Not bad, maybe a bit too short. I do hope there is some explanation for why things move so fast a bit. Like why we are already sexual with Aunt. Why is Melody progressing very quick. Just feels a bit too quick, and would like a little bit of slowness, or at least explanation, like the aunt. But overall still sexy characters.
I feel like would like to have a couple renders or animiton of cum shot, just cutting back to girl, and being done, felt weird.
I Like the introduction of daughter, I assume we had her when we were 16, cause 18 years later, and we are 34. Can't wait till she calls us Daddy.
Also quick grammar error I found
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But overall, still sexy, just hope some of my concerns will be addressed in future.