Ren'Py Life's Payback [v1.3] [Vinkawa]

[Vinkawa]

You told me this when I asked for POVs and now we got one, I've seen way worse (IRL too).
Now gimme those anal POVs please.

Hahaha, indeed I have tried because of your message, I hope you liked it.

Ok I searched the thread and it came up blank. Where do you get weed for Alice?

You don't need it, just go to her bedroom at night.

I can look past tags that I find distasteful so long as either they are avoidable or fit well within the context of the narrative. That's not the case here, there is no narrative. It's a monotonous grind to get from one morally reprehensible act to the next. It's not an invalid criticism to say this is just a rape sim.

Yeah yeah, thanks for your opinion, a lot of people have another one. See ya and good luck with your next game.

 

[KillerBee487]

What's up, man? I think you've got a great game on your hands, and you're putting a lot of love into it.
The huge reduction in clicking is a big plus, and it's true that the game progresses much faster now.
The schedules are still kind of annoying, but they make sense since the characters have classes, so I think that's fine.

However, I'm not really sold on the renders in the latest update. I get that the idea is to show the MC's abuse and the corruption of the girls, but the tongue is too long, and there are way too many doggy-style positions.
I'd like to see more variety (the last render of Mathilde giving a blowjob is a good step), and also some more anger (like when he forces Nina in the maid outfit or Anna in the kitchen), because they all seem way too similar to each other.

The rework is really good, but I think you can do better, even if it takes a bit more time to create the renders. Great job nonetheless!

 

[jzahad000]

Hahaha, indeed I have tried because of your message, I hope you liked it.

Oh I loved it, thanks a lot mate.

 

[krep12]

Compressed version pls

 

[notBatman747]

Compressed version pls

Look for it a few pages back.

 

[Zalzany]

Just realized that sofa kind answer to poll didnt age right lol

 

[Vinkawa]

What's up, man? I think you've got a great game on your hands, and you're putting a lot of love into it.
The huge reduction in clicking is a big plus, and it's true that the game progresses much faster now.
The schedules are still kind of annoying, but they make sense since the characters have classes, so I think that's fine.

However, I'm not really sold on the renders in the latest update. I get that the idea is to show the MC's abuse and the corruption of the girls, but the tongue is too long, and there are way too many doggy-style positions.
I'd like to see more variety (the last render of Mathilde giving a blowjob is a good step), and also some more anger (like when he forces Nina in the maid outfit or Anna in the kitchen), because they all seem way too similar to each other.

The rework is really good, but I think you can do better, even if it takes a bit more time to create the renders. Great job nonetheless!

Hey man, thank you for the detailed feedback and the narrative provided.
My doggystyle and ahegao kinks are surely not doing me any favor, as I tend to combine both of them whenever a character hasn't been fucked doggystyle yet.
But rest assured, I've already got some cowgirl and missionary ready (and a fair amount of others with weird names like "butterfly" or "the captain"), I just postponed them to the next versions because there would have been way too many animations in one update if I released them during the v0.9.1
The next version should take care of half of your concerns, and the other half would take a few more updates.

 

[Yarida]

THANKS DEV YOU ARE THE MAN

I like this game so much, you gave me hope, thanks for your hard work!

 

[BlowJohn]

Great start. But now... Cringe animations. Very bad animations. Better do simple pictures bruh

 

[Jujumatsu]

Great start. But now... Cringe animations. Very bad animations. Better do simple pictures bruh

Never pictures will be better than any animation. Now all the comunity of H-games probably sees lover of just pics first time. And the hell are you talking about? Out of all games made with that kind of 3d those animations one of most powerfull, they are handmade while 95% uses same standart animations.

 

[Jujumatsu]

What does "The rest of content postponed to 0.9 means?" I cant see those animations in 9.1? i have to play 0.9?

 

[Vinkawa]

Great start. But now... Cringe animations. Very bad animations. Better do simple pictures bruh

Never pictures will be better than any animation. Now all the comunity of H-games probably sees lover of just pics first time. And the hell are you talking about? Out of all games made with that kind of 3d those animations one of most powerfull, they are handmade while 95% uses same standart animations.

Obvious hater using a secondary account needing his daily attention, abort the mission.


Thank you for the support tho.

What does "The rest of content postponed to 0.9 means?" I cant see those animations in 9.1? i have to play 0.9?

That's a typo, save and load your save, it should fix it by saying "End of current version" instead.

 

[Jujumatsu]

Also one more suggestion. Play Futa Concoction. Why? That guy works with same animation program as you (as far as i know), he maid with Hands anal scenes. It seems like you want to make more anal and you like it, but you struggle with it, you can talk to that game dev, he is very nice gentlemen, he will help you with understanding of making anal scenes. Faust Seiker his nickname.

 

[BlowJohn]

Obvious hater using a secondary account needing his daily attention, abort the mission.
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Thank you for the support tho.



That's a typo, save and load your save, it should fix it by saying "End of current version" instead.

I am guy, who commented week ago, and say "great game bro". But when i play... in your animations character chest collapses into another chest. It's not a normal.

 

[BlowJohn]

Here is one of bad animation. Two balls collapsed like atom's in simple ordinary connection (Can't do something more on phone)

 

[Jujumatsu]

I am guy, who commented week ago, and say "great game bro". But when i play... in your animations character chest collapses into another chest. It's not a normal.

Yeah. It migth happen if you do it handmade instead of using same shit that everyone does. If you wanna see those same animations everyone takes directly from Koikatsu, there hundreds of those games.

 

[Vinkawa]

I am guy, who commented week ago, and say "great game bro". But when i play... in your animations character chest collapses into another chest. It's not a normal.

I can't drop a better answer than what Jujumatsu wrote, just saying if you think my animations are cringe it's a clear indication you haven't played a lot of games in the last 2 years, or you're having a bad day and just felt like trolling.
I'm not bragging, but put that whiskey bottle out of your sight if you think pictures would be better than my current animation's quality.
I accept negative feedbacks but attacking me on the animation side is the WORST move you could do, you're losing all legitimacy.

 

[RandyPhoenix]

Vinkawa is rework you starter with last update done with this update?

 

[Vinkawa]

Vinkawa is rework you starter with last update done with this update?

I'm currently including old scenes back in the game but since I'm heavily reworking them to make them better they're not all here yet.
However, the influence grind is completely removed and most scenes are new, I think you'll have a great time by starting the game again.

 

[RandyPhoenix]

I'm currently including old scenes back in the game but since I'm heavily reworking them to make them better they're not all here yet.
However, the influence grind is completely removed and most scenes are new, I think you'll have a great time by starting the game again.

I was waiting for rework to end for starting, if it didn't ended I will wait until it ends, don't want any save problems, bugged saves, etc.