Ren'Py Life's Payback [v2.3] [Vinkawa]

[Vinkawa]

Hey man, just don't respond to the people who aren't interested in some of the things you work on in your games. Some people don't care for certain things and that's all good. Just keep doing what you wanna do with your games, some people will skip it, some will appreciate it, what matters is that you put out work that you're happy with. So far you have a generally higher quality game than a lot of games on this site and you have a very consistent and frequent release cadence that's to be respected. It'd just suck if over time you start to let these people get to you because it's non-stop hate that's met with antagonism and then it ends up driving you to slowing down significantly or altogether quitting. Appreciation is a huge component in keeping up the drive to keep going and feeding into negativity does the exact opposite.

You might have the will to deal with that feedback in the way that you are for now but everyone has a limit with this sort of stuff. I hope you don't take this comment in a bad way, I'm just trying to look out for you more than anything. I just want to see your already good work get even better as time goes on rather than just be another dev that eventually will "inexplicably" disappear.

Hi dude, thank you for all your kind words about the quality of my work.

I appreciate your concern, but don't worry for me.
To shit on haters like him has become part of my workflow, and will never make me want to leave F95. I love this website.

Also, it doesn't do me any harm, quite the contrary.
All this insignificant moron is doing is to get me more subs :

 

[Mxiio]

Vinkawa thanks for a new patch, yet again it's great
While I may not be partial to the girls who got new scenes, the replayability of messing with my teacher who's been drugged or something by her kid is never ending

 

[Kriegher]

the game is soooo good, i really like it, all the animation are well done, but sometimes are repetitive, i would like more position and maybe some footjobs

 

[Kriegher]

I downloaded the android version, you did a brilliant job, you found a solution to the problem of not being able to install too large apk, never seen on other games, good job

 

[mypossiblepast]

rent free in his head xD

 

[Vinkawa]

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rent free in his head xD

Hahaha, you did exactly what I thought you'd do, put the DM in the thread, you're so predictable.
You'd think haters would be original, but you're just another random.

You forgot to put the whole screenshot btw. Or maybe you hide the interesting part on purpose ?

 

[YouShallNotLol]

Quite simple: I'm a boobs man. And I love to look directly at the face of the woman I'm fucking.

Also, new vaginal scenes, let's go.

 

[Vinkawa]

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Quite simple: I'm a boobs man. And I love to look directly at the face of the woman I'm fucking.

Also, new vaginal scenes, let's go.

Hahaha, fair enough.

I hope you liked the pussy actions. I tried to add some diversity to the sex positions this time.

 

[YouShallNotLol]

Hahaha, fair enough.

I hope you liked the pussy actions. I tried to add some diversity to the sex positions this time.

Yes, more diversity is certainly appreciated. "Variety is the spice of life" as they say.

About the cinematics:

So, how were the Lucie rambo and 1v1 with Laura cinematics guys ?

I need your feedbacks.

They're good. Production value is quite high. I've only seen one other Ren'Py game that tried to do something similar.

 

[damn]

I don't think in all my years having an account on this site that I have ever commented but I need to say that this dev is doing a generational run with all these updates. Seeing this game pop up so often while other games take months for a quarter of the content is such a nice treat. (nvm I guess at some other point I may have commented before elsewhere oops)

 

[Shikipt]

After doing the last patch quests for Laura and Lucie I was wondering why some people wanted to skip the video scene...

Now their definition of skipping might be not the same I am going to say like skipping the whole thing because you don't want to watch but enabling the skip after you seen it once.

Reason:

Laura scene end with you having 4 possible endings for when you cum. Well since this can be repeatable I want to see all 4 outcomes but that is where the skip cutscene could be enable after you seen once skip for the 4 options and resume game.

Since is possible you might do similar stuff like this in the future I leave here the suggestion of skipping those scenes after you seen it once if you wish and is a repeatable quest.

On other note, you wasted the opportunity to make Laura stay through the night for night sessions until morning with a wake up blowjob or something or maybe that might end to be a extension for one of her next steps xD
And it would be funny to see that with the mother going to wake you up and see that leading for more scenes possibilities.

 

[cuzimhavingagoodtime]

Yo Vinkawa, some friendly advice: In English, punctuation never has a space before it.

Wrong:

"Is this sentence written correctly ?"

Right:

"This one is actually written correctly!"


This should actually be extremely simple to fix, with like, basic Find and Replace. I think you could really improve how polished and well-written the text feels with extremely little effort.

 

[Vinkawa]

Yo Vinkawa, some friendly advice: In English, punctuation never has a space before it.

Wrong:

"Is this sentence written correctly ?"

Right:

"This one is actually written correctly!"


This should actually be extremely simple to fix, with like, basic Find and Replace. I think you could really improve how polished and well-written the text feels with extremely little effort.

Yo dude.

I'm French, this is how we write it there.
I know the game isn't in French, but since the game will have several language translations, and that other languages have the same space than we have, I'll keep it this way not to have to make different punctuation spaces regarding the selected language.

 

[cuzimhavingagoodtime]

Yo dude.

I'm French, this is how we write it there.
I know the game isn't in French, but since the game will have several language translations, and that other languages have the same space than we have, I'll keep it this way not to have to make different punctuation spaces regarding the selected language.

I admit I'm confused! Why would how punctuation is used in the English script have any effect whatsoever on how it's used in the French script. When you have to translate an English sentence into French, It doesn't help if the question mark already has the space before it, because you have to type out the whole sentence from scratch anyways. Because all the words have to be changed into French ones!

