- Nov 24, 2017
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Just finished the intro and I like it a lot. I agree too that its a welcome change our protagonist is not a runt (Step-son/brother) with an over sized libido, a bumbling fool, Wuss, willing Cuck, douche-nozzle or self-absorbed asshole. Hes an Alpha in the best sense of the word; a stand-up guy with his head on straight who handles his business without bullshit or drama. This is a great start imho. I look forward to the story going forward.