue don't write themselves.

In any case, I'm sad to hear you didn't like the game.
I'll keep your points in mind, I especially liked the capture target idea. Hopefully, in half a year or so the game will be a totally different experience for you.

Cheers, and have a nice day!

 

[Skecorks]

In emulator the patch does not work

 

[Anonimed]

Thanks for your review and feedback, I would love you, if you could add some spoiler tags.
There are some solid points you've got there even though I do think you take the plot of this porn game a tad too seriously.
I mean I tried to write it as a comedy/porn/corruption game. Purely for entertainment and to give back to the community after playing quite a few VN's myself.

I'm definitely doing my best to improve many aspects of the game. Currently, XoMo is rewriting/editing/proofreading many parts of the dialogue. The prologue was made when I just started developing this game, it was sort of a learning experience and is there for comedy purposes.
As the game progresses, the story gets better and has fewer plotholes. (I hope). More information about the organization and everything else for that matter unlocks the more you play. Money does have some usages aside from the cathedral and will definitely play a bigger role in the future.

The game is a classic style sandbox game with quite a lot of stuff going on in the world, you'll unlock more characters and events the more you play. There's a guide that tells you where to go and what to do to progress the game.
It might be just me, but I don't really understand your comment about there being no gameplay since this game has a pretty similar type of style as quite a few other VN's on here. I personally chose not to have mini-games and stuff in there. I kept the grinding aspects to a minimum. I could add a stat system but I felt that mostly adds up to the grinding aspect.
So in that way, yeah, this is a pretty straightforward sandbox VN, I get that that's not for everyone.

Also with all due respect on your tl;dr.
Creating games is takes a lot of time and effort. I wish I just started rendering, slapped it in some program and the game was ready. It takes a lot of thought, creativity, time, planning, and more just to create a single scene. Sure, not every single event speaks to every player. But there are absolutely some gems in there or at the very least references/recognition that the player can appreciate. Those ten thousands of lines of code/dialogue don't write themselves.

In any case, I'm sad to hear you didn't like the game.
I'll keep your points in mind, I especially liked the capture target idea. Hopefully, in half a year or so the game will be a totally different experience for you.

Cheers, and have a nice day!

First of all, sorry for my english, it's not may native language.

I want to say that i love your game, because is one of the few that has open slavery and animated scenes.

But I think that add a stats system or somenthing like that, to show how the MC grows like a master/trainer, so, the first slave that you get (i don't remember her name) has a purpose, train with her and maybe develop a relationship of nice-master/happy-slave or hard-master/broken-slave.

Maybe too can buy toys for your "office" and your "job" , like ropes, handcuffs, dildos, etc.

And maybe to be able to choose which are your personal slaves and which organitation's whores (and of course receive money from them).

And finally thanks for this game.

 

[Platinum_Flame]

I tried to install the android version, but when it was almost installed, it said "app not installed"

 

[Platinum_Flame]

I tried to install the android version, but when it was almost installed, it said "app not installed"

Nevermind, the problem was on my end

 

[Bigbenntbigtoes]

Nice to see this game getting more attention. Finally playing for the first time since October, looking forward to seeing all the new content. I already like the fact that the prologue skip is there (can't remember if it was when it was first released) considering that my save files got removed somehow Looking forward to seeing what's in store with the last updates!

 

[~J&F~]

There are 4 small "hidden endings" in the game that are in there for fun, as of yet they don't hold any consequences.
Good paths in general are more friendly, vanilla-ish. Normal naughty stuff.
Dark path decisions will make the character progression more hardcore. Very naughty stuff.

Those paths are still in the early stages of development and will be extended upon in future updates.

So last night i finally intsall the game again, when it come to us to meet rose again after the accident, did you remove the NTR? or maybe i miss something?

 

[Jamleng]

So last night i finally intsall the game again, when it come to us to meet rose again after the accident, did you remove the NTR? or maybe i miss something?

Rose got a bit of a rework 3 versions ago so it changed. Only in one of her later events you have an optional choice for that.