Ren'Py Life's Payback [v2.3] [Vinkawa]

[RanceismyRoleModel]

I'd argue that the narrative so far only serves to somehow connect the sex scenes and make the girls distinguishable and rarely goes beyond that function. There are some attempts at storytelling with the cat girl background and Lucie's retribution arc, but they are not very well written IMO. If you're satisfied with the current quality of the script - that's fine, and yes, it's a porn game and the writing is totally appropriate for this medium. But from where I am standing it could use some improvements, tho doesn't need to.

Meh I would argue for the story side that most girls story have barely started, so it kinda to soon to give an unbiased judgement. Especially since at the start vink kinda just wanted excuse to animate sex scene but he seem to have changed his view on that these last months and he actually trying his best to make somethings entertaining in a record time. which in my opinion he doing more than well. His Mc a change of fresh air and I appreciate his unhinged way instead of an aneurysm inducing Mc that every girls fall in love with for no reason like Ai revolution. As his undisputed biggest supporter it his hard for me to be completely unbiased but if you’re tired of reading boring VN that trying way to hard to be “deep” with a few crumb of porn there and there and want a good unhinged corruption game with dark humor and excellent animation LP is the best in the market RN

 

[Xx_Gamerdad-69_xX]

Meh I would argue for the story side that most girls story have barely started, so it kinda to soon to give an unbiased judgement. Especially since at the start vink kinda just wanted excuse to animate sex scene but he seem to have changed his view on that these last months and he actually trying his best to make somethings entertaining in a record time. which in my opinion he doing more than well. His Mc a change of fresh air and I appreciate his unhinged way instead of an aneurysm inducing Mc that every girls fall in love with for no reason like Ai revolution. As his undisputed biggest supporter it his hard for me to be completely unbiased but if you’re tired of reading boring VN that trying way to hard to be “deep” with a few crumb of porn there and there and want a good unhinged corruption game with dark humor and excellent animation LP is the best in the market RN

I'm not saying that this project should feature deep shakespearean story with crumbs of porn, I quite liked the game for what it is, however many negatives I've encountered. What I'm saying is that people who specifically look for this kind of experience should probably look elsewhere. As for "kinda to soon to give an unbiased judgement", I mean, I've no clue about the dev's napoleonic plans for the future, but I don't think it's too soon.

 

[RanceismyRoleModel]

I'm not saying that this project should feature deep shakespearean story with crumbs of porn, I quite liked the game for what it is, however many negatives I've encountered. What I'm saying is that people who specifically look for this kind of experience should probably look elsewhere. As for "kinda to soon to give an unbiased judgement", I mean, I've no clue about the dev's napoleonic plans for the future, but I don't think it's too soon.

Then it not a negative then. If you want a slow burn VN like eternum then obviously LP is not for you but if you want a quick but pack with erotic goody and unhinged humorous sandbox then LP it what you searching for. Would you critique Mario for not having gore ? Obviously no. same thing apply here

 

[Xx_Gamerdad-69_xX]

Then it not a negative then. If you want a slow burn VN like eternum then obviously LP is not for you but if you want a quick but pack with erotic goody and unhinged humorous sandbox then LP it what you searching for. Would you critique Mario for not having gore ? Obviously no. same thing apply here

This is a sandbox VN where the whole gameplay is reading text and looking at the quest log. If you spend half the playtime reading words then it's something worth discussing, no? The Mario gore comparison is inappropriate. The fair critique here would be if Mario levels didn't have any enemies.

 

[Vinkawa]

This is a sandbox VN where the whole gameplay is reading text and looking at the quest log. If you spend half the playtime reading words then it's something worth discussing, no? The Mario gore comparison is inappropriate. The fair critique here would be if Mario levels didn't have any enemies.

