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UnDoubleUpUhUh

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May 13, 2018
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Haven't played this in a very long time, but my brain is short circuiting while reading the prologue, did this change? I really don't remember this convoluted, badly written, nonsensical garbage before. It's like the writer had a stroke or something.
Two years ago, I wrote the dev about it:

"Just re entered after awhile. What is happening with the dialogue? You have a cast of white suburban characters, many of whom are presumably approaching middle age, all sounding like they're either from the hood or 'tryna' be.

Take the MC for example - in 5 minutes of gameplay, I found all the following:

"My sister's tryna be an artist"
"I'm tryna buy something special"
"I'm down to buy it"
"Price ain't an issue..."
"I know you got Ron"
"Ain't leaving till you tell me..."
"I ain't like that"

He doesn't sound like he's in the mafia. He sounds like he's in the Crips. And it's infecting other characters, too.

Please, take a fresh look at your writing. You have a solid game, but the dialogue needs to be more appropriate to the characters."


The dev wrote back "We will consider it. Thanks for report."

The drop off in writing quality made me stop sponsoring it on Patreon. I hope they've fixed it, because it suddenly became unplayable.
 

SonsOfLiberty

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damn why they left?
I just think they moved on, personal reasons, didn't want to do this kind of thing anymore is the way I understood it. And the last update a couple people came onboard to help with the animation part. Afaik, it's one person doing the bulk of the work.
 

Night Hacker

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Jul 3, 2021
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All my saves are gone, do we have to start from the beginning again with this version?
If you still have your old version installed, your saved games will be in the game\saves" folder, you could try copying them into the new version install, same location.

Of course, they may not work.
 

SonsOfLiberty

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If you still have your old version installed, your saved games will be in the game\saves" folder, you could try copying them into the new version install, same location.

Of course, they may not work.
They will, but considering the first episode was massively changed (and the code throughout the game), it will end up causing issues.
 

onefingersalute

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Two years ago, I wrote the dev about it:

"Just re entered after awhile. What is happening with the dialogue? You have a cast of white suburban characters, many of whom are presumably approaching middle age, all sounding like they're either from the hood or 'tryna' be.

Take the MC for example - in 5 minutes of gameplay, I found all the following:

"My sister's tryna be an artist"
"I'm tryna buy something special"
"I'm down to buy it"
"Price ain't an issue..."
"I know you got Ron"
"Ain't leaving till you tell me..."
"I ain't like that"

He doesn't sound like he's in the mafia. He sounds like he's in the Crips. And it's infecting other characters, too.

Please, take a fresh look at your writing. You have a solid game, but the dialogue needs to be more appropriate to the characters."


The dev wrote back "We will consider it. Thanks for report."

The drop off in writing quality made me stop sponsoring it on Patreon. I hope they've fixed it, because it suddenly became unplayable.
im assuming it is a Black(or of color) Dev who is from the "hood" or knows people who are and sees that making all characters or majority of them of color so went with whites instead or is the opposite and its a white wannabe from the hood or grew up with people from their one or the two im assuming. i dunno otherwise why would you use typos in your VN like that with pronunciations of words in their game/VN like that most smart people with common sense does not speak like that on a daily basis but it is what it is though i still like the game though .
 
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