Just finished 1.3, man, I don't know how you do it, this level of quality ASCENDS renpy! Cutscenes are awesome!
I don't know when you would add Anna content again but I'm just gonna drop some suggestions since our kinks inventory seem to match up! Although I believe you are probably planning on expansion of afternoon Anna content with the sexy clothing, I'm curious if you are considering to add some moves prior to the sex scenes to increase the depiction of dominance, like you did with Alice (thumb in mouth), hairpulling, sucking breasts, kissing/biting the neck, maybe dominant/forceful kiss to lips. It could be a process where the switch could be subtle like from her original position (which is I find sexy as hell with her looking to you) you choose to grope than camera shifts(pans?) a bit to ass, tits, neck/breasts, then you gradually progress it to the sex scene. I am aware of the "surprise" effect you are aiming for with the blackscreen but feels like there's so much more potential there. Might be implemented as the "after first time" variation or progression. I also hope you are considering pregnancy for the future, it's breathtaking to even imagine seeing Anna pregnant in that costume.
Great job man! You are a goddamn oasis in a desert!
Edit:
So, how were the Lucie rambo and 1v1 with Laura cinematics guys ?
I need your feedbacks.
I saw this after I posted lol. I almost feel like we are linked!