VN Ren'Py Life Together [v0.1] [Mr. BlackEyes]

[Strong1]

The girls are some of the best renders I have seen in a long time, but otherwise it is a total mess. The ages and the lack of plot explanation makes it almost unplayable, even for a porn game. The incest patch helps a tiny bit but you still don't know why these siblings live together and why there is a big age gap between the two oldest and the youngest. Also like a 34yr old man with a teenage child would be living with his sisters in a tiny apartment? What a loser!

 

[PushMyButton]

The first episode turned out to be really interesting, and I really liked it. The script is good, and
Maybe the current story is nothing special, but at least I like the different environment. I'm looking forward to seeing how this game ends.

 

[zeus04]

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[AL.d]

This jaded, down on his luck, middle aged divorced father with an adult daughter, looks like a 16yo. The character renders in this, look like they were made for something else and are reused.

 

[Mr.BlackEyes]

The game is very much to my liking, the demo was very nice, in the demo was at once 2 ways showed, if I so understood, it is a storyline pleasant to read, the characters are made beautiful, and the first version, which I passed, very me zaschil, there was only text, but this is only the beginning of the game, the second version of the game will be very big and gorcha, which we will see a little later, and so good luck to the author with the game.

Thank you very much! I'll do my best!

 

[AdultFunGamer]

The game isn't bad, and the rendering is good, but what bothers me a little is that some things move too quickly. I think taboo stories should build slowly with tension. I find it more appealing when dark, perverse, and degenerate desires suddenly surface from a normal family because of something triggering them.

 

[Mr.BlackEyes]

Hey guys,
First of all, thank you for playing Life Together and for giving it a shot!
Thanks so much for all the encouraging comments and congratulations — that really helps keep the motivation going!
Apologies to those who played it and didn’t enjoy it.
It’s hard — maybe even impossible — to please everyone.
Like I mentioned at the start of the posts, I’m new to this. I’m not a writer or a director, haha.
I’m just telling a story I personally enjoy, with characters I really like.
If you liked it, I’m super happy — and there’s much more to come!
If you didn’t like it, I’m truly sorry too.
There’s not much content yet, and as I said, I’m still learning and doing this solo.
Sorry if there are any mistakes — they’ll be fixed.
And finally, I really appreciate all the feedback, both positive and negative, as long as it’s respectful.
THANK YOU, GUYS!

 

[weirdanime]

The girls are some of the best renders I have seen in a long time, but otherwise it is a total mess. The ages and the lack of plot explanation makes it almost unplayable, even for a porn game. The incest patch helps a tiny bit but you still don't know why these siblings live together and why there is a big age gap between the two oldest and the youngest. Also like a 34yr old man with a teenage child would be living with his sisters in a tiny apartment? What a loser!

I mean if he's 34 and has an adult daughter, it means he was at the most 16 when he knocked someone up, so of course he's a loser. Even if he wasn't before he had a child, his life probably fell apart after his daughter was born. He wants to play hide the sausage with all women in his family, so he obviously has never learned anything. Now, where such behaviour might come from? I reckon they all grew up with not too wealthy parents who kept boning each other their entire lives and it just happened that they had two kids around 18 and 20 and then another one at 35. So there's your backstory.

 

[MrBenny]

Sorry, I read everything today. Sorry, no, it will not have NTR.

Hi...a suggestion, maybe try adding better descriptive details to your Genre Section with the "future" and "never adding" content tags. This could hugely benefit you and your potential fan-base with answers to many of their repeated content questions. (As I'm sure your already tired of all the NTR questions or misinformation continually being asked and created.)

The genre section example provided below from a first release developer, used a descriptive format to prevent continually answering repeated content questions (...as you are aware this can become very time consuming and sometimes frustrating ).

Also using this type of detailed gs, can aid with avoiding potential misinformation that can derail new players interest in a project (And avoiding the constant NTR back and forth shit-storm drama...). It can ultimately affect potential growth during the title's introduction phase (...I call it the audition stage, where a developer tries to market their content to the public to gain enough base financial followers).

This format could become a "one stop location", with the new fan(s) who are just reviewing the project for the first time. (It can also remove most doubt and hesitation during the mentioned audition stage, as most potential new harem fan base usually like to know about certain kink content details, before they invest time or money into a project (...we knowing the "if's" and "how's"...with some controversial kink content).

The example below is from a very successful harem title called... Grandma's House. He was able to gain a rapidly large following, which has been a huge success for that new developer. He has over 1600+ subs thus far... (and even though his harem project uses no animations in the story, it still has a large sub following).

Spoiler: A good genre section example...

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Regards.

 

[Mr.BlackEyes]

Development of update v.02
What decision will you make?
Sleep with Emily?

Or sleep with Lucia and Melody?

And there's also another option that you'll see in the update.
No rest for the wicked, guys!
And I'll reply to all your messages when I have time because there are so many!
Something that really makes me happy!

 

[MagicMan753]

Development of update v.02
What decision will you make?
Sleep with Emily?
View attachment 4894816
Or sleep with Lucia and Melody?
View attachment 4894817
And there's also another option that you'll see in the update.
No rest for the wicked, guys!
And I'll reply to all your messages when I have time because there are so many!
Something that really makes me happy!

Man its tough, on side you have sexy Melody on the other sweet Emily. You are a evil man for this choice.

 

[Dragon Ember]

how can i get the music from this game whats the best tool too use plz help

 

[guardianfather]

how can i get the music from this game whats the best tool too use plz help

unren for all

 

[sigvar]

Hmm, I do think that the MC looks way too young to have a "daughter" that age. And without the patch she greets him as "Hi, friend. I need you." No where in the world does that phrasing and situation make sense other than in a porn game where she is his "not daughter/niece".
For the same reason she is supposed to not be his "daughter" she is obviously "at least 18". But even if she was at minimum 14 based on her development, he still doesn't look old enough to be her dad.
Dev, I think this early in development you may want to consider rethinking the MC's model. As some others have mentioned, it makes no sense for them to be in this situation or to have that type of dialog if they weren't related. If the story has any hope of a future, you need to tighten up some of these blaring inconsistencies. To anyone that actually reads and doesn't just hold down Ctrl to skip to different scenes, the dialog will be off-putting.

 

[Nulldev]

Why don't they stay at the ex's flat?

 

[Augustus_919]

Decent renders, beautiful girls, Keep going!

 

[Hellscream]

Absolutely amazing, girls are top notch, maybe only to put "save names" for different paths

 

[Nanhai]

Development of update v.02
What decision will you make?
Sleep with Emily?
View attachment 4894816
Or sleep with Lucia and Melody?
View attachment 4894817
And there's also another option that you'll see in the update.
No rest for the wicked, guys!
And I'll reply to all your messages when I have time because there are so many!
Something that really makes me happy!

It's your story/project, you tell/do it however you like. For me personally, I just hope the sex scenes are great. If not, then at least good. Love it so far (renders/teasing/skimpy clothing). Thanks for making VN!

 

[SupremYoda]

Can we kill the retarded MC?

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[tonyusxiv]

Why don't they stay at the ex's flat?

I thought the same thing, but maybe ex's parents are going to live here, maybe dunno, writer's convenience