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The unseen

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Damn, this gorgeous game is ruined by the absolutely atrocious dialogue. If you're going to try to pull off bro humor, get a native English speaker to proofread/edit your text. The jokes are horrible. It's like this was written by a 12 year old.

Edit: I take it back, it's not like this was written by a 12 year old, this was literally written by a 12 year old. Totally juvenile and nonsensical. A crying shame, such wasted potential. The visuals are stunning.
Bruh .. It's THAT important to you?
If is , Next time I call J.K Rowling
 

desmosome

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Hmmm, I didn't record the voice of those kids talking about the school incident, but the MC plays that recording to mom after dinner.

But I guess there is nothing to be gained by doing a no recording route based on how the rise path is progressing. I initially didn't record them in case there was a path where the MC suspects the mom and dominates her or something lol. Since that isn't happening, I don't see the point of being able to not record the kids talking about the school incident.
 
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Hysni

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Holy Crap Short but Good update :cool: (y) But i Wish Mc Could Just Have a Real Fuck with Lauren :sneaky:(y)
MoM is soo Hot :love: After Date Sex is Guaranted but not in this update :coffee:
 
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Damn, this gorgeous game is ruined by the absolutely atrocious dialogue. If you're going to try to pull off bro humor, get a native English speaker to proofread/edit your text. The jokes are horrible. It's like this was written by a 12 year old.

Edit: I take it back, it's not like this was written by a 12 year old, this was literally written by a 12 year old. Totally juvenile and nonsensical. A crying shame, such wasted potential. The visuals are stunning.
I had the exact same reaction, swearing every other sentence. No coherent dialogue patterning or structure, I could write a better script in my sleep. But this is the difference between being a dik wannabe's and being a dik.
 
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