 

[Vinkawa]

I admit I'm confused! Why would how punctuation is used in the English script have any effect whatsoever on how it's used in the French script. When you have to translate an English sentence into French, It doesn't help if the question mark already has the space before it, because you have to type out the whole sentence from scratch anyways. Because all the words have to be changed into French ones!

Yeah true, looks like I'm tired from the number of hours I've put into the last update.
So let's just say I didn't have time to bother with minor details.
I'll try to do it for the v1.4

 

[draag35]

I have a few questions for the creator .
first if you made the choice is Nina a futa now or not the first scene is futa the second is mouth on pussy
second is futa Nina created as a revenge path against the asshole of a mc it is clear the (step)sister liked being fucked by Nina bigger cock then the mc so will Nina do the same too other characters for fun or revenge against mc

thank you for your time and game the artwork is also great and very well done

 

[Neurasiatic]

Vinkawa: Born to animate fight scenes, forced to make pornography.

Jokes aside I do quite like these scenes, they're well choreographed and they're a unique addition I rarely see in other games here, especially with the quality that they are (poor fight scenes are a bit more common but also make me roll my eyes with how predictable and boring to watch they tend to be). Certainly spices up the story between the lewd scenes, which is very nice.

In terms of the story this update I am actually really glad Lucie betrayed us, as that allowed us to put her in her place without feeling a shred of remorse. Hope she continues to pay the price in future updates!

 

[Vinkawa]

After doing the last patch quests for Laura and Lucie I was wondering why some people wanted to skip the video scene...

Now their definition of skipping might be not the same I am going to say like skipping the whole thing because you don't want to watch but enabling the skip after you seen it once.

Reason:

Laura scene end with you having 4 possible endings for when you cum. Well since this can be repeatable I want to see all 4 outcomes but that is where the skip cutscene could be enable after you seen once skip for the 4 options and resume game.

Since is possible you might do similar stuff like this in the future I leave here the suggestion of skipping those scenes after you seen it once if you wish and is a repeatable quest.

On other note, you wasted the opportunity to make Laura stay through the night for night sessions until morning with a wake up blowjob or something or maybe that might end to be a extension for one of her next steps xD
And it would be funny to see that with the mother going to wake you up and see that leading for more scenes possibilities.

This is just a personal signature.

A cinematic is never skippable the first update it was released in, and the skip button is only added the next version.
It has always been like this. The school's roof fight and Laura's home one were only skippable the next version.
It's like "That Lucie's betrayal scene took me a while so you'll watch it."
No ever complained except F95, a classic I would say.
I added a "Back to sex position menu" so you could see all the animation without having to replay the fight.

Also, I didn't waste any opportunity with what could have happened the next morning in Laura scenes.
I don't think you properly realize the amount of scenes I've delivered in 14 days, including two cinematics.
I just didn't have time to extend this to the morning.

I have a few questions for the creator .
first if you made the choice is Nina a futa now or not the first scene is futa the second is mouth on pussy
second is futa Nina created as a revenge path against the asshole of a mc it is clear the (step)sister liked being fucked by Nina bigger cock then the mc so will Nina do the same too other characters for fun or revenge against mc

thank you for your time and game the artwork is also great and very well done

As you can see, Nina has female genitals in all her renders since the begining.
Avoiding the Futa scene will just never let the fantasy universe plot step in your playthrough to explain how it is possible.

Vinkawa: Born to animate fight scenes, forced to make pornography.

Jokes aside I do quite like these scenes, they're well choreographed and they're a unique addition I rarely see in other games here, especially with the quality that they are (poor fight scenes are a bit more common but also make me roll my eyes with how predictable and boring to watch they tend to be). Certainly spices up the story between the lewd scenes, which is very nice.

In terms of the story this update I am actually really glad Lucie betrayed us, as that allowed us to put her in her place without feeling a shred of remorse. Hope she continues to pay the price in future updates!

I'm glad you liked it !
I think I have a good plot for Lucie, but that will have to wait a few updates now, I need to focus on other characters.

 

[Sacmau0500]

I like this game,just weird and very weird.I see some reviewer stupid didn't even see tag "rape" and want corruption without mindcontrol blackmail,nrt...,ask gallery,skip animation,high 4k,bla bla bla in free game even not beta yet.
Keep continue story Vinkawa,don't mind them,they just want life payback after living out there

 

[Shikipt]

This is just a personal signature.

A cinematic is never skippable the first update it was released in, and the skip button is only added the next version.
It has always been like this. The school's roof fight and Laura's home one were only skippable the next version.
It's like "That Lucie's betrayal scene took me a while so you'll watch it."
No ever complained except F95, a classic I would say.
I added a "Back to sex position menu" so you could see all the animation without having to replay the fight.

Also, I didn't waste any opportunity with what could have happened the next morning in Laura scenes.
I don't think you properly realize the amount of scenes I've delivered in 14 days, including two cinematics.
I just didn't have time to extend this to the morning.

Ah so it is like that? I never noticed because all other cutscenes didn't have any other outcome with choice like this one.

I watch everything anyway but when I was going to do the next ending of those choices I couldn't fast forward so I had to wait. And no I noticed you had back to sex position true but the cum part is exclusive and end there. So I need to repeat same process other 3 times to see all end scene with cum on other options. I like to see all options or outcomes of every scene even if I need to repeat several times.

I know you put good effort and etc but seems you didn't have time to extend it. The way you said that about next morning tell me you aren't denying my suggestion which is a good thing. So maybe in future we may see something like that who knows

Have a nice week!