Ren'Py Life's Payback [v2.3] [Vinkawa]

[Nearphotison]

Which quest?
She is still the same even though i have tried everything

View attachment 5161532

Sorry if this is presumptive, but I'm getting the impression you're confusing Anna and Alice. Try doing the quests of Alice, your sister. Check the hints for her and progress her first, that seems to be what you need to do.

 

[ArmpitL1cker]

Which quest?
She is still the same even though i have tried everything

View attachment 5161532

my guy that is Anna not Alice learn to read plz

 

[sexyegg]

We must be approaching the next update no? Any news on character or release?

 

[RanceismyRoleModel]

We must be approaching the next update no? Any news on character or release?

SECRET !
DIBU DUBU DABA LUBA DABA DU DA BI JI KI CBLABLALABLALAB ITS A SECRET
PABUDUBU CIBUDU PAPABU CIBUDUD PAPUBABU CIBUBU BLULULU BLULULU
DIBI DUP BIP BAP DRILILI DRADRI PIDRABABIDI PAP PAP DIBI
DUBUDU DABUDU DUBU DABDUBU DBDB PSS ITS A SECRET !

 

[michael15956]

Tremenda obra maestra 100/10 y god
Con todo afan de alagar

 

[Rhxthm]

Man, You know you can... hire someone on fiver to get a better storyline than this one. Good animations and models tho, but jesus the MC has zero rizz and has to rape his way into anyones pants. Sad.

 

[Vinkawa]

Man, You know you can... hire someone on fiver to get a better storyline than this one. Good animations and models tho, but jesus the MC has zero rizz and has to rape his way into anyones pants. Sad.

Why would I hire someone for the writing after making a game knowing a stellar success?

That means people are fine with my story, could even actually love it, and you belong to the minority who doesn't.

F95 really attracts limited people, I don't know. Sees blackmail/maledom/corruption/sleep in the tags, but was expecting the MC to use fair tools and romance to achieve his goals.

 

[ArmpitL1cker]

Man, You know you can... hire someone on fiver to get a better storyline than this one. Good animations and models tho, but jesus the MC has zero rizz and has to rape his way into anyones pants. Sad.

you were dropped on the head a few times as a kid weren't ya

 

[Rhxthm]

you were dropped on the head a few times as a kid weren't ya

Dude this game has some of the *worst* writing I think I've ever encountered, The rape stuff is just kinda boring because the girls are passed out half the time, whats the fun in that. But the writing? Good god the writing, I know its a porn game so i'm expecting it to be bad but Jesus Christ its so bad. Just give the MC a weird mcguffin mind control power or something, or let him see into their minds to see what they want. Would solve a lot of the story feeling super weird. Hell, it already feels like he has some weird mind control thats just not listed in the game.

 

[ArmpitL1cker]

Dude this game has some of the *worst* writing I think I've ever encountered, The rape stuff is just kinda boring because the girls are passed out half the time, whats the fun in that. But the writing? Good god the writing, I know its a porn game so i'm expecting it to be bad but Jesus Christ its so bad. Just give the MC a weird mcguffin mind control power or something, or let him see into their minds to see what they want. Would solve a lot of the story feeling super weird. Hell, it already feels like he has some weird mind control thats just not listed in the game.

The writings completely fine let some joy and whimsy into life and not be a negative bitch about shit, and it's a rape game so people gonna get raped, some people like the passed out scenes i know it's hard to believe but not everything is made for you go find another game that is to your tastes instead of crying that this one isn't

 

[Rhxthm]

I'm allowed to give criticism. Overall the game is good, But was a writer myself (successful, i do it for a living) I feel compelled to say something. It does get better as the story goes but its still very strange and could be fixed fairly easily. You could write the rape into the story about how MC needs to cum on or in them for them to get addicted to it or something instead of them randomly falling in love after him raping them. Also yeah idc about the rape stuff, just saying its boring that they are always unconscious for it. Why give the MC a magnum dong if they arent even gonna feel it half the time?