Let's not compare my writing with the devs giving 2 crappy animations every 2 months.
If I took enough time to properly develop the story you wouldn't have had 80+ animations in less than a year.
I'm literally the only solo dev who has delivered that many animations, that the porn industry has ever witnessed. Like for real, you can't quote me a single dev that has delivered as much content in a year as I did, except Wildlife who's a team of dozen of people.
I obviously have to sacrifice the story from the workload.
You want well written and polished characters? Fine.
But then you'd have 25 animations at best, instead of 80. You cannot have everything.

 

[RanceismyRoleModel]

This is a sandbox VN where the whole gameplay is reading text and looking at the quest log. If you spend half the playtime reading words then it's something worth discussing, no? The Mario gore comparison is inappropriate. The fair critique here would be if Mario levels didn't have any enemies.

then my point still stand. I like the direct more quicker more focused on erotic content with some dry humour added to it then something like à slow burn with “branching choice” and light humour like once in a lifetime have. Doesn’t mean you don’t like it that it unbiased bad

 

[N3M3S1S69]

prob with harem games, you have to wait tell there done in my opinion.. all the shit I want to se either is not finished or gated.. good luck ill look in next year.

 

[RanceismyRoleModel]

Don't listen or even read those comments! They are ungrateful cock-sucking pieces of turd you can find in men's bathroom. They just want to rant because they know they can't find a good animator like you instead of waiting 3-5 months to get low quality shit in other games. They want you and their "favorite" game to have the same quality of animations especially in h scenes which is impossible because only you can do that. Tbh, take my advice Vink and solely focus on your masterpiece at the moment. Ignore those comments that only gives negative criticism that doesn't even help at all

I know it rich coming from me but let’s not exaggerate things. Dude his actually one of the few that made a a decent review of the game in this goddamn forsaken site full of retard, I just don’t agree on a few things like the writing being shit that all and was having a friendly debates over it. Calling him a piece of shit doesn’t prove our point at all and just makes us look bad. Also reading the true hater comments is amusing and entertaining and his one of our favorite pastimes in the discord

 

[Ferlucio]

A lot can be said about the game but most of all WTF are those fight scenes??? funny AF and kinda good in a jank way. way too high effort for fight scenes in a porn game but i ain't gonna complain

 

[MotorcycleU]

8.6 GB! WTH?!

 

[dragarblaze]

yeah I think im stupid:

is there anything missing here?

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why one of the circles is white?

what game is this

 

[RanceismyRoleModel]

what game is this

This one maybe ?!?

 

[dragarblaze]

This one maybe ?!?

I dont recognize that interface or some of the characters

 

[RanceismyRoleModel]

I dont recognize that interface or some of the characters

Play the new update then
Or don’t
I don’t care

 

[Hexonthezone]

Are the dojo are scenes incomplete? cuz I got all green circles and Laura's quest isn't progressing indicating in clues that I still need to complete all dojo scenes.

 

[milf.love.milf]

8.6 GB! WTH?!

because it's fight game, bro. scense so good ...

 

[Ferlucio]

One thing got me curious: Why're the girls so afraid of him cumming in their ass while not giving a fuck if he cums in the pussy? Is that some kind of a joke I'm not french enough to understand?

 

[♂Brout&Minou♀]

Hi there,

When I press the “F” key to switch to full screen, the image starts flashing. Am I the only one with this problem? Note that my PC runs perfectly with all versions of Ren'Py without any issues, but now the screen is acting like a Christmas light display, which isn't great, especially in August. Any idea what might be causing this problem?

Life's Payback [v2.1.1] [Vinkawa]

Edit: Just the HDMI cord that was not properly inserted

 

[♂Brout&Minou♀]

Vinkawa ?

So... I heard you're here to make friends? Ah.... The French and their big mouths

Je suis sure que ça va marcher.... Un jour... Peut-être

 

[Vinkawa]

Vinkawa ?

So... I heard you're here to make friends? Ah.... The French and their big mouths
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Je suis sure que ça va marcher.... Un jour... Peut-être

Just stating facts through my game.