onefingersalute

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Two years ago, I wrote the dev about it:

"Just re entered after awhile. What is happening with the dialogue? You have a cast of white suburban characters, many of whom are presumably approaching middle age, all sounding like they're either from the hood or 'tryna' be.

Take the MC for example - in 5 minutes of gameplay, I found all the following:

"My sister's tryna be an artist"
"I'm tryna buy something special"
"I'm down to buy it"
"Price ain't an issue..."
"I know you got Ron"
"Ain't leaving till you tell me..."
"I ain't like that"

He doesn't sound like he's in the mafia. He sounds like he's in the Crips. And it's infecting other characters, too.

Please, take a fresh look at your writing. You have a solid game, but the dialogue needs to be more appropriate to the characters."


The dev wrote back "We will consider it. Thanks for report."

The drop off in writing quality made me stop sponsoring it on Patreon. I hope they've fixed it, because it suddenly became unplayable.
im assuming it is a Black(or of color) Dev who is from the "hood" or knows people who are and sees that making all characters or majority of them of color so went with whites instead or is the opposite and its a white wannabe from the hood or grew up with people from their one or the two im assuming. i dunno otherwise why would you use typos in your VN like that with pronunciations of words in their game/VN like that most smart people with common sense does not speak like that on a daily basis but it is what it is though i still like the game though .
 

onefingersalute

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Thanks. So it was supposed to be an incest by the dev or it is just made by fans?
irrc from last update it is still incest unless they took it out in which case this is pretty much dead to me and alot of others im sure but far as i can tell it is but like all the other incest games you have to patch it up to include it otherwise story does not make sense
 

lipe2410

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Where is the ntr?
If you are upset because the MC is the only fictional character fucking the fictional women, then there is your NTR. Be happy dude!
I'm curious how the developer suddenly went from 500+ sponsors to 1,000+ sponsors in June. What did they do to attract that many people? It's very impressive. If anyone knows the answer to this question, please let me know :D
Game release on Oppaiman store
 
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