 

[ArmpitL1cker]

I'm allowed to give criticism. Overall the game is good, But was a writer myself (successful, i do it for a living) I feel compelled to say something. It does get better as the story goes but its still very strange and could be fixed fairly easily. You could write the rape into the story about how MC needs to cum on or in them for them to get addicted to it or something instead of them randomly falling in love after him raping them. Also yeah idc about the rape stuff, just saying its boring that they are always unconscious for it. Why give the MC a magnum dong if they arent even gonna feel it half the time?

if i were to guess there are unconscious scenes because the dev has a kink for sleep sex strange I know

 

[Vinkawa]

I'm allowed to give criticism. Overall the game is good, But was a writer myself (successful, i do it for a living) I feel compelled to say something. It does get better as the story goes but its still very strange and could be fixed fairly easily. You could write the rape into the story about how MC needs to cum on or in them for them to get addicted to it or something instead of them randomly falling in love after him raping them. Also yeah idc about the rape stuff, just saying its boring that they are always unconscious for it. Why give the MC a magnum dong if they arent even gonna feel it half the time?

Bro chill there are more than 80 animations and scenes in the game, and the drug stuff isn't even 15% of it, just enjoy the rest of the game.

I'm fine with my writing, I'm not Ernest Hemingway, but not a monkey neither.
Sometimes this is good and inspired, sometime this is weak.

Also if the writing isn't my strongest skill, you don't need to spend hours on the game to find what my strongest skill is.

 

[ArmpitL1cker]

Bro chill there are more than 80 animations and scenes in the game, and the drug stuff isn't even 15% of it, just enjoy the rest of the game.

I'm fine with my writing, I'm not Ernest Hemingway, but not a monkey neither.
Sometimes this is good and inspired, sometime this is weak.

Also if the writing isn't my strongest skill, you don't need to spend hours on the game to find what my strongest skill is.

your strongest skill is animating assjobs... oh wait

 

[Rhxthm]

Bro chill there are more than 80 animations and scenes in the game, and the drug stuff isn't even 15% of it, just enjoy the rest of the game.

I'm fine with my writing, I'm not Ernest Hemingway, but not a monkey neither.
Sometimes this is good and inspired, sometime this is weak.

Also if the writing isn't my strongest skill, you don't need to spend hours on the game to find what my strongest skill is.

Nah, you are super talented in making models and animations. You know that. I don't need to stroke your ego there, Good game so far, just giving actual (in my opinion- valid) criticisms where I see flaws. I'd ask for anyone else to do that for me if I was in your place.

 

[Vinkawa]

Nah, you are super talented in making models and animations. You know that. I don't need to stroke your ego there, Good game so far, just giving actual (in my opinion- valid) criticisms where I see flaws. I'd ask for anyone else to do that for me if I was in your place.

Yeah, I don't have any issue with this, but once again the only objective metric to judge whether the story is good enough for the majority, is the growth of the financial support. Or it's at least more valuable as a data to use regarding the success of the story than a random guy on F95.
So according to the support, so far I'm doing great.

 

[lokoki1]

I'm allowed to give criticism. Overall the game is good, But was a writer myself (successful, i do it for a living) I feel compelled to say something. It does get better as the story goes but its still very strange and could be fixed fairly easily. You could write the rape into the story about how MC needs to cum on or in them for them to get addicted to it or something instead of them randomly falling in love after him raping them. Also yeah idc about the rape stuff, just saying its boring that they are always unconscious for it. Why give the MC a magnum dong if they arent even gonna feel it half the time?

it's just a BDE, Big Dick Energy of MC, that makes them addicted. Story is not that great, it's more like setup for more great Rape Scenes. I don't think there are a lot of people that play Lifes Payback for "Story", as there are much much better AVN's or even other games for that, but what Vinkawa makes different and why this game is succesfull are Scenes, mostly types of Scenes(good rape is rare), Animations and Faces.

 

[Hunjin]

But was a writer myself (successful, i do it for a living) I feel compelled to say something.

How are you successful if we never heard of you?

 

[Yoshikagekira13]

Mods o console comands?

 

[NazrT]

How are you successful if we never heard of you?

I mean in their defence, a popular writer isn't going to publicly announce to their audience "Hey check out my F95zone account where I download porn games